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Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai? RTMC FF Prt 15-Page 82 (Page 53)

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tejjo

nhi dear mene yeh ff nhi padha Big smile

to fhir apko ye padhna chahiye ye bhi RTMC ka hi ff hai on Prithvi and Sanyo and i am reading it second time ...the writer didnt gave the index but its till part 17Smile

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshi4ipkknd

Originally posted by tejjo

nhi dear mene yeh ff nhi padha Big smile


to fhir apko ye padhna chahiye ye bhi RTMC ka hi ff hai on Prithvi and Sanyo and i am reading it second time ...the writer didnt gave the index but its till part 17Smile
ok i'll read it...ud v jaldi dungi
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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
nice part

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
such a sweet update...lovely..

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Once again romantic, lovely, cute update with little bit of comedy tasks...

Pure update me I was LOL nd bichbich me Embarrassed Day Dreaming

Continue soon

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Hey wowww
Kitna shona update tha
 LOved it so much ...Tongue
 
Aarav n Mahi ...Dance...So Howttt Blushing
 
I m still in dreanland .u described it very nicely Clap
 
ohh mahi was crying .she not having her true momdad...ohh baby ...Cry
 
n liked the way he console her Smile
 
...n the last scene me ..she forgot ...
 
n HE KISS HER Shocked
 
I mean my expression is Embarrassed  Embarrassed  Embarrassed Wink
 
n the top on cherry.is she respond him ...oooh
 
ehem ehem Embarrassed
 
ab jakar huyi Love story ki shuruvattt Big smile ye huyi na Baat  Wink
 
Love this story n you dear so muchhh
 
update sooon
 
waiting Day Dreaming

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged

o nahiii!!...

O haan!...o shittt!!!...

O yesss!!!...

Kya jo maine last mei padha, precape se pehle vo sachh h.. ahem ahem..

Pehle muje laga em dreaming, dats why maine ye line 5 bar padhi..

 But preacpe padhke I m sure its no dream'.

He kissed her, she kissed him.. balle balle'!

Dance'so cosy cosy dance..soft and happening..lovely description..

 N aarav kya dream kerr arhe ho tum.. dude ATLEAST DREAM MEI THO BADA SOCHO'APNI FIRST NIGHT HI SOCHH LETE    @@blush@@

DREAM BIG'

BUT KOI NAHI.. TUM JAISE HITLER NE ITNA SOCHA' HUM READERS PER MAHARBANI HOI'

Dance ka best prt was- her heart skipped as her gaze fell on his hard wall like clean shave chest which peeping out of his shirt...her heart beats fasten but thank god he spun her n her beats became normal now..

 

Agr aarav spin nhi karta tho mahi kya karti 'ahem ahem'9(muje bhot sharam aa rahi h aage likhne mei'))

Haye..mahi kya pallu, chunni!...and mahi kudh.. sab kamal k character h'

But aisa hamehsa mahi k sath kyun hota h'actually aisa mahi k saath hi hota h isliye tho vo antic h'

Di aap samjh rahe ho na!!...

 O come, agr aarav  mahi ko jhel sakta h..tho aap tho muje pakka jhel sakte ho..

Train ruk nahi sakti thi'correct.. aarav k baap ki nahi h na.. jo uske kahne se ruk jati' :/

he move towards her-''to tumne mujhe kiss back kyun kiya''she gasped-''wo wo...wo''--

 

wo vo voh!!...kya h na.. skul mei shikhaya h JAISE KO TAISA'koi aapko kiss kare..n banda handsome ho tho pakka kiss revert back karo..

 isese national integrity and population dono aage jake better hongi'. REOL.

 

Chubby bubbly update di..

V gud.

 

Mischhh u di.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 



Edited by sweetsanyo - 15 December 2012 at 11:24pm

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
aley wah aley wah aley wah,part toh bahut acha tha
ha always love mahi's useless babbal,maza a jata h bye god kinni mast bandi h bye god n arav was only thinking that whole dance scene,dhatt teri ki
but koi ni us dream sequence ka last part jo adhura reh gaya tha train k whistle ki wajah se wo last update pe pura ho gaya...*blush* blush*
n precap ha ha bolo mahi agar acha nahi laga toh back kiss kiu kiya,bolo bolo jawab do hmmm
waise ab toh arav ki c
handi ho gayi
update soon
luv u    :-)

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