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Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai? RTMC FF Prt 15-Page 82 (Page 55)

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shafyyy

nice part
thank u dearBig smile

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetnandu

such a sweet update...lovely..
thank u dearBig smile
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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samu_khamkar

Once again romantic, lovely, cute update with little bit of comedy tasks...

Pure update me I was LOL nd bichbich me Embarrassed Day Dreaming

Continue soon
Big smile thank u pariii
im happy nowTongue
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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonalimurat

Hey wowww
Kitna shona update tha
 LOved it so much ...Tongue
 
Aarav n Mahi ...Dance...So Howttt Blushing
 
I m still in dreanland .u described it very nicely Clap
 
ohh mahi was crying .she not having her true momdad...ohh baby ...Cry
 
n liked the way he console her Smile
 
...n the last scene me ..she forgot ...
 
n HE KISS HER Shocked
 
I mean my expression is Embarrassed  Embarrassed  Embarrassed Wink
 
n the top on cherry.is she respond him ...oooh
 
ehem ehem Embarrassed
 
ab jakar huyi Love story ki shuruvattt Big smile ye huyi na Baat  Wink
 
Love this story n you dear so muchhh
 
update sooon
 
waiting Day Dreaming
Hugthank u sona for such sweet commentEmbarrassed

love u alot 

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

o nahiii!!...

O haan!...o shittt!!!...

O yesss!!!...

Kya jo maine last mei padha, precape se pehle vo sachh h.. ahem ahem..

Pehle muje laga em dreaming, dats why maine ye line 5 bar padhi..

 But preacpe padhke I m sure its no dream'.

He kissed her, she kissed him.. balle balle'!

Dance'so cosy cosy dance..soft and happening..lovely description..

 N aarav kya dream kerr arhe ho tum.. dude ATLEAST DREAM MEI THO BADA SOCHO'APNI FIRST NIGHT HI SOCHH LETE    @@[email protected]@

DREAM BIG'

BUT KOI NAHI.. TUM JAISE HITLER NE ITNA SOCHA' HUM READERS PER MAHARBANI HOI'

Dance ka best prt was- her heart skipped as her gaze fell on his hard wall like clean shave chest which peeping out of his shirt...her heart beats fasten but thank god he spun her n her beats became normal now..

 

Agr aarav spin nhi karta tho mahi kya karti 'ahem ahem'9(muje bhot sharam aa rahi h aage likhne mei'))

Haye..mahi kya pallu, chunni!...and mahi kudh.. sab kamal k character h'

But aisa hamehsa mahi k sath kyun hota h'actually aisa mahi k saath hi hota h isliye tho vo antic h'

Di aap samjh rahe ho na!!...

 O come, agr aarav  mahi ko jhel sakta h..tho aap tho muje pakka jhel sakte ho..

Train ruk nahi sakti thi'correct.. aarav k baap ki nahi h na.. jo uske kahne se ruk jati' :/

he move towards her-''to tumne mujhe kiss back kyun kiya''she gasped-''wo wo...wo''--

 

wo vo voh!!...kya h na.. skul mei shikhaya h JAISE KO TAISA'koi aapko kiss kare..n banda handsome ho tho pakka kiss revert back karo..

 isese national integrity and population dono aage jake better hongi'. REOL.

 

Chubby bubbly update di..

V gud.

 

Mischhh u di.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

waiting for ur comment rashu n here is it 
sweet n long as always
u liked it meri mehnat safal ho gyi or mere mind ke corrupt vichar bhiLOL
feeling happy to see such a sweet sweet reviews
thanks again babes
love u n miss uOuch
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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridzzi

aley wah aley wah aley wah,part toh bahut acha tha
ha always love mahi's useless babbal,maza a jata h bye god kinni mast bandi h bye god n arav was only thinking that whole dance scene,dhatt teri ki
but koi ni us dream sequence ka last part jo adhura reh gaya tha train k whistle ki wajah se wo last update pe pura ho gaya...*blush* blush*
n precap ha ha bolo mahi agar acha nahi laga toh back kiss kiu kiya,bolo bolo jawab do hmmm
waise ab toh arav ki c
handi ho gayi
update soon
luv u    :-)
thank u ridsss for r comment
will update very soon but u also update some os na plsss im waiting
love u too
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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

Loved It To The Core !!!!
thanks dearSmile
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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swati_prithvi

Thnx so much for d ud dear..
It's awesome as always..
so Aarav was thinking that he is kissing to Mahi..
Owww..Embarrassed
that's so cool & at the same tym lil sad too..Wink
Mahi really talks too much..
& that scene was so funny..
wen she was busy with her dupatta..
& thn told to Aarav..
aap train ko rok nhi sakte the kya?
main busy thi aap to nhi..
hahaha..
kaash main waha hoti Aarav k expression dekhne us tym..
definately that will be perfect..Smile
thn Mahi told abt her family..
oh so she is adopted..
they r nt her real parents..
bt I never felt so..
her family luvs her so much..
she is really lucky to hav family lyk that..
she shudn't b sad at all..
& Aarav he is in luv wid her..
Oh my...
itni jaldi..
hahaha..
thn what is this???Shocked
he kissed her..
& even..
Mahi too kissed him..
hayo rabba..
kya baat he..Embarrassed
& thn d precap...
wow it's so interesting..
waiting for d nxt ud..Smile
u write superb yaar...
muaaahhh
thanks swati for lovely comment
me iss comment to baar baar padke khush ho jaati hun
thank u dear
will update soon
muahhhEmbarrassed

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