Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] - Page 81

Beautiful :D Love how inculcate small shades of traditions and cultures into the story, and weave out completely different concepts. Great work <3

beyond the arnav kushi n the storyline,u bring in many extra interesting elements,wich leaves us at 'albudham' expression.n this one of navarasas was also one of them.

I have to say I just caught up on the story (have been out of town and so busy I couldn't use the internet) and I just love the way you write.  Edited by asdfjkl - 11 years ago

so pallavi knows that  he feels peace when he listens to her veena.. and is showing kaveri that he indeed does have a "peaceful" face. it is not always turbulence and thunder, sometimes it is the stillness and peace that hit you the most..

thanks for expressing that so beautifully.
wonderful update, even if it was so short.👏

now let me go find my own "shaantam"

i really dont know what you want me to write... fukk... what do u want me to feel when i finish reading? multitudes of emotions are raging within me... there is this churning going on in my belly after every chapter...

both sisters looking at arnav for 'shantam'... the peace when he is listening to her veena... pallavi knew he was there...

he knew that her (kashi's) sorrow was real when she danced and cried! and when she expressed it as an expression he knew it was fake... i don't think he realizes he can read her so well.. he just reads her like its second nature...

i wonder how explosive its going to be when they both finally realize the depth of their feelings...

i want to love u but i want to hate you as well... why do u write like this and take me to another realm altogether? ughhh

how khushish... :)

The navarasa... I am trying to pin what am I feeling right now :)

Random thought, but I had to share. when I read Kashi asking her sister to show her peace, and how Pallavi turns to Arnav. Its so piognant, this point.

voila! I have transformed into the ideal reader now!

IF anybody has watched a classical dance performance they will realise how difficult it is to  do justice to all the 9 rasas.I love how u have linked the three characters to different rasas. i woudn't have thought of arnav and shantham in the same breathe but you've managed to pull that off. Kashi's inability to portray fear resonates with her attitude to life,kudos for staying true to her initial character sketch and for subtly infusing it with more vibrance as the story progresses-coming of age finally!!!!!!! Edited by sangeetha26 - 11 years ago

I'm as far as you come from arts. And classical well I know nothing so when I started reading this chapter I was not sure what was going on.

But since you describe everything I started to understand and
I even got most of the emotions right or that's what I think maybe I'm all wrong

I love the fact tht this ff is still on and wasn't only 25 ch. as you originally intended