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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 66)

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
wow it was so sweet, Nalan telling her that he would marry her...this boy really moves my heart!!
And how she has understood Arnav is just 36 hours is commendable, its true...Arnav wants to prove he doesnt need anything...but now Nalan is his weakness, she is right!
The sense of belonging that she feels so beautifully described by you...the house, the stories, the myths, even the elusive ghosts, everything theirs to cherish or admonish...but all of it is theirs...so to lose it all...wow...I can feel her pain.

Love, Devi..you are on a roll...two updates...right after your vacation...
We are benefiting from your vacation..

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
beautiful !!!!!!

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
This is such a beautiful story. I have been a silent reader of your work for some time now. The oldest story was the first fanfic I read on IF and fell in love with your writing. I had been looking for your work on IPK for a while now and was so excited to find Lavender but this story is just something else. It is poetic, mystic, sad yet beautiful. Whenever I read it I am transported to a different world. Thank u for being such an amazing writer and bringing such beautiful stories to us.

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Nalan is awesome!!! And that tableau of Arnav at the stove, with Nalan nearby, Khushi just entering the kitchen - they could be a family :-) Nalan and Khushi would make a cute couple Wink

So Arnav and Khushi have both started to understand each other better...cannot wait to see how that progresses. But her analysis of Arnav right now is spot on - he is a bit of an existentialist with an appreciation for but not dependence on creature comforts. I wonder how the stalemate regarding the house end or even if it will considering they have just deep set immutable opinions about it...?

I completely agree with a comment written previously: you create a genuine ambiance with your words. The characters' feelings, the mood and the atmosphere created by the surroundings resonate so truthfully. I FELT Khushi's pain in the last chapter...in this chapter I could feel her trying to claw her way back to normalcy, to not cry and just get through the day. Brava to your writing!!

And yayy!! another chapter - I hope your muse continues to be productive!! LOL




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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
wow.. someone who does not believe in fate.. someone who will love her for herself..
someone who will love nalan like a little brother..
the puli kutty is here!!Dancing

how can you infuse such a sad chapter with such hope?
beautiful writing, as always.Clap

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
such a beautiful update... especially Nalan, he is so sweet... wish i have a little brother like him!

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
D this chapter is sheer brilliance. Such empathy these three share despite the facades they project and the masks they wear, at least ASR and Kashi do, is beautiful to see.
I love Nalan, he is a gem and you brought tears to my eyes with this.
Hopefully prophetic words were said when Nalan and Kashi spoke.

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nalan is a sweetheart... :)

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