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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
It seems like arnav just cnt keep his hands off her n he seems so comfortable wid it !!!
I cnt believe dey had dis whole talk wid khushi in arnav's arms n dnt realise dat its odd :P

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"Who did they sell the place to?"  he asked in a low voice.

She looked back at him now. 

"You."...UH-OH.

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
wow...the story is getting very intrested...
i really feel very sad...when she told that..pallavis fianc dead b4 their marriage... people said that she wud kill her husband after marriage ...
n i love the tips arnav used at her to make her feel...
really he is very cunning...
i lov ur updates...
 


Edited by -vaidehi- - 07 August 2012 at 12:08pm

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
I'm sorry. I totally respect all cultures and traditions with thier own beliefs but when those exact things set about to ruin someone's life, I can't stand by it. I know it's not the beliefs that do the dirty work it's the people who can't differtiate between faith and stupidity. Calling them man-eaters...really?

The only reason Arnav is surviving in their house is because of his infamous anger which clouds any other emotion, besides desire ofcouse, in his brain.

I bet right now there is a huge bucket of guilt hanging over his head just waiting to fall...almost there but not quite. Will have to wait till the next update to find out.

Your writing is mesmerizing :)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
that was mind-blowing!!! 

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
OH MY GOD! Is the great ruthless business minded ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA exhibiting FEELINGS now? wow! that was one hell of an update! its really unbelievable how there are so many tragedies iin the same family!

"My
poor sister. I am destined to kill my
husband after I marry him. She
killed hers before. At least that's
what people say. Makes us both
sound quite the man-eaters, doesn't
it?"

for me this dialogue was the higlight of this update! spot on and freaking brilliant

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -publicenemy-

Originally posted by lexaxel

Originally posted by lexaxel

It was intenseSmile!!!!! Loved it!!!!
[I dont have much clue abt horrorscopes but desperately hoping Arnav also has chovva dosham[only way they can get married right], please tell us he doesTongue]

Congratulations on the new thread!!!!

U knw the more I thought abt it I was convinced Arnav was also a manglik. So I came back to read the chapter once again & found wht I was looking forBig smile.

"Are you playing games with me?"  he asked, his voice dropping an octave, before it climbed back up to convey his rage.  "Is that what this is?  Your father had me investigated and invited me out here to mind-f**k me with his unattainable daughter who is convinced that she is possessed of magic?  Is that what this is about?"

Am I right or not*triumphantly*Party?????

Aaah, I do so love my readers... hehe... how you all figure a way around this manglik thing... 

But... But...

This is the full conversation that you referred to above:
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""There are enough tragedies to be had loving those you can't help but love.  I have never particularly felt the compunction to add another layer of complication to my life by loving someone new.  Don't you agree?"  she stopped and looked at him.

He pushed away from the wood at his back, fighting a feeling of pressure climbing up his belly and into his chest. 

Was the witch f**king with him?

"Are you playing games with me?"  he asked, his voice dropping an octave, before it climbed back up to convey his rage.  "Is that what this is?  Your father had me investigated and invited me out here to mind-f**k me with his unattainable daughter who is convinced that she is possessed of magic?  Is that what this is about?"

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He thinks she is talking about him (well, that it is a veiled reference to how he is and what he has been through), which is why he becomes angry and accuses her father of investigating him.


P.S.  Do you think Arnav would really know even if he is Manglik?  And can you see him caring enough about the whole thing to find out?  ;)


-Devi 




@Red - From what I know, in India if one is a Hindu he/she cant escape this horoscope reading...it happens with or without their consent. Arnav may not believe in hororscopes...scratch that, Arnav believes horoscopes are utter crap but he will not forget a detail[that he is manglik] like that and its connotations.

@Blue -  Aaah I get that now. I may have attempted a postgraduation in Eng Lit but somehow I doubt I'm grasping the nuances in your story in the manner you are penning it. That's right, I'm totally superficial that wayLOL

Jokes apart I'm enjoying the plot, the narration and your writing styleSmile.
 



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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Amazing update..!!!:D

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