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Hi guys, so this is my first attempt to write a OS and i hope you guys like it. So i started from where the episode ended on Friday but i have made a few alterations. I really dont know whether this is a SS/OS but hopefully ill receive enough feedback to motivate me to continue.
Arnav and nani had gone out to look for arnav's dadi and akash had gone to work,so the only people at home were Payal, Anjali, Khushi, mami and of course HP.
Payal and khushi were in the kitchen, while Anjali was in her room, resting and
as usual mami was doing her nails while reading her usual gossip magazine.
Just then the door bell rang.
"Hari prakash, opening the door plz!" Shouted mami in her perfect english. HP opened the door and saw a figure entering in a cream sari with her suitcase and something that looked like a carpet which was tucked under her arm. The woman was now standing in front of manorma while manorma was busy reading.
"Who is...hello hi bye bye" uttered as she lay her eyes on the woman, manorma immediately stood up and said "app...mera matlab, namastay subhandra devi, app yahn? Hamra matlab sab theek hay na!" stammered manorma as she couldn't believe what she was seeing.
"Haan, HUM! App ko koi dikat?" Questioned arnav's dadi.
"Nahi nahi...hello hi bye bye, hum app ko apni bahu say milatain hain" said manorma while she was on the verge on pissing her pants because of the new danger that stood in front of her. "Phati.." Just as manorma was about to complete her sentence she received a stern look from her new super MIL, before she had to hear a mouth full, she quickly changed her attitude.
"Humra matlab, humari pyaari payal bitiya, zara app aur khushi bitiya yahan ayainji plz" said manorma in a very unusual and sweet voice.
"mami ji ko kya hugaya hay humari pyaari payal bitiya" khushi asked payal while mocking mamiji. "Chup kar khushi" said payal while hitting khushi on the head while they both giggled.
"Ji, ay ma-ji" replied payal as they walked towards the living room where manorma was praying for them to hurry up. While they made their way, subhandra devi made herself comfortable and sat down on the sofa.
"Ji ma-ji" said payal as she and khushi lay their eyes on the woman who was giving them direct eye contact. Khushi and payal looked at each other not knowing what to say to this stranger. Then, like always manorma broke the silence only to be interrupted by SD.
"Payal bitiya, khushi bitiya yah hain..."
"Humnain app say kaha kay app kuch bolain" said SD to manorma. Payal and khushi were shocked because this was the first time anyone had spoken to mami like this. The woman turned her eyes towards payal and khushi again, while they just looked down, not knowing what to say.
"Humara naam subhandra devi hay aur hum Arnav ki dadi hain!" Said SD to payal and khushi. Immediately Payal stepped forward to touch SD's feet and SD blessed her being proud of her teachings. Next, as Khushi bent down to take her blessings she heard SD say "andar ayain na damad ji!" As soon as khushi heard those words, she completely froze; it can't be possible she thought to herself. Then she looked towards the door and saw her worst nightmare walking in. One by one, mami and payal went into complete shock, but no one was going through what khushi was feeling right now, she stood up and started walking backwards as she had all the horrible flashbacks of that horrible man, her engagement with him, she finally finding out about his true colours, him kidnapping the man she loved more than anyone else, EVERYTHING! Suddenly Khushi's world started getting fussy right in front of her eyes.
"hum jab yahan a rahay thay toh humain rastey mein damad ji milay" said SD. Shyam can and stood right in front of Khushi and smiled at her while whispering 'im back khushiji!'.
As Khushi heard those words she collapsed at the very place she was standing. Everyone ran towards Khushi and tried to wake her up,
"Payal, jaldi say arnav bitwa ko phone karein aur unko SAB batein" panicked mami as sheshe looked at Shyam. Shyam stood there and smirked and thought 'abhi toh bohot kuch baki hay khushi ji, abhi toh app ko bohot kuch sahna hay!' Shyam bent down and before anyone could say anything he lifted khushi up and took her towards her room, while everyone caught up with Shyam he placed a kiss on Khushi's forehead, thinking that no one saw but he wasn't aware that Payal had witnessed this while she was looking for the home phone to call arnav. Payal quickly called arnav and said "Arnav ji...woh khushi..."!
"KHUSHI, KYA HOWA KHUSHI KO PAYAL..." panicked Arnav.
"Woh Arnavji...woh...khushi nay jab...unhay dikha..woh..."
"PAYAL I DONT UNDERSTAND, KHUSHI NAY KISAY DIKHA...AUR KYA HOWA USAY DAMN IT!"
"WHAT! PAYAL WHAT ARE YOU SAYING, TELL ME PROPERLY. THIS ISNT POSSIBLE" " ARNAVJI, woh shyamji apki dadi kay sath ghar mein aa gahein hein aur jab khushi nay unhay dhekha woh bihoosh ho kay gir gahi aur phir shyam ji nay...usay... apnay gowd mein utha kay usay...
"WHAT THE HELL, HOW DARE HE...
"phir unhow nay khushi ko forehead par...
But before Payal could continue, Arnav slammed the phone and threw it in anger and without thinking took a violent u-turn.
"kya howgawa Arnav bitwa, khushi bitiya theek toh hain nah" asked nani while she saw the anger that was aggravating in Arnav.
"Nani, woh wapis a gaya aur usnay MERI KHUSHI KO HAAT LAGANAY KI HIMAT KI, NANI MEIN SHYAM KO NAHI CHOWRON JA, IM NOT GONNA SPARE HIM NANI, HE'S DEAD!" Arnav shouted as he was fuming with rage. He couldn't take the fact that that man had dared to touch his Khushi...Arnav wasn't going to spare him today!
SO GUYS THATS THE END. i WILL ONLY CONTINUE IF I GET ENOUGH LIKES AND COMMENTS.
AND IF I DO UPDATE, BUDDY ME AND WRITE IT IN THE COMMENTS AND ILL SEND U A PM WHEN I UPDATE.
NO BASHING PLZ
PART 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3132225&TPN=9
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