Okay seriously I am stumped. Wow. Just wow. I am completely bowled over by your story. The twist and turns, absolutely magnificent. One stellar piece of fiction. Hats off to you woman!
I really can't analyse anything right because I am trying to wrap my head around it. Going to reread the last two chapters and then maybe i might add something. But seriously, well done! :D
Okay I just want to add something. Pallavi as a character has caught my attention. The conversation between her and Arnav was entertaining to read. I hope you include a bit more of her in the story.
Edited by nimra21 - 11 years ago