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FF arshi : and he returned! part 16 updated!!!!! (Page 129)

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bavucute

yaar Mushfika...seems u r on full form of GM...xcellent upate yaar...& deep kissing was extradinory...am literally imagining the stiation...hope kushi dsnt sleep in the next update... bt am eagerly waiting...


Also yaar, wekend no IPKKND...but you plz prvd s the update yaar I mean 2 upates instead of alternative..only wekends..plz plz plz plz Smile


ROFLhahahahah to be honest, i WAS on full FORM OF GM!!! i'm shocked that i have such a MAHA GMShocked Blushing

thnx a lot buddy...

let's see what khushi does next Wink

and i'm sooo sorry, i couldn't update on the weekend as u requested...Cry was sick plus had a lot of works
Ouch


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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweta...

Lol omg this update...



Is AWESOME! Seriously... Your writing has so much power, loved it! The update loved the way she impersonates him, love it, and as soon as she sees him... Utter shock, in both minds hahahahahahahahah! Bless! Then as he enquires her, she's his wife after all and even though being drunk she still is nervous, still blushing hahahahahah loved that part so much... And khushi intoxication coming through when she say why are you doing these yucky stff such as pulling her tie so he pulls her by the waist... Lved it :)! Hahahahahaha then seeing her mischievous side arnav tooo reacts saying he was planning to do it with his saut since his wife doesn't...



By god I promise I actually gasped for air, out loud, in shock, then humour and it's about half 12 and everyone's sleeping I had to cover my mouth! That's how much funny that one line was... Then I'm composed and continue reading and then khushi kisses him on the lips... Once again I gasp for air, cover my mouth and I'm blushing here and I'm not the one kissing him hahahahahaha! Loved how arnav teases her saying she didn't even do it right... And she's like where did you learn the ASR kiss like lol I wanna know what it is! And even after he's out the washroom she's still thinking about the kiss and he knew it I lold out again... I really need to read your posts in the day time hahahahah!love it, love it, love it! Awesome update can't wait for the next part thanks for the pm :) 


First of all, THNX A LOTTT FOR SUCH A BIGGG COMMENT...I'M OVERWHELMED SWETA! Hug

LOL AWW! g8 to know that...

lol thnx for specifying ur likes...really appreciate it EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

LMHOOO!!! u gasped for air?? reading my FF?? at 12:30?? when everybody was SLEEPING!!! ROFL

LMAO!!! the second time U GASPED FOR AIR @ such an ODD TIME!! *feeling pity as u couldn't laugh out loud TongueROFL jk* Wink


hahahah! yah!!! so true...i should update in day time so that u can laugh OUT LOUD and not gasping and covering ur mouth ROFL

thnx  a lot sweta...really aprreciate ur comment girl! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

and no problem



Edited by Mushfika - 15 September 2012 at 4:23pm

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Paramjit

Yeah finally a update, loved drunk Khushi, and imitiating ASR, poor Aman is mouth opened wide at what Khushi was doing and \ASR not getting mad.  I love ASR invention the ASR kiss, oh my he is not going to let her off easy when she is back into her sense.  I have a funny feeling he will be teasing her until she turns red like tomatoes.  ROFL Thanks for the pm, and doing awesome update.  I hope you update soon, I am so excited to read what will happen next.  Please pretty please update soon. 


hahah so truE!!! she's gonna face a hard time from his hubby ahm ahm Blushing

hahahahhaha i guess yesss UNTIL SHE TURNS INTO TOMATO RED BlushingROFL

aw! thnx

yap i'll update today! Big smile
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MashiatMimosa

ahem ahem Embarrassed full of GM WinkWink i m speechless right now LOL


lmhooo! okie! i'll take out all the things u have in ur mind bout this part later on! Wink
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kbtr

Haha! A drunken Kushi! I wonder what she'll do when she wakes up with a hangover. In fact, I wonder what HE'll do when she wakes up with a hangover! I'm sure he will tease her to Kingdom come about her brazen behavior! Ooo! I can't wait for the next update. LOL


lol let;s see what i come up with! LOLWink
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by naksh2227

Woah, cool, fabulous , fantastic, cute, interesting, lovable last but not the least hot Embarrassed wow it was all I sat hat I said before Wink . Good job lolllxxx ASR's kisss hmmm...



hahahahahah

awww!!!!  tons of thnx nidhi !!

lol

yah ASR KISS Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by momo121

ohhh! im blushing! Blushing
a good update :D
Thanks for the PM :D


oh really?

u r?? need something to cover ur face so that nobody sees u>?? LOL jking!

thnx

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maz786

Finally. They kiss. Nice one. Wold have liked Arnav teach Khushi more about ASR's kiss but we will save it for later or maybe next chapter perhaps? Thanks for the pm


lol hmm i will see Day Dreaming

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