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Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] (Page 10)

priya.. Senior Member
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Okay.. I was going to comment chapter wise..but summer is getting to me:) the longer the days...The less time I have:) 

The tale you have spinned here takes me to the many days I have spent at my grandma's house in Kerala..Thulasithara, large anganams and the history of the place brings back memories...it feels mystical!!!

Brushing with umikiri and kuli- pinnal..I haven't done either of those in a long time. Reading your FF makes me look back at my childhood with fonder memories..if that is even possible:) 

Nalan- he is my absolute favorite in this story! He is a menace and is loyal to kashi to a fault! But something about Arnav makes him trust him..and somewhere along the way forgive him..and Nalan's acceptance of him is very important to Arnav as well! 

The journey of kashi , Arnav, tharavadu history is amazing!!!!



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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged
You can  almost feel the air thick with magic in this chapter - there definitely is a 'connection' of sorts between Arnav and Kashi. And I think Kashi understands Arnav has been through something; he knows how hard it is to decide to live and not give up.

Loved it! And like someone else said there are ways of nulifying the effects of being Manglik. But from what I understand it can be intensive (and expensive) with all the poojas that one has to do...

Nalan is so cute! When the three of them are together it's almost like they're a family -Kashi and Arnav seem to take on parenting roles with the boy. And he is delightfully cheeky!

I love love love your writing! The picture gallery you have up is exquisite - it just places the story so well...sigh...I wish I was there!



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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
I know you said 25 chapters but please don't stop at that.  this story is charming and hypnotic, has a life of its own.

Loved this chapter.  Both to a certain extent  letting down their guard a bit and admitting to their weakness, fears and also displaying their strengths. 
 Kashi when she talked about protection taking the form of ending a life that is ripe as Arnav painted a bleak picture of their future. Her willingness to accept death. 
Arnav in admitting the toll life had taken on him.  His unwillingness to accept death.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
liked the convo between kashi and arnav. loved the fact that they can so easily express to opp feeling at the same time. Kashi though has just known him for some time understands him better and same goes for arnav. loved the update

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
congratulations!!! :) :)
wow really nice chapter! it was serious but light in the end! i think they may have come emotionally closer!
thank you for pm!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
ooo... i loved arnavs outburst!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:36am | IP Logged

 Hey was in a lousy mood...posted something cheesy and edited this post...ignore it. You already have...good...good...



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