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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 26)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
suddenly, i am feeling as angry as arnav and as sad as kashi...

damn! 

but lovely update. 

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Too many tragedies in one place...Cry

How many more revelations are left...i dont think he can take any more nowWink

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Wow, this is turning out to be one riveting and thrilling tale. Absolutely hooked!

So he saw Kashi's aunt's ghost and it  didn't seem unusual to Kashi. And he saw a dream with Shivan and Anjali. I wonder what this all means. 

Man-eaters? The poor girls. And I think Arnav is correct about her  to some extent. She is bitter about the attitude she and her sister have been subjected to by the village folk and hence is channelling out all the built in resentment towards Arnav. And I understand that. 

One thing I love about this story is that you keep throwing twists at us and I have no idea where you are planning to take it next. So brilliant job! :)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
I feel so sad for Kashi's sister. So sad. That combined with the bloody villagers gossiping away to glory. It is a marvel the girls manage to live through that. The gossip, and then how the people being gossiped about is very harsh. Very much so. I know it. Dont ask how. I just do. =|
 
Alright, so now Arnav has a reason to feel guilty. And if after that he keeps up with the cocky things, I will kill him.
 
Actually, I won't. And that is NOT because I feel like drowning into his caramel eyes. NO WAY!!! I'm not that love sick.
 
Now... I wanted to ask you. What happened to Kashi's plan of showing Arnav that the place was not a nice place? You know, I thought that the ghost story was fabricated to freak out the shehar-ka-babu, and his phoren tareeke But, after this update, I am not so sure.
 
But that nagging suspicion is still there.
 
The understanding is growing. I can sense it. And I am happy for the duo.
 
Can I tell you how happy it makes me, when I see that you have updated. What i especially like is the essence of the humanity.
 
Can Kalarikkal House be compared to Tara? Alright, here I admit that the thought was not originally mine. I saw Kalyaani's comment, and it made me wonder.
 
Of course it can.
 
And I agree with you Devi. Rhett and Melanie's equation was a beautiful one.
 
Love,
V

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged

This is a plea, to all readers and I do so only to do justice to the story and the author. I may be out of line here, please bear with me.

Scanning through the words does not do justice to fiction nor reading the last chapter in a novel to know who killed the dog/cat/man/woman whoever. The story is like a journey and every aspect of it is important. So read the story with attention, you owe it to yourself; you are investing time while doing so. Get the names of the characters right, go back to see if you missed something and if there is something that is missing, it may be intentional and the next update may just reveal the very thing you wanted to know. Another thing try and avoid dictating terms for the progress of the story, it is all decided and no Devi does not suffer from 'God complex' she told me so herself, how you ask, in my dreams.

 

Enjoy reading it enriches you, we all agree, if the glasses we wear to thicken, there is always LASIK (just take my case, it helped me and burned a hole in my pocket while doing to)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
That is definitely very tragic, the village folks must have fed them these stupid beliefs once things turned out to be so unfortunate, I can sense that there is a lot of trouble that this family has gone through. I wonder what Arnav is gonna do about all this ~sigh~ 
Amazing update again!

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
is there no limit to superstitious 

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i love the way u write, 
very niceApprove

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