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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 144)

daljeet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged
loved the update.hv been stalking ur page all thses days.morning aftr i enter IF,my first job is to stalk ur page.then thot u must be bsy as it is onam.
belated onashamsakal.Smile
this update was a flashback n thanks for giving us a glimpse of unni.but then as usual im left skeptical n suspiciosu abt many things.
like how unni got initiated to drugs-mayb as he was a medical student.but then wat was the reason for him to use drugs,wich compeled him to do it.was it the dilapadated state of family or the huge responsiblity on him?
secondly his death,reason unkwn,not drugs but.wasnt it drugs?then wat was it? the mystery abt illam true for the men then?but then their father is alive all throguh now?does he practise some black magic?
devaki,ofcourse the qtn think she was just a bit different.n in those ages if a woman was different then they r ostracized by the society.i thot of shobana in agni sakshi reading devaki.but then kashi's mother's request i didnt understand the implication.
the revealation tht happened to all of them by the end of the update,i didnt follow.sorry,my mind is not tht strong to gauge such can u explain????only tht plzzz?
so was kashi's father i mean did he too beleive in all this?laksmi n devaki,did he ostracize them too?y didnt he prefer b4 to see kashi dance,bz of simi bwn lakshmi?then y tht day he wanted to see?
most of the things went abv my sorry.but i think reading it bit by bit is making it more confusing.once u reach an end im planning to read the whole thing together again.then mayb i may understand more!

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Very intense update ... 

Kashi's brother Unni only being able to see the ghost of the girl who donated her eyes to him ... Her mother wanting to name her Devaki to remove the so called curse put on their family and home by Devaki ... that if they had named Kashi by that name then maybe the curse could have been reversed  ??? 
Kashi's father feels there is more attached to the dark past of the illam which is the cause of the state they are in at present ... 

 "It's to erase the curse that we have to name her Devaki."  I didn't understand then the meaning of what she said.  I didn't give her permission either.  And thus we named you Kaveri.  And if that is not sacred enough, we also gave you the petname Kashi.
  (Now I know why she asked me what she did.) ... 

It had been an odd revelation from her father and it had put them into a reflective mood as they sat there together as a family ...

A month after that, they had brought his dead body home from the medical college.  There had been no drugs in his system.  Cause of death had been ruled unknown ... 

Kashi's brother had died under mysterious circumstances ... 
The mystery has only deepened ... Kashi a look alike of her great aunt whose ghost is seen around ... Pallavi loosing her fiance in an accident ... Kashi's faulty birth chart ...  Arnav coming to buy the property and being asked to stay for a week by the father ... 

waiting for lots more to be revealed by the master mind ... the actual Public Enemy  LOL   behind the Kalarikkal House ... 

Edited by Kishmish - 31 August 2012 at 10:20am

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duncanelise Senior Member

Joined: 26 May 2012
Posts: 385

Posted: 31 August 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
The part about Devaki really gave me the heebie jeebies, I'm dying to know why kashi's mother wanted to name her after her..
And I'm so curious to know as to what happened to her brother.
That was one hell of an intriguing update... Can't wait for next!

citi Senior Member

Joined: 25 May 2012
Posts: 599

Posted: 31 August 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged
What a chapter Devi.
One realizes that there is a downside too to all that history in one place...and that is too much history, too much of the past clouding the present and the future. To be a woman, to be different and not easily disciplined into social norms is such a curse and 150 years back the fall out would be truly dire. My heart goes out to that young 15 year old girl in a new place, with new people and being forced to submit to being something she is not. Hasn't it been the bane of such women to be branded witches. If Kashi had been named Devaki and allowed to be (as she has been) would it have lessened the burden of that time and actions of that age on the family? 
Unni saw Lakshmi and now Arnav has...what does this imply?
Such immense sadness they have had in their lives...Unni, Mr. Namboothiri, Pallavi and Kashi. Of these Unni seems to have succumbed under the weight when he could have been the one to free them all of it as he seems to have been the joy in the lives of the other three. 
Just wondering what would Arnav go through when he learns that their brother was the recipient of his sister's eyes.
D you are mesmerizing with the direction you are taking this in.

Edited by citi - 31 August 2012 at 5:46am

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simi888 Groupbie

Joined: 16 December 2011
Posts: 116

Posted: 31 August 2012 at 5:07am | IP Logged
thank you for the update!
im bit confused as to how to explain how i felt reading the chapter - as always it was beautifully mysterious.
I found myself trying to piece bits together but have  to admit im at a bit of a loss, does arnav seeing the ghost mean a fate similar to kashi's brother? and what did the father mean by the name curse and what did he finally understand!
Im racking my poor brain but cant make any sense. Anyway, another intriguing piece of writing that just leaves us wishing for more!
bushrayou Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 1150

Posted: 31 August 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
oh god... oh god...
this is clearly not sitting well with me... I don't even know how to react to this.
to her.
to him...

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appy_12 Goldie

Joined: 15 May 2011
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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 5:29am | IP Logged

And he was the only one who could see Lakshmi, and now Arnav can too?? Hmm..

And Devaki's tale makes me sad. Very interesting update, which has somehow made me thoughtful and all quiet! :)

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anuprika Senior Member

Joined: 25 February 2012
Posts: 836

Posted: 31 August 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
first of all .onasamsakal.
appo inganem oru kadhendalle kalarikkal veedinu.hmmm..
pavam devaki
ini enthavuo entho.Smile

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