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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 16)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
The first thing that struck my mind after reading this chapter was Thom Thom Thom :D And after I saw Shobhana, the vision was complete! Ghosts, snakes, superstitions. Mr Raizada's tryst with the supernatural? You write really well! Am going to check out your other FF Lavender soon! :)

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inspiringstars Goldie

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Oh Devi, what are you doing to us sweetheart, ghosts?
Oh My God , all that was remaining in this mysterious place was the existence of ghosts, and now that is also taken care of. 
I wouldnt say I was not scared of the chapter...I hope there is no more ghost is gettiing crazier by the minute! and Mr ASR wants to buy this property. It might be Kashi's ploy to scare him away, or maybe not? 

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priya.. Senior Member

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
I love how you interwove both their past in his LAkshmi's story...where her body lay..he saw Anjali!!! Raizada is literally being mind f*ucked a place that has so much myth and history..this was bound to happen..Arnav has bitten off more than he can chew!!!!

Lakshmi ( shobhana) is beauty and grace personified...your kashi is beautiful too!!! So Arnav doesn't want to's kind of hard not to..he saw it himself...And this is just day2!!!!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:20pm | IP Logged

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
The dream was so real ... felt my breath caught in my throat ... 
Mr.Raizada is surely feeling the effects of all that he went through the whole day ... 
The reality of the situation at the Kalarikkal house has brought his past nightmares back ... 
He seems totally psyched out ... first of all the meeting with Shivan ... then meeting the mad man ... then getting to know about the astrological error ... and now the ghost of her aunt ... a look alike of Kashi ... 
wonder what else is in store for him Confused
Is his sub-conscience telling him something ? ... in the dream sequence where he is not able to save his sister (a loved one ) from the bite of the snake ... does he see Kashi and her future and the thought that he has to save her from this fate ... 
Her aunt was a beauty ... and Kashi looks like her Smile can see Raizada already bowled over ... 

( he also realises that he better save  Kashi or else the witch will haunt him all his life LOL ) 

Edited by Kishmish - 07 August 2012 at 5:30am

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daljeet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
hahahaa.tht was wonderful.aftr snake,nightmares,now arnav will have ghosts.i now surely doubt if he wud stay here for one

i had guessed it wud be lakshmi.but what made him see her????

but the essence of such beleifs n the village has been captured by you very perfectly devi.hats off.

n congrats on new thread

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Sur_10 Goldie

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
Ghosts- the only thing left... Sigh

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ashred12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
i knew it was a ghost in d start itself !!!
ROFL bechara arnav ...kaha phas gaya !!

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