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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 80)

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
hayeee that was one heck of an adorable update, fantastic chapter! nalan is a blessing!

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:23pm | IP Logged

Arnav…..Arnav…..Arnav…..that guy may like  hearing his name from her pretty mouth, he is in danger if she has that effect on him.

She did not anticipate a flour fight when she entered the kitchen, did she? Bloody cute and here I was half expecting my overdue lunch prepared by none other than Raizada……….maybe after the bath.

For all her 'I may care a damn about you', she is so affected….so bloody much and would not want to be subject to any vicious gossip by being found in the arms of a stranger…..Nalan may find all this very funny….the repercussions she does fear.

Poor Kashi…..to be crying a few minutes ago and this….the combination of fear of being caught and the fear of that something else will scare anyone and Kashi is a good enough candidate for that.

I loved the update, both still stuck with their preconceived notion of each other. He expects her to run away and her expecting him to throw her in water. Were the two so deeply affected by each other's moments, Kashi's expression of grief and Arnav in the kitchen with Nalan? They were I guess

Tides have changed and there may just be more bathing and kitchen fights.

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
I dont know if im the only one or not but I feel like every one of your sentences and choice of words contains a double meaning...not in a bad way...it's just that I feel like I should read it twice just in case I've missed something or anything as your writing is very lush. I think it's quite a feat...

Loved the chapter...I think they're both allergic to love in this ff as opposed to the usual where only ASR exhibits the necessary symptoms.

The presence of Nalan is quite different and frankly very unexpected. Because in any other ff, it would've been just Arnav and Khushi in such a situation. So thats something to think about...

PS I loved the fact that you incorporated that blowing air in the eye thing with your own style :)

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
awesome chapter it was full of innocence loved the flour playing very cute  loved how their changing relationship without realizing it and loved how nalan in his own way are showing each other their is more behind the facade they have put up beautiful update awesome

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Oh. Hell. Yeah.

I think my heart just grew amd expanded. Seeing them like this makes me grin like a fool! :)

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Wow this was the lighter of your updates so far...but described how they are both starting to affect each other...it is funny how I feel that he must have been staying for a month or so and then I realize that the story is just evolving at such a pace...I like where this is going...I like seeing them affected by each otherWink and how they are dealing with it.

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
Hmmm so I was reading the previous notes from other people and maybe you have answered this before. You described Kashi, and now Nalan-and by the way, he is the perfect Nalan- but how would Arnav look like if you don't mind me asking?

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:56pm | IP Logged

D, 

I read it half way and was so engrossed in it that my kid missed his school bus and I had to go to the school to drop him. So neither did I read it fully nor could I get back to it fast. 

Now my request. I know you don't take requests but this one is from the heart. I want this to be given to a movie maker so that I can actually see this on screen. But then whom would I trust to bring out the fun and the sadness and guilt and the tears and the anxiety and the twinkle and the flour so perfectly on screen. I guess nobody. So I will just go back and read this again and again. 

You made my day today. Thank you.

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