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Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai? RTMC FF Prt 15-Page 82 (Page 70)

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mddmayuri

hey riya ...
its me mayuri..remember...
first of all sorry for not commenting earlier due to some problems...plz dont get angry...but maine aaj hi saare uds padh liye..n all were awesome as usual...so lets come to the story..i luved all the scene between aarav n mahi in singapoor...and aaravs mom was so cool...i like her..but yeh abhi n mehek kyun bich mein aa rahe hai...well koi bhi luvstory without misunderstanding ke interesting nahi hoti,...so looking forward for d nxt ud...
luv u...
thank u myuri for ur beautiful comment
will update soon dear
love u too

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetnandu

update..was a sad one ..
hmm. seeing .precap i felt mahi shud give a tight slap to aarav..
thanks dear for ur comment
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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shafy_MN

awesome...
thank u dear
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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kespari

super out standing both hi nice hai i like itHeartEmbarrassedClap
thank u dear
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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soniaparte90794

Nahi di aisa nhi ho sakta...kitna bura hua itna rone ka man kar rha hiCryCry

that donky, monkey and moron i just kill that abhi.AngryAngryAngry
Agar mujhe 7 khun maf ho to main sabse pahle is abhi then mehek ka khun kar dungi.Angry

Pyar ke dushman ha nhi to... Sorry di pahle hi sara gussa nikal diya but aap samjh sakte ho itna bura lag rha hi na jane kitni misunderstanding or creat hogi.Disapprove

Vaise di upd itna chotu sa tha but niceClap
tha mamma papa vala part.Thumbs Up

Last part read karke dil ke million tukde ho gye or vo precape pad kar bhi.CryCry

Di story is realy intrestingClap

pata nhi age kya hoga jo hoga manjure riya di hogaDi ab mere curiosity bahut ati bad gyi hi bas aap jald se jald next acha bada wala upd kariyega main itzar karugi hahaha...
.Day Dreaming

Love u di lot and happy valentine day always keep sweet and luvly smile on ur lips. Muahhaa... SmileSmileClap
thank u sonia for such a sweetuuu comment
really loved it alot
or meri itni saari tareef karne ke liye special wala hugHug
love u sweety

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princesspriyart

Diii Broken Heart
velentines day pr apne mera dil ooopps
dil ni hath tudva diya Cry

mujhe bhi aarav ki trh gussa aa gya
us abhi Angry chirkut pr

or apna hath diwar pr mar diya Cry

my mom was like "diwar kyu tod rhi h " Ouch

can't see him in pain
even ffs me bhi nhi Cry


i hate abhi

mera man kr rhra h abhi ko diwar me maru

sar phod du uska Angry

hate hate hate him Angry

ab ye bhi tapak padi jalkudi Angry

ek kya kam tha jo ye bhi tapki

badi aai line marne wali Dead

bs mujhe aarav ki mamma aachi lagi Thumbs Up

Or ye precap to or bhi Cry Cry

age kya hoga (my view) :: aarav use jalkudi ko bhav dega mahi ko chidane ko Angry

aarav ek bar sun le yar mahi ki baat

my poor mahi Ouch

dil tod diya di apne mera, aarav ka n mahi k Broken Heart Broken Heart Broken Heart

or hath tudva diya mera n aarav ka

bechare hum teeno Ouch


di ek rqst h plzz na mat bolna

back to back ud de do jab tk ye thik ni hota plzz
first of all sorry for dil toding on valentines day but story mein twist isi ko kehte h na sweety
i just love ur comments
love u
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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sultanahabeeb

Awww itna badda twist, dono bhai ek pe hi fida hmmm jaldi up dena plz
thanks dear for ur sweet commentTongue
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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

res.

cnt beleive..aise time mei bhi i cn be first

~EDITED~

valentines day k dinn aapne dil tudd diya di...kya sady sady update tha..
 but twist was jabardasth...

i knw aapko twist dena cha lagta h, but aise bade bade jhatke naa diya karo ki heart hi fail ho jaye...

mahek ko aarav se tarane ki kya jarurat thi di...
usse abhi se takkar karwa dete...mei kuch nhi kahti...
 but ye mahek..
paaka sab gud-gobar kar degi...

jaise gobar ke aage good lagane se, gobar gud, yani acha nhi bann jata , vaise hi mahek ki bahen sweet si mahi hona se mahek sweet nhi banti..

jal kucadi h...Angry

abhi- hamehsa wrng time entry.. :/
bakwas banda ekdum..

pracpe se tho aur rona aa raha h...job kitni imp. thi mahi k liye..but chodni padd rhi h..n aarav is so annoyed...ek baar baat tho suno uski...aarav..

amita is rocking...aunty aap hi ho iss update k hero...yeah! super  hero...
yes, jaldi jaldi shadi kra do mahi aarav ki...Wink




thank thank thank u so much rashu for such a lovely comment
ek pyara hug meri taraf seHug
really loved it
thank u again
love u

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