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Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai? RTMC FF Prt 15-Page 82 (Page 35)

Riyaa16 Goldie

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashu1909

nice update and it seems that arav and mahi lovestory is gonna start soon
thanks dearBig smile

Riyaa16 Goldie

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshi4ipkknd

awww aarav  was so caring in the flight to mahi :)
thank u dearBig smile
Riyaa16 Goldie

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged

part 6

he whispered softly near her ear-''mahi''...she escaped herself in his curve of neck n shoulder...her warm breath struck on his neck..he closed his eyes..n she curled her hand around him...
there was another n last announcement..he looked at her she was still sleeping..he tried to removed her hand silently-''mahi''she lazily opened her eyes n smiled to saw him...he turned his face to other side...she realized that she laid completely on him..she gasped n remove her head n hands from his body-''sorry''

after sometime

they landed on singapore airport...she looked at airport with amazed eyes-''omg yeh airport kitna beautiful h na''n waiting for the reply from him...he gave her a scowl look  which was sufficient to vanish her smile...he turned his face n she show her tongue to him like a kid-''hitler kahi ka pata nhi last time kab smile kiya hoga''

aarav sat on chair waiting for his friend who supposed to be received them there...she was very excited to this tour cum bussiness trip... she placed her bags on chair n sat next to him-''abhi hum yaha kyun baithe h chalte h na gumne''

he frowned-''excuse me hum yaha gumne aaye h??''she bite her tongue-''nhi mera matlab tha ki mein bhot thak gyi hun to hotel chalkar thoda aaram karte h naa''

he raised his brow-''really tum thak gyi ho??''she murmured -''nhi wo''

''hi aarav''a male voice grab their attention...aarav stood up -''hi vicky''vicky saw the beautiful girl next to him-''ummm who is she''

aarav without paying attention at his question-''lets go''...she smiled at him n expand her palm-''hi im mahi his secretary ''annoyed on last words

vicky-''ohhh thats nice come''then they left 

on vicky's place

''so hwz u aarav bhot din baad aye ho yaha''

aarav-''while sipping his coffee-''im fine tum btao ''vicky looked at mahi who still stick to window-''yaha sab kitna beautiful h''

vicky smiled at her innocence-''she is so cute na''aarav  growled at him..which was unnoticed by vicky n placed the cup on table-''we have to leave now''

vicky-''lekin kaha tum yaha reh sakte ho aarav mene uncle se baat kar li thi''

aarav stood up quickly-''yeah i know but mera office hotel se kaafi pass h to''vicky nodded-''ok as u wish''

mahi came to him-''yaha nhi ruk sakte kya ''he frowned-''u want to stay there''she smiled-''han''he grabbed her arm n pulled her towards him-''than fine ruko yaha im leaving''n pushed her on bed''

she shrilled -''aa ''she placed her palm on arm-''hitler kahin ka''he hissed-''just shut up''

after 2 hours

they proceed to a hotel ...

manager of hotel-''sorry sir we have one one room vacant ''he put his hand on head n looked at her she annoyingly looked at other side...aarav-''ok thanks..he sat next to her-''single room h''

she didn't reply...he angrily looked at her-''tumse baat kar rha hun mein''she turned his face...he stood up-''jab man kare to aa jana room no 35''n leave her alone''she hummed-''apne aap ko samjhta kya h jab dekho jab apni marzi mein nhi jayung huh!''

she put her stuff n sat on bench outside the hotel...she opened her bag n start eating snacks which was packed by her mother-''maaa''she looked here n there-''yah to koi bus bhi nhi aa rhi h but bus ka karungi kya kaha jayungi india to bhot dur h''

she put her hand bag under her head n laid on bench...after sometime she slept on bench

aarav stopped working n looked outside through window..she slept on bench he went outside 
he pat her shoulder-''mahi''

she opened her eyes n surprised to saw him-''kya h mujhe nhi aana ander mein ek ladke ke saath ek kamre me nhi reh sakti''n sat annoyingly
he sat next to her-''dekho bhot raat ho gyi kal hum dusra room dund lenge abhi aaj raat yaha ruk jao''she frowned-''ek room me''

