Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] - Page 53

I will have less time to comment these next few days-it is total craziness here. Loved the 2 updates. It was exactly what I needed since I was starting to have withdrawal symptoms from this FF. Both chapters were amazing in their own way. Loved the description of Kashi's dancing and the respect that Arnav showed for her grief. The last chapter, however, tops it for me. It was the emotions of Kashi laid bare. Since the beginning of this FF, you have shown us how  strong, bold, and smart she is. This is the vulnerable Kashi. The one who has to grow up to lose so much-and the loss happened through death and fear. First, it was 2 person she cared about, then it was having her family's name tarnished, losing her extended family to fear and knowing that she cannot be loved because of the association to her name. At least fate has chosen to send her the lion's cub. Well that was not what I meant when I said shorter comments but it will do. Have to run now. Can't wait for the next one.😊Edited by asimov - 11 years ago

Absolutly beautiful update ...hope arnav is just the lion cub but the lion...continue soon

Loved both chapters.
Felt pain by reading kashi's pain.
It was damn gloomy.
Aww..nalan is so sweet.loved his inocense.:)

Nalan its so sweet. the bond between him and kashi is so heartwarming, they try to protect each other. Im also liking the bond that is forming between nalan and arnav.

Kashis life is tinged with so much sadness. Can't believe her relatives have deserted them due to their belief of the males dying young...the dads still alive, you'd think they'd take heed of that fact. And kashis brothers death?? They don't know why he died?? very intrigued by this...kashI doesn't strike me as the type to sit back while her brothers death remains inconclusive.

I wonder if arnav wil see his sisters picture near the idols or whether kashi will realize that arnav is the boy.Edited by fatima2603 - 11 years ago

those wer really touching updates.

Finally found my Nalan.  Check out page 1.

Both da chapters r amazingly beautiful..nd da song is one of my favourite...do u believe in chowa dhosham..my sister lost her beautiful love lyfe which she expected due to dis chowa dhosham..his parents didn't gave da permission for mrge due to dis...i hate dis foolishness...

Originally posted by: shijinaraghavan

Both da chapters r amazingly beautiful..nd da song is one of my favourite...do u believe in chowa dhosham..my sister lost her beautiful love lyfe which she expected due to dis chowa dhosham..his parents didn't gave da permission for mrge due to dis...i hate dis foolishness...

Its always the  girls who suffer because of this stupid belief. I have never heard any boy not getting married because of this dosham...
Edited by swetha_ch - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -publicenemy-

Finally found my Nalan.  Check out page 1.

And Nithya menon  is ???
Edited by swetha_ch - 11 years ago

I read that and saw a movie in my head.  Beautifully written my friend!