arhi ss: criminal's gf. lst pt pg 19 - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
oh very ineteresting...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting.
Loved khushis attitude.

Thanks for the PM.
Update soon :-)
Posted: 11 years ago
oh my godd!!!!!!
wat a story...
dis is wat i think...say me if i think it wrong...dis supposed to be ur storyline...i hope i got it right???

Arnav is detective who is appointed to catch the criminal...may be u would have planned it to be shyaam for sure ...bet???
and khushi is shyaam's gf...
In the process of catching shyaam...Arhi will fall in love!!!
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its upto u how u will make it...
 
either arnav will make khushi fall for him and make shyaam arrested and khushi will hte him as he used her

or

other way round...
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cant wait for ur story to continue...update soon 
i read ur timetable for updating ur works though!...a long list...hugh!
bye
Posted: 11 years ago
lovely concept loved it plsss pm me when u update plsss plsss plsss 


Posted: 11 years ago

wow! its really gonna interesting...

ASR detective..n khushi whose  gf...n criminal who is ??????

waiting fr next part...

Edited by Akorshi - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Omg omg omg... Detective Arnav n criminal khushi
What a super fantastic story

Mindblowing start...
Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!! Arnav as a detective??
cool!!
Posted: 11 years ago
niceee...
continue...
thanxs for pm...

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