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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 12)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged

Great updates so Kashi has manglik loved Arnav and Khushi's conversation seems like they are letting some walls down and instead if jusr bickering having more meaningful conversations

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
i had read chap 5 to 20 in a single strech...
really wonderful...ur stream of thots...n the powerful words...r mindblowing... the verbal combat b/n arnav n kashi in the initial chaps...n the progressions of ur story...!!!!i loved it...
i really hooked to this ff...
i lovd this...u r presenting new n deep aprons of concern,personification...caring...all...
 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Great update.loved it

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Stunningly powerful update. Best chapter of the story so far no doubt it. Kashi is such a strong girl but Arnav is right. This curse won't be enough to keep the vultures away. The dialogues were especially brilliant. Well done! :)

Thank you for a wonderful story. :)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
yes, i agree with the previous commenters.. this is the best chapter so far.
because this made me go up and read it again.. to capture the nuances in the text.
then read it again, to catch the nuances in the subtext.
love how you have bought in the dynamics between them.. and how nalan is utterly comfortable with arshi's proximity
. thank you for the update!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
I loved this line  "Even you, a man I am sure has never experienced true desire in his life, cannot resist me."  I thought it was so intuitive of Khushi to recognize Arnav in this way after having just met him.  And it is so true - he has kissed and kissed her well so many times already.  Aah if only I knew such passion in real life.  Great chapter!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
The conversations between them is the highlight of this story, and I say repeatedly that you out-do yourself with every update.
Love it...absolutely!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Congatulations on the new thread...
And the update was really awesome as usual...
The interaction between the two, their vulnerabilities - you did complete justice to each and every aspectSmile
And - "Why is your... Puli... shy"? - that really made me smileLOLLOL

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