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OS: HOW DARE HE! KHUSHI IS MINE! (PART 2-PAGE 9) (Page 9)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Nice OS, please continue and PM me Smile

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
super exciting os.i want u turn it into an ff.Embarrassed.it sounds promising.plz continue and pm me plz.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Shyam is back no!

N the only person who can kiss her is Arnav we all know that.

Shyam ur dead meat now wait for Arnav to come home!

Cont soon x

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Great os. Loved Arnav's outburst...

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 5:03am | IP Logged
really nice! loved it!!!
do continue...plz!
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HI GUYS, SO I FELT SO GOOD WHEN I RECEIVED SO MUCH POSITIVE FEEDBACK, I DECIDED TO CONTINUE. SO HERE IS THE NEXT PART HOPE YOU LIKE IT AS MUCH AS YOU LIKED THE FIRST PART.

in case you havent read part 1: here is the link:

Part 1 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3132225

Part 2

Nani could not believe what she was hearing, it couldn't be possible; how could he have the audacity of coming back!
"yah app kya kahrien hay arnav bitwa?"  Nani couldn't believe it she was trying to fight herself.
"Nahi...nahi...yah nahi ho sakta, app ko zaroor koi ghalat fahmi hoi hay" Nani was in complete shock and she could see the state arnav was in, he was clinching his hand on the steering wheel and using his upmost force in changing the gears. Not once did he press the breaks, there was no stopping him now.  

BACK AT THE RM

Shyam carried Khushi and lay her on the bed but Khushi could sense that the man whose arms she was in, was not the man she loved! Not did once khushi hold onto his collar because she knew when her Arnavji was with her. Those actions were only for Arnav because the warmth she would feel with him was not there. Her heartbeat was not increasing...she wanted hum with her but he wasnt there...Payal immediately went and sat next to Khushi and made sure that that man didnt come anywhere near her. 

