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~| Being in Love |~ Part 3 page 3 ManVeer SS (Page 3)

Sunshinegirll Goldie

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:06am | IP Logged
very niceSmile Smile continue soonSmile

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Great update! It was soo cute. You have superb writing skills.Wink
Title suggestions: Our Story
                                     You & Me
                                      Being In Love

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Thanx for your lovely words of apreciation guysBig smile I love ya'llBig smile I go for the title " Being in love " Thanx for that PiggiesEmbarrassed
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wonderfulBig smile it was really nice i love your writing please please update soon i loved it

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 1:12am | IP Logged
                                                                        |~ Part 3 ~|
Manyata: Hum soch rahe the ki hum DS ki treatment ke liye kuch doctors bulwaye.
Brijraj: Par beta aap kisi acche doctor ko jaanti ho?
Manyata: Data hum nahi par Uday jaanta hai. I'm sure he'll bring the best doctor for DS.
Komal: Beta kaafi accha socha aapne. Agar Maasaheb thik ho gayi toh saari khushiyan laut aayengi iss ghar mein.
Vijay: Aap bilkul sahi keh rahi hai Maamisahab. Manyata Bhaai keep it up I'm proud of you.
Uday: Hmmm toh hum aaj hee unn doctors ko phone kar denge.
Brijraj: Vaise beta kaunse doctor ko bula rahe hai aap?
Uday: Uncle Brij hum Dr. Amit Shah aur unki team ko bulwane ki soch rahe the.
Komal: Woh toh US ke sabse bade surgeon hai na?
Uday: Ji aunty Komal.
I'm so happy that Daadisahab will be alright now. All this while I was thinking about myself and only myself but now it's time I think about my estate,family and my praja. It's time I be the perfect Yuvraani. I will make DS proud. DS was the one who stood by my side every time. She was the one who made me a Yuvraani. I will makke her proud for sure!
I looked at the calender b'coz Uday had asked me when to call those doctors. Oh shit! Holy crap! It's Uday's birthday this month. How can I forget? OMG I need to do something. Ahhh I'll arrange a Sur par Eye's party. But, I need someone to help me. Yup the new pyaar ka panchi's Vijay bhai and Unnati. I ran towards Vijay bhai's room.
Manyata: Vijay bhai I want to talk to you.
Vijay: Haan bolo M bhaai.
Manyata: Vijay bhai aapko yaad hai iss month Uday ka birthday hai.
Vijay: Haan yaad hai.Par woh kabhi bhi apna birthday manata nahi hai.
Manyata: Par kyu?
Vijay: Kyuki ussi din tum usse juda huyi thi.
Manyata: Par mein toh Uday aur mere Roke wale din gum huyi thi na?
Vijay: Uday ka b'day aur tum dono ka roka same day ko hua tha.
Manyata: Par ab toh mein agayi hu. (smirking)
Vijay: Kyu na hum Naanisahab ki surgery Uday ke birthday ke ek din pehele rakhe. Kyuki humesha uske birthday ke din sabse pehele wohi usse wish karti hai.
Manyata: Perfect! Toh aap apni Laila ko bhi boldo. W're arranging a party for Uday.
Vijay: Laila?
Manyata: Arre humari Sister in law cum bhabhi yaar.
Vijay: M bhaai.. tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi..
Manyata: I tell you!!
Days were passing an the day of DS's surgery is tomorrow. I'm so damn scared.  But, I'm excited for the party that I've arranged for Uday at our hotel. The Metropole. Eeps.. the 2 most important days of my life. Wait a minute! I forgot Uday's gift. Oh shit! I need to hurry..
Manyata was runnign down the stairs. She was almost 100 Kmph. When Uday stopped her in between.
Uday: Kahan jaarahi ho Princess?
Manyata: Woh Unnati aur hum mall ja rahe hai... (scared)
Uday: Choti abhi abhi Vijay banna ke paas gayi hai.
Manyata: Accha toh mein J ke saath jaarahi hu... (and she went from there in full speed)
Uday (to himself) : Isske dimaag mein kuch toh chal raha hai..
Oh gosh I need to hurry. I have to buy Uday's sur par eys gift. But hush hush... I won't tell anyone about it it's a secret... I went inside the shop and selected one of them. Paid money and my work  is over. Chalo bhaai gharpe jaate hai.
Manyata was walking toward her room when someone pulled her inside and covered her mouth. It was Uday and he was just a centimetre apart. Manyata could feel his breathe on her neck.
Uday: Tumhein nahi lagta peechle kuch dino mein tum humse dur bhag rahi ho?
He turned her to her back and pushed away her hair which revealed her neck. He kissed her on her neck once.
Manyata: Nahi Uday... mein tumse dur nahi bhaag rahi hu bas shaadi se pehele thoda distance mantain kar rahi hu... (lying obviously)
He did not respond just went on kissing her and she enjoyed it. Alot. Every kiss every touch made her shiver and sent butterflies in her stomach. He was enjoying it too. He turned her again and kissed her on her lips. The kiss was cute and short. But both of them loved it.
Uday: Fine then... shaadi se pehele humlog milenge bhi nahi OK..
Manyata: Arre Uday but tum meri baat ka galat matlab nikal rahe ho.
Uday: Tumhara matlab yahi tha Princess. Hum tumse naaraz nahi hai bus tumhari wish puri kar rahe hai.
Manyata: But Uday meri wish yeh nahi hai.
Without saying anything he left. He went outside and banged the door behind.
Uday: Hmmm wow Udayvveer kya acting karte ho.
That's it for today...
Precap: DS wishes Uday a haapy birthday...
Hope you guys are enjoying the SS... Please hit LIKE button if you like my work... Love ya'll

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Sakura24 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Loved it,
finaly so ds is getting better, that's good,
I wish Uday's birthday party won't end like Akash's party did,

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Amazing!! Loved it!! Plzzz do continue soon:D

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