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~| Being in Love |~ Part 3 page 3 ManVeer SS (Page 2)

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Wow...what an OSClap...finally something dreamyDay Dreaming
Loved ur work to the core of my heart...!!! plzzz write an SS on this...I want more updates...so dont be lazy and update soon...
Lovely work Tanvi...keep it up..Thumbs Up

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
fantastic OS! :) pls continue soon...

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
awesome os loved the writing the dialogues at some point was ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLROFL ROFL ROFL the line
mentos dimaaf kii baati galthe was too good and the kiss at the end was like cherry on the cake liked that u solved brijraj and komals problem and please if u can convert this into SS please but never the less the update was terrific 

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Hi guys, so I'm writing part 2Big smile This is converted into a SS. Love ya'll. And I won't be sending PM's for this one SORRY. And please suggest me title.
                                                                     ~| Part 2 |~
Manyata : This is not the end but it's just the begining.
Uday: Now, let me look at you (naughtily staring at her)
Manyata: How do I look? (innocently)
Uday: Cute...
 
Manyata: Ok so from now on I'll wear clothes like these OK.
 
Uday: Perfect!
 
 
 
We were fulltoo in love. I was in heaven. His touch sent surrents thorugh my body. Forget that, on top of that he was too hot to handle. Girls were staring at him when he went out of the trial room. But, he was just smirking. Oh this guy smirks alot.
 
I tried several things and I loved all of them. I was soon going to be a shopping freak like J and I was very confident about it.
 
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We decided to go to the food court and have some junk. I really loved having junk food and let me tell you'll he was still not leaving my hand. People stared at us and smiled. Just when we were making our way towards the table a girl came in between.
 
 
 
Girl: Awww hi handsome.
 
Uday: Thanks...(smirks)
 
Girl: Uday tum itni jaldi mujhe bhool gaye?
 
Uday: Oh crap! Sheena how are you?  (hugging her)
 
 
How can he hug a girl when I was standing right infront of him? How dare he? I smiled a bit bcoz I didn't want to ruin my image infront of that so called ' FRIEND ' of Uday huh. He didn't even introduce me to that girl or whatever her name is. He was so busy talking to her and finally she said
 
 
 
Sheena: Hello who are you?
 
Uday: She's Manyata my GIRLFRIEND.
 
 
What the hell did he just say? His Girlfriend? I was supposed to be his fiance right? I decided to keep quite. I will talk to him after this witch goes. Gosh she is so much chipkofying. On top of that Uday's wearing BLACK today. He looks sooo hot in black that's why this witch is behind him.
 
 
Uday: Sheena why don't you join us?
 
Sheena: No Uday gotta rush.
 
Manyata: Better (muttering)
 
Sheena: What?
 
Manyata: Nothing much Sweetie. Nