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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 125)

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged


I am left wondering what motive Pallavi or Kashi have behind taking Arnav to the Sarpam Thullal, Do they not forget that their enemy is also a human being living in the same house as their own; knowing he wishes to snatch it away from them. Do they sense he is in some moral trouble? Do they feel obligated towards him in any way? Is it self-preservation? Is it Kashi's wish to get him to believe in her world and the charms of her land?

 

Kashi comes to his rescue again…..how does she do that?…by asking him to admire her beauty. I like her ingenuity of distracting him from the worship that had obviously unsettled him.

 

He does have a history of substance abuse which she is unaware of and the reason for her mentioning her brother leaves us guessing….

 

Be it acid…cocaine….heroine….opium…. meth…or any known drug used by man, whether it has a pleasant effect or not.

 

I am tripping on this story, and how……….

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
hayay!!

i loved it sooo much!!

i love arnav's thought about the nature..he observes minute things Tongue

and kashi comforted him..awww Embarrassed
the way she said keh look at her..her beauty will distract him..awww cuteee!!!

and slippin her hand in his...cuteeeEmbarrassed

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
wonderful update.has been stalking ur update.
 
loved how arnav found a remedy for his fears.
 
can clearly visualise the scene of them walking  n at the nagatara.it was fantastic description.im at loss for words devi.just understand u excelled as usual.
 
kashi is so intelligent beyond everything.pallavi is sensible n arnav is a proper human.often i hv the feeling if kashi r nambootiri r ghosts.im really sorry for this wierd thot.but the atm u create leaves me under s spell n i imagine the worst.sorry.

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
fab update...
she is sharing.. just a little bit... but still..

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mistyrains

This story seems to strike a chord with probably every human emotion it stumbles upon. At times grief, sometimes passion, nostalgia and here fear, revulsion. I don't know if you write them down in that manner purposely, but it definitely makes Kalarikkal House a strikingly unique, pleasantly refreshing and a highly engaging read! Terrific chapter :D

I don't usually plan ahead in a very purposeful manner, but rather try to imagine the scene in my head until I am attuned to all the characters and their context and environment... the rest is almost always a more subconscious process - in terms of what comes out... I don't know if that makes sense.

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
WOW that update actually  made me feel like I was walking through the forest with them, it was so virtual. Loved it!
Kashi's brothers death is tragic and the sorrow in the few words at the end left me speechless.

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Finally am back!

I often get to know something new from your FFs, KH is no exception...the entire sarapam thullal(though worshiping snake does exist in my place), legends about creation of Kerala..refreshing!

Kashi's attempt at distracting was  smart :) Arnav had a reason to have acid trips...did Unni had one?may be not...
Waiting for what you have got in store for us

Agree with Kalyaani...tripping on storyTongue


Edited by cindrella255 - 25 August 2012 at 10:59am

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You are seriously gifted Sister!!! 

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