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arhi ss: criminal's gf. lst pt pg 19 (Page 10)

ISensedYou IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
ooo arnav has fallen 4 kushi...awsum update...tanx 4 d pm

ipkkndank IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
Awesomeee =) =)
And did i tell you that ur banner look awesome ? If not here it is
Love ur banner dear =) =) It's really lovely
i know i'm supposed comment on ur writing but here i'm commenting on ur banner =) =)
Awesome update continue soon
ambishika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
part 3

10 : 00 am

arnav enters with la in her room

arnav: so khushi wht u thought.

Khushi: mr raizada i thought abt ur offer.
Arnav: and ?

Khushi: i know he wont come here for me.

Arnav: so u will tell us 

khushi: but in my condition

la: shut jus tell us

arnav: lavanya let hear wht khushi actually want

arnav turns toward khushi

arnav: so miss gupta wht are ur needs

khushi: like u said u will give me new identituy.
I want that with one million dollor

la: wht the f

arnav: and why u think we will do that

khushi gives him smile.
Khushi: bcz mr raizada when u will catch ar the govt will get atleast 100 million so atleast i shud get that 

arnav: deal

la: but sir.

Arnav : deal miss gupta 
now tell us but ar.

Khushi: i know u all are least intrested in knowing abt si plzz dont ask stuoid question and waste my time 
lets come on point.

Arnav: si whts the piont?

Khushi: shyam jha and aman mathur.

La: u mean industrialist shyam jha 
wht he has to do with it.
Sir she is trying to distract us

khushoi: plzz let me complete the whole sentance ...

And towards arnav.

Khushi: shyam jha. The diamond industrialist..
Its said that ar wants a diamond frm him.

Arnav: so??? Might be it was ur for u?

Khushi: detective why u people dont use brain.

Now let me complete.
Ar will be given the blue diamond band frm shyam.
That diamond cost more that a 100 million ...

La: wht... But why is he giving to ar ?? Is ar buying it

khushi: no dear its a gift

arnav: why? So expensive gift

khushi: now let me tell u the point.
Khushi comes close to arnav
khushi: if u want ar then destry them and u will find ar...

Arnav: u mean to say shyam and aman are his right hand

khushi: noo...
Shyam is manvis brother ...step brother...

Arnav: manvi? But she is in coma right

Khushi: ohh god detective u dont know the anything abt this underworld right .
Things wht they are seen 
manvi .manvi vadera.she was shyams step sister.

La: so how is manvi related to ar

khushi: its anjali

la: oog god ur confusing us who thre hell is this anjali

khushi: shyam jha wife.

La: u mean the girl who died in a car accudent...

Khushi: do u still beleve in news papers

arnav: so u tell trtuth

khushi: anjali was ar sister...

arnav:how shit she lied..
aaksh:yes sir either she is or ar is...


aaksh:might be she knew that he is arjun like us...

arnav: we all are going mumbai...

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masaf59 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
great update thanks for the pm!
kajolkonna Goldie

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
I was thinking that she will tell lie.
The underworld's r so claver.
Nice update.

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ambishika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kajolkonna

I was thinking that she will tell lie.
The underworld's r so claver.
Nice update.

thnxx..but u dont know might be she is telling truth
vibha92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
oh suspense!!!!!...gre8 update...

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KSG_luv IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
This is going really interesting!! Big smile

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