aarav-''sirf aaj raat ki baat h''she surprisedd-''sirf matlab kya h raat kitni baadi hoti h or mein aapke saath akeli ek room mein nhi so sakti''thats it this is limit for him he stood up from the bench n bend down lifted her in his arms n went inside the hotel..her eyes got widened-''yeh aap kya kar rhe h chodiye mujhe''she tried to freed herself but he hold her tightly...she made her face-''chodo mujhe mujhe nhi jaana chodiye na''he open the door with his foot n throw her on bed-''kyun chilla rhi ho mein tumhara rape kar rha hun idiot''he burst on her..she shivered n crawl on bed n stick to head board...he sat on couch angrily

she looked at him-''kaha soyenge''he frowned at her-''yeh bed kisliye h''he was furious with her unwanted blabbering-''will u pls shut up''she  made her face-''ek bed par dono nhi so sakte''

he put the pillow-''tum akeli to so sakti ho na then pls for god sake so jao or mujhe mera kaam karne doo''she laid on bed n cover her face with blanket-''thank u''she said from inside the blanket

he turned n looked at her-''shut up''

next morning

she stretched her arms lazily n looked at him..he was sleeping on couch...she went nearer n smiled to saw his face..she covered him with blanket-''jab bhagwaan ne itni acchi shakal di h to thoda smile nhi kar sakte hitller''

she went to washroom ...suddenly his phone start ringing he stood up n pick it up-''yeah i"ll there in 1 hr donit worry''

he looked at bed-''mahi'he got tensed to saw the vacant bed-''gyi kaha  wo''he looked all around then went outside

she came out from the washroom n search for her bag but it was not there-''mera bag kaha h''then she remembered last night incident.-''oh god mera beg to kal raat ko niche hi reh gya tha ab gya phenu mere paise phone or kapde sab usme the''

she opened the wardrobe but found nothing then she looked at his bag...she opened his bag n took out his shirt''

she wore his shirt which covered her fair skin  till her thighs...then she noticed that he was not there...she looked outside the window n heard the knock on doors...she quickly opened the doors n smiled to saw him-''kaha gye the aap mein kitni pareshaan ho gyi thi''he  scowled-''tum kaha thi''then he noticed her..she follow his gaze which returned on her..she realized that she was in shirt only...she rush towards the curtains n hide herself-''mera bag kal raat ko niche hi reh gya to mene''he turned her face n smiled

Edited by tejjo - 11 October 2012 at 3:47am

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Arpimugfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Prev update mein sab k comments per reply kiya ha di apne except my comment... Arav k khatara car k handle ki tarha aj mera dil tut geya...kisi ne sach hi kaha ha ki jinke apne ghar sishe k hote ha o dusro k ghar pe patthar nehi fegtein...mayne mahi se to kehdiya ki arav k dil ko mat todna per mujhe kya pata tha ki meri apni riya di mere dil ko tod dengi...

Anyway back 2 update... Abhi nehi to vicky humare mahi k diwane bohat ha arav so serf chup chup k ghurne se kam nehi chalega beta...pyaar karne se kuch nehi hota ushe jatana bhi padta ha

thoda sa attention dil se respect or bohat sara sacha pyaar bas or kya chahiye?...pyaar doge nehi to pyaar mileyga kaise??

Love u di cont soon

Edited by Arpimugfan - 11 October 2012 at 10:30am

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rai-kishori. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Loved The Update !!

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shruja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
wonderful update!!
loved mahi sleeping like baby
hehehe loved how hitler saw other side when she guess her after she woke up!! is he was staring her secretly as usual?
ohh our mahi is so excited and making aarav irritate
poor baby arav din't introduced her to vicky
but vicky liked her mahi hai hi itani pyari!
hehe liked her being stuborn not going with him in hotel room!!
but she made him sleep on couch!! gr8 going mahi!!
awe poor baby her bag with not her so wore aarav shirt!!
ahem araav guessing at her!! but aarav u r good boy!
u should not do like this!! hehee

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sweetnandu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Loved the update...simply supwrb...beautiful...
Mahi is so innocent..chulbuli..
Waiting for their love track...
Pls do update soon..

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Bells.E.cullen Senior Member

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Nice update...
Luved it...

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