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Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai? RTMC FF Prt 15-Page 82 (Page 66)

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetnandu

update was superb...awesome..
they are going to confess:)
precap is terrifying..
thank u dearBig smile

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridzzi

Fab. Yaar but ye song kis movie ka tha?
So he was about to confess but ye toh tunn thi behosh ho gayi
n after that office main by god, he always watched her through window in open hairs awww
n they both confessed but alone yaar dhatt teri ki
n precap ye gadha abhi beech main kaha se a gaya, i m sure wo abhi hoga n peechey arav hoga...yaar aisa ni hoga na plz aisa mat karna mera nanha sa dil toot jayega
update soon
luv u :-)
thank u ridzzz for ur lovely comment
loved it
i hope u loved the song
becoz ddlj ka song fit nhi baith rha tha kyuki aarav not like that srk na

he is very silent n simple so thats whySmile
love u
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Fantastic...

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:41am | IP Logged
hey guysss thank u so much for ur lovely previews...im very very glad that u guys like my story...today is valentines day so thought to give u small part...i know u r upset with precap but this is just a twist...everything will be fine soon so enjoy reading

happy valentines day againBig smile


part 12

mahi was confused n surprised at the same time...why he was so polite with her????ia he alright?or something else roaming into his mind...she sat on chair comfortably n engaged herself into work...

mahek passed through the his cabin n dashed with him...--''what the hell is this are u blind''he barked on her angrily n she just gazing at him with wide open eyes...a smile crept on her face-''hi...aarav sir...i saw ur pic in cabin''he hissed at her-''so what should i do''

mahek lowered her eyes from his face n extended her palm to shake-''oh u don't know me im a new designer of ur company mahek sharma''aarav's angry expressions changed into confusion-''u have any relation to mahi sharma''

her smile vanished-''yeah she is my sister...''in a low tone n backed her palm...he raised his brow-''its ur genre porblem to annoying me''she looked at him-''im really sorry sir ''aarav gritted his teeth-''back to ur work n next time use ur eyes to see peoples''n he left from there

she was looking at him n smiled-''he is so handsome..thank u god to send him in my life''

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at evening

avinash returned from the office n stretched himself on couch-''amita pls give me tea''

amita came with tea n sat next to him...she grinned at him n gave him the tea...

''mahi kaisi h''she asked excitedly...

avinash-''she is fine amita...''amita frowned at  him-''avinash i mean mahi beautiful to h na ''

avinash stopped to sipping tea n looked at her-''amita are u ok kya hua h tumhe''

amita-''btao na wo beautiful to h na''

avinash nodded-''yeah she is very beautiful...but hua kya h''

amita smiled-''aarav ke liye kaisi rahegi mahi''

avinsh surprised at her statement-''aarav ke liye.???tumne aarav se pucha i mean he don't like her''

amita giggled-''that is ur thinking avinash not my...i want mahi with my aarav...wo kuch kehta nhi h but mujhe uske dil ki baat pata h ..he love her''

avinash grinned-''are u sure that he loves her''

amita giggled-''200% sure i want to meet her n her family avinash''

avinash-''ok if u want then i'll find her address tomorrow''amita gave him her cell-''why tom not today?? find it today only kal jaakar mahi ka haath hi maang lenge direct''

avinash chuckled-''amita amita aarav se jyada tumhe jaldi h atleast mahi se puchne to do ki wo aarav ko pasand karti h ya nhi hum uski marzi ke against jaakar yeh realtionship nhi create kar sakte na''

her smiled faded-''yeah u r right but jaldi han''he nodded while sipping his tea...

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she looked at clock nervously...only 5 minutes left in 7...all her collegues left for their homes but she was there hitting her head in nonsense files...she looked all around there is silence which made her heart thudding loudly...she closed the files n packed her bag with shaking hands...she got up from chair n looked at clock it striked exact 7pm...she walked towards the canteen nervously


she searched for him-''mujhe yaha bula kar pata nhi khud ka chale gye''...she looked at doors n then on vacant chairs...there was dim light coming from street lamp as canteen n office lights were switched off...

after few seconds she felt a  warm touch on her shoulder..she turned but before she could speak anything she felt strong arms around her...her  heart beats more faster than ever...she felt affection n love in his hug she too want to embraced him tightly but how could she hugged him...he is hitler ...everytime he humiliate her...hurt her she should be angry with him...but there is one more thruth that he cared her...he had console her when she need someone..he is not that bad n the biggest truth is that she love him''aal her thoughts came to end when she felt his arms snaked on her waist ...she closed her eyes n embraced him tightly...