ARNAV AND NANI IN THE CAR


"Nahi nani, mujhay koi ghalat fahmi nahi hoi hay. Uss admi nay dadi koo istamal kar kay...! mein usay nahi chuwron gah nani!" said Arnav bringing out the ASR within him.
"Arnav bitwa...app...app zaara thanday..dimaag say sochiein, agar app asay ghusay mein aa gaein ghay, toh khushi bitiya ko kon sabhalay ga!" Nani reminded Arnav as he hit the breaks when they reached RM. Arnav did not pay any attention to what nani had told him and stepped out of his SUV and slammed the door behind him. Arnav raced towards the door while Nani was trying her best to stop him, but the only thing that raced inside Arnav's mind was the fact that that guy had held his wife in his arms and had...had...Arnav stopped walking and turned towards Nani and said
"Nani, uss admi nay MERI KHUSHI KO CHUNAY KI HIMAT KASAY KI! USKI WAJHA SAY AGG KHUSHI KI YAH HALAT HAY, WOH BIHOOSH HO GAHI HAY NANI! AUR USNAY...USNAY...KHUSHI KO KISS KIYA NANI! PAYAL NAY KHUD MUJHAY BATAYA! AUR APP MUJHAY KAH RAHIEN HAY KAY MEIN YAH SAB BOHOL KAR CHUP CHAP ANDAR CHALHA JAWON!" yelled Arnav as the ASR within him had now taken over.
"Mujhay pata hay...woh admi kisi bhi haad tak ghir sakta hay, likin app ko shant hona ho gha" said Nani while she tried to stop her tears.
"KAHSAY NANI...NAHI MEIN USAY NAHI CHUWRON GHA..." saying this Arnav started making his way to the doors of thr RM.
"App ko kasam hay, rukh gahya chotay" yelled nani, trying her best to stop Arnav but he didn't...he continued walking. Just as Arnav was about to bang the doors open, he heard Nani say something that he made his body freeze.
"APP KO KHUSHI BITIYA KI KASAM, RUKH GAYHA CHOTAY" yelled Nani, succeeding in her motive.
Arnav turned and said "Dont do this to me Nani, please" pleading Nani to let him kill that man who had dared to touch his wife. 
"Chotay, app ko hamari baat samajni hoo gi, app aisay agar ghusay mein gayien ghay toh Anjali bitiya, dadi aur khushi..." But before nani could finish, Arnav realised how he had forgotten that right now Khushi needed him the most.
"Nani, khushi..." And saying this Arnav banged the doors open of the RM and ran using all the might he had to his lady love! He knew she needed him and this time he was going to be there for him. Arnav ran inside the room and the first person he saw was Shyam, admiring khushi from a distance but right now nothing apart from khushi's health mattered for him. Arnav went a sat beside Khushi and held her hand and assured her that he was there for her.
"Arnavji, khushi ki halat bohot kharab ho rahi hay, woh bas app ka naam pukar rahi hay aur usay bohot paseena aa raha hay!" Payal informed Arnav while trying to wake khushi up but it was of no use!
"Oh s*it, her temperature is rising, DID ANYONE CALL THE DOCTOR?" Shouted Arnav. "Haan arnav bitwa, woh bas attay hi hoon ghay" mami replied,
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN, ATTAY HI HOON GHAY! ILL CALL HIM MYSELF!" Saying this Arnav called the Dr and started yelling at him and threatening him to hurry up otherwise he will not spare his career! After 5 mins the Dr arrived and he was bought in by Shyam, "Saalay sahab, yah layein doctor aa ghay" Shyam told Arnav - on the hope of getting Arnav even more infuriated. Arnav gave Shyam a look in which all his anger was portrayed and Shyam being himself gave him his dirty smirk,
"Dr, what's wrong with Khushi, woh utth kyun nahi rahi hay! Please Dr, do something fast" said a worried Arnav as he saw khushi being tormented while she was unconscious.
"I'm afraid she has suffered a shock which she is not able to overcome, there is no use of waking her up right now, I will give her an injection which will reduce her temperature and keep her sleeping till morning; haan par app ko aik baat ka dihan rakhana ho gha kay raat ko kisi ko inkay saath hoona zaroori hay, inka temperature ki wajha say, inko thandi paatiyaan karni hoon ghi!" Saying this the Dr gave khushi the injection while Arnav slowly saw his wife carming down but not letting go of his hand as she could feel the warmth that her husband was giving her, she could recognise his touch even when she was asleep. "Thank you Dr!" Said Arnav, and the Dr nodded and was escorted out by NK.
"Mujhay lagta hay, abb ham sab ko chalna chahiyah, khushi betiya ko aram ki zaroorat hay!" Nani told everyone as they started to exit. After everyone had left Shyam turned around and said "agar khushi-ji ko kuch chahiyey ho toh mujhay bata diyah gha, theek hay na saalay sahab" saying this he laughed and exited!
"That's it, khushi has gone through too much now, I'm sorry nani but I can't stop myself anymore" saying this Arnav kissed khushi's hand and looked up in anger. Arnav told HP to call Payal. "Payal tum zara khushi kay pas thori dher bhaytho ghi, mujhay zara koi BOHOT zaroori kaam yaad aa ghya hay, aur usay isi wakat khatam karna zaroori hay" said Arnav while he could again feel the blood boiling up inside him.
"Haan zaroor, hum hein khushi kay pas app ghayah, par jaldi ayah gha, khushi nay agar app ko uth kay nahi dheekha, woh aur jhabra ghayji!" Said Payal while sitting next to Khushi and caressing her hair.
"Don't worry, I'm there for khushi" saying this Arnav exited the room and saw Shyam heading towards his room while Anjali was sleeping. Arnav raced be behind Shyam to finish this off, once and for all! 

PRE-CAP: ARNAV AND SHYAM FIGHTING OUTSIDE RM! (and shyam is getting screwed!)

so thats the end of part 2. i know u guys probably wanted some action in this part, but it was necessary for me to keep in mind that because of the Dadi Arnav can't just go and beat him up, but i promise that you will love the next part. 

again i will only continue if i get enough comments and likes. 

BUDDY ME AND WRITE IT IN THE COMMENTS AND ILL SEND U A PM WHEN I UPDATE. 

NO BASHING PLZ Smile


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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged
LOVED part 2 ! the Anger The Possessiveness Was AMAZING !! Loved it :D ! waiting For Shyam to get beaten up LOL

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged
it was a perfecr ipkknd story ...lol...i loved the way u showed evry character perfectly!!...Thumbs Up
keep writing!!

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