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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 16)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
The dream was so real ... felt my breath caught in my throat ... 
Mr.Raizada is surely feeling the effects of all that he went through the whole day ... 
The reality of the situation at the Kalarikkal house has brought his past nightmares back ... 
He seems totally psyched out ... first of all the meeting with Shivan ... then meeting the mad man ... then getting to know about the astrological error ... and now the ghost of her aunt ... a look alike of Kashi ... 
wonder what else is in store for him Confused
Is his sub-conscience telling him something ? ... in the dream sequence where he is not able to save his sister (a loved one ) from the bite of the snake ... does he see Kashi and her future and the thought that he has to save her from this fate ... 
Her aunt was a beauty ... and Kashi looks like her Smile can see Raizada already bowled over ... 



( he also realises that he better save  Kashi or else the witch will haunt him all his life LOL ) 


Edited by Kishmish - 07 August 2012 at 5:30am

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
hahahaa.tht was wonderful.aftr snake,nightmares,now arnav will have ghosts.i now surely doubt if he wud stay here for one week.lol.

i had guessed it wud be lakshmi.but what made him see her????

but the essence of such beleifs n the village has been captured by you very perfectly devi.hats off.

n congrats on new thread

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
Ghosts- the only thing left... Sigh

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
i knew it was a ghost in d start itself !!!
ROFL bechara arnav ...kaha phas gaya !!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
WHAT IS GOING ON!! i swear to god my breathing was loud to the point of audible! 

my heart racing and i was racing to finish the part!!

what is going on? I swear to god this story just becomes more and more interesting and more and more complicated!

I do love that she came to his rescue... and damn that dream meant soo many different things!

I think I should re-read slowly now and not freak out!

I do think I should repeat- YOU ARE BRILLIANT!!! 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
He saw a ghost Shocked. In one day what all he experienced. Can't wait to read more..

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
OH GOD! way to freak me out over the pictures!!!

damn that was just spot on!!! god i love you!!! even with or with out pictures your writing describes everything in such detail and perfection that I felt like I saw that dream with him... i screamed with him... 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Omg!! That was amazing! Your story is so unpredictable... I love it!!! Can't wait to read more :)

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