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Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai? RTMC FF Prt 15-Page 82 (Page 72)

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetshera

Part 1 

lovely part. Enjoyed reading it so much.
Lol Mahi is such a pro in caustic remarks.
'itni acchi bhi nhi h tumhari car jo me uske piche bhagungi'
I just loved this dialogue. Nice retort to the arrogant guy.
Oh poor gal! He actually tore her dupatta away from the car door!!! what a gentleman he is Angry
She is so right. He's always indignant and ready to explode at anyone and everyone. 
Hmm. Avinash seems to be a nice and fair person.
Aarav is so impractical. Just because u dont like her, u cant snatch away from her what she deserves.
Loved Avinash's reply to Aarav's whimmsical demand.
'wo yahan job ke liye aayi thi tumhe dekhne nehi aayi thi jo tumhe pasand nehi hain' ROFL
loved the whole update.

thank u dii for ur comment
loved it

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sultanahabeeb

Very nice, nd thanks 4 pm
thanks dear
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amor.

amazing part
thank u di
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rmuk

so sorry dear for not commenting on last few updates. I had my boards so was inactive. Anyways coming to the updates, just brilliant i would say. Loved how Aarav and Mahi kissed each other, fell for each other, their romance were written very well. Hmmm so nusunderstand happened and both are in pain now. Felt bad for Mahi and her dad. Hope Nahi arranges rest of the money. Precap sounds interesting. Waiting for ur next updt. Plz update soon. Thanks for all the pms :)
its ok dear...thank u for ur sweet comment
will update very soon
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruja

beautiful but saddy update!
so aarav hating mahi even more!
but liked mahi face n oppose him
and her dad needs money for operation
and who is in precape aarav? can't be! abhi i think
thank u dii for ur comment
will update soon
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priyangbada

hey riya thnx fr d pmSmile...finally read all d prts...its a realy nice ff...plzzz continue sn...i m eagerly wating 2 rd futhr...& plzzz make evrythng fine btwn mahi & arav...ud supr first...
thanks dear for ur comment
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

Mahi ki condition k liye rona aa raha h'.feeling sad..

 Upper se hitler ne usski baja rakhi h,

Papa ko kya hoa, fracture, vo bhi severe wala'uff!..saari musibaatt ek saath..

Serious;y dono hurt h, but aarav ko baar tho sunana chahiye na mahi ki, bass pani chalani h her jagah, dats not gud..aakduu tho h, mahik saath saath, mom ko bhi pareshaan ker diya h'

Sabki naak  mei dum kerr diya h'

Aaj tho mera zabardastt wala jagda ho hi jayega aarav se, kahan h vo di, bejho use,..

Uski akal thikane lagao'mahi ko rola diya'

Mri phool si bachi'.(ye aapne bhi pehli baar suna hoga na di, ki koi bachi , yani mei, hi kisi badi ko phul si bachi keh rhi hu..  :P )

Abhi is a gud big bro..hmm, but why did he come b/w mahi n aarav'

Laptop mei bhi vhi h, oohooo..wow! but phirr bhi u hate her'samjh aa gya muje..sab samjhti hu mei..

 

Office mei hamesha mahi n aarav ka takkar'office mei world famous hoga..muje bhi bhot psnd h.. :D loved it dis time too, though thoda thiikha tiikha tha, but I loved it..

 

Duriyaan bhi h jururi..ye mei samjhti hu di, but rtmc k case mei ye sab tolerate nhi hota.

 

Precape is awesssooommeee'kya thrilling h, mast,.superb..

Pta nhi aarav kya kyawayega'ahem ahem,

but aarav is acha bacha too, dil ka sacha bacha, thoda akkdu h, but vo tho mei bhi hu na'chalega..

 

nice update di.


thank u rashu for such a lovely comment
i really love ur comment
well yeh next update me pata chalega ki ab kya hoga
bas thoda sa or waitBig smile

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhwanimehta23

Awesome Update!!!!!!
thank u dear

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