after few seconds

she opened her eyes n smiled -''i lov''but her throat got chocked in between as she saw aarav stood behind with tears in his red rage eyes...her grip on him loosened automatically ...she was stunned to saw him with tears but distracted to heard abhi's words-''i miss u mahi''

a tear rolled down on his cheek which he imediately wiped out n left without looking at her ...she pushed abhi back...abhi surprised to saw her act but soon he understand the reason of her annyance

he stammered-''i really very sorry mahi...wo tumhe yaha itne dino ke baad dekha to apne ap ko control nhi kar paya im really very sorry''she looked at him with moist eyes...she clutched her bag n rushed outside the canteen...

abhi tried to stop her but she  was already out of his sight...


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mahi went to his cabin but he was not there...she wiped her face-''sorry aarav ji mujhe laga aap ho waha par''then she heard some noise outside ..she hastily looked outside through the window n shocked to saw aarav's hand injured badly
 
mahi hastily made her way outside n went nearer to him...she took his palm in to her hand when he pushed her back-''don't dare to touch me...stay away from me...i don't want to see ur face''this made her broke through inside...she tried to speak but her thrat chocked again...he opened the door of car n drive off from there leaving her in tears


precap-''mahi-''mera resignation letter''aarav tore the letter into pieces n throw on her face-''agar resignation de dogi to apne so called boy friends se kaise milogi mahi''he came closer to her-''mere bhai ke alawa or kitne boy friends h tumhare...atleast 7 to hone hi chahiye monday to sunday roz naya''

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
res.

cnt beleive..aise time mei bhi i cn be first

~EDITED~

valentines day k dinn aapne dil tudd diya di...kya sady sady update tha..
 but twist was jabardasth...

i knw aapko twist dena cha lagta h, but aise bade bade jhatke naa diya karo ki heart hi fail ho jaye...

mahek ko aarav se tarane ki kya jarurat thi di...
usse abhi se takkar karwa dete...mei kuch nhi kahti...
 but ye mahek..
paaka sab gud-gobar kar degi...

jaise gobar ke aage good lagane se, gobar gud, yani acha nhi bann jata , vaise hi mahek ki bahen sweet si mahi hona se mahek sweet nhi banti..

jal kucadi h...Angry

abhi- hamehsa wrng time entry.. :/
bakwas banda ekdum..

pracpe se tho aur rona aa raha h...job kitni imp. thi mahi k liye..but chodni padd rhi h..n aarav is so annoyed...ek baar baat tho suno uski...aarav..

amita is rocking...aunty aap hi ho iss update k hero...yeah! super  hero...
yes, jaldi jaldi shadi kra do mahi aarav ki...Wink






Edited by sweetsanyo - 14 February 2013 at 4:40am

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
OMG aarav is relly Hurt Emotionally and bit physically too...:(
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
awww...valentines pe itna dardnak update...Ouch
ye abhi uloo ka patha...isi time pe entry marna tha thodi der se ata to kuch ho jata kya...Angry...n lo ye abhi kam tha jo ye mehek bhi a gayi...kaha kaha se love story main vamp's ate h bye god...Confused
hey bhagwan ab toh amita ka hi sahara h...mata ji plz ab ap hi in dono ko saath la sakte ho...
n precap...oh aarav you shouldn't say like this to her...Cry
update soon...
luv u...Smile

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tejjo

Originally posted by ridzzi

Fab. Yaar but ye song kis movie ka tha?
So he was about to confess but ye toh tunn thi behosh ho gayi
n after that office main by god, he always watched her through window in open hairs awww
n they both confessed but alone yaar dhatt teri ki
n precap ye gadha abhi beech main kaha se a gaya, i m sure wo abhi hoga n peechey arav hoga...yaar aisa ni hoga na plz aisa mat karna mera nanha sa dil toot jayega
update soon
luv u :-)
thank u ridzzz for ur lovely comment
loved it
i hope u loved the song
becoz ddlj ka song fit nhi baith rha tha kyuki aarav not like that srk na

he is very silent n simple so thats whySmile
love u

absolutely not dear...songs must be according to the scene, i know it very well...Smile

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