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FF arshi : and he returned! part 16 updated!!!!! (Page 129)

bhadraprasad IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 July 2012
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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:59pm | IP Logged

Loved it ...Awesome update...Thanks for the PM

dasudisa Senior Member

Joined: 05 July 2012
Posts: 500

Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
great update...Smile
Sweta... Goldie

Joined: 06 June 2012
Posts: 1972

Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
Lol omg this update...

Is AWESOME! Seriously... Your writing has so much power, loved it! The update loved the way she impersonates him, love it, and as soon as she sees him... Utter shock, in both minds hahahahahahahahah! Bless! Then as he enquires her, she's his wife after all and even though being drunk she still is nervous, still blushing hahahahahah loved that part so much... And khushi intoxication coming through when she say why are you doing these yucky stff such as pulling her tie so he pulls her by the waist... Lved it :)! Hahahahahaha then seeing her mischievous side arnav tooo reacts saying he was planning to do it with his saut since his wife doesn't...

By god I promise I actually gasped for air, out loud, in shock, then humour and it's about half 12 and everyone's sleeping I had to cover my mouth! That's how much funny that one line was... Then I'm composed and continue reading and then khushi kisses him on the lips... Once again I gasp for air, cover my mouth and I'm blushing here and I'm not the one kissing him hahahahahaha! Loved how arnav teases her saying she didn't even do it right... And she's like where did you learn the ASR kiss like lol I wanna know what it is! And even after he's out the washroom she's still thinking about the kiss and he knew it I lold out again... I really need to read your posts in the day time hahahahah!love it, love it, love it! Awesome update can't wait for the next part thanks for the pm :) 

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Paramjit Goldie

Joined: 27 August 2004
Posts: 1804

Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
Yeah finally a update, loved drunk Khushi, and imitiating ASR, poor Aman is mouth opened wide at what Khushi was doing and \ASR not getting mad.  I love ASR invention the ASR kiss, oh my he is not going to let her off easy when she is back into her sense.  I have a funny feeling he will be teasing her until she turns red like tomatoes.  ROFL Thanks for the pm, and doing awesome update.  I hope you update soon, I am so excited to read what will happen next.  Please pretty please update soon. 

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S111 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
Wow ! Drunk khushi ... Nice ...thanks for the pm
ayeshasad Senior Member

Joined: 08 May 2012
Posts: 231

Posted: 07 September 2012 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
very nyc yar...update soon...
Sumaiya27 Senior Member

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Posts: 585

Posted: 07 September 2012 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
ahem ahem Embarrassed full of GM WinkWink i m speechless right now LOL
kbtr IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 July 2012
Posts: 10223

Posted: 07 September 2012 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Haha! A drunken Kushi! I wonder what she'll do when she wakes up with a hangover. In fact, I wonder what HE'll do when she wakes up with a hangover! I'm sure he will tease her to Kingdom come about her brazen behavior! Ooo! I can't wait for the next update. LOL

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