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arhi ss: criminal's gf. lst pt pg 19

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged

index...


part 1 :below...
character sketch:62381993
part 2 pg 7
part 3 pg 11
part 5 pg 19


Edited by ambishika - 26 October 2012 at 6:35am

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part 1
part 1...
delhi head office...

4 :45 am..
nk:hey have some coffe...

la:thnxx any news abt him?

nk:aaksh is trying track him down but no info..

payal:but we got the info that theyare here..he and his gf...

nk:i know and govt think we cant handel this case thats why they are sending a detective here..to work with us...
grt..
la:come on nk... it wont be bad..and he is there to help us...

payal:but it has been whole 4 months we tracking him and now when we are soo close this case is being given to some another detective...

la:guys we are still on this case ok...

payal:whts his name...

nk: we got today the letter his name is detective arnav singh raizada...

la:sounds cool...

nk:sound boring...

payal:comeon..

suddenly their ph rangs..

payal:hello...

wht?
now where..
south delhi...

just reaching...


la:what happened..

payal:aaksh found out that ar and his gf are making out in a bunglow in south delhi...


nk:wow lets go fast...

la:come on...

they went to the bunglow..
they found aaksh out..

nk:did u saw anything..
la:nk??

nk:i mean anyone going out...

aaksh:no 

payal:shud we go ...

la:ok two frm back door we frm frnt??

aaksh:no me and payal frm back and u and nk frm frnt ok...


nk:hmmm...hope they are done with their make out...

la:shut uio..

aaksh:go...

they all go frm diff side..

they search whole floor its empty..

they they was a light in room..

aaksh:i right u left...

nk:ok..

they take their guns out..
nk:girls give us back support...

and payal and la nods...


aaksh and nk opens the door...

and stand straight and puts their gun back and signal payal and la ou enter..

both enter...

nk:good her back is soo hot...

la shut up..

they saw a girl naked sleepin in the middel of bed with white sheet covered with her back..

girl:officers u can stop stairng my back ...
u know he doent like anyone seeing me like this..

nk takes gun out...

girl stands up and coveres herself with the sheet...

and waves her hairs ...

girl:try to strech her self...
:he is wild in bed...


la:just shut up and dress up...

aaksh:where is he?/

girl.:how do i know???u are here u shud know...

aaksh:la make her dress up and take her to head quaters...

girl:dont worry i dont have any weapon u can leave i will change...
and i dont like weapons...speacially guns...

aaksh:fast ...miss..
girl:khuhsi ..miss khuhsi




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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:00am | IP Logged
wow sounds good Embarrassed Arnav as Crimial Shocked... plz pm me and updated soon Wink

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Originally posted by -SanzAngel-

wow sounds good Embarrassed Arnav as Crimial Shocked... plz pm me and updated soon Wink

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he is the detective...

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ambishika

Originally posted by -SanzAngel-

wow sounds good Embarrassed Arnav as Crimial Shocked... plz pm me and updated soon Wink

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he is the detective...

 
ohhh Shocked sorry reading mistake i think lolz LOL .. ok so who's the Crimial??Embarrassed

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SanzAngel-

Originally posted by ambishika

Originally posted by -SanzAngel-

wow sounds good Embarrassed Arnav as Crimial Shocked... plz pm me and updated soon Wink

- S a n a -

he is the detective...

 
ohhh Shocked sorry reading mistake i think lolz LOL .. ok so who's the Crimial??Embarrassed

u will come to know soon

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ambishika

Originally posted by -SanzAngel-

Originally posted by ambishika

Originally posted by -SanzAngel-

wow sounds good Embarrassed Arnav as Crimial Shocked... plz pm me and updated soon Wink

- S a n a -

he is the detective...

 
ohhh Shocked sorry reading mistake i think lolz LOL .. ok so who's the Crimial??Embarrassed

u will come to know soon

 
awww updated soon and pl pm me Wink
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interesting Thumbs Up continue soon!! 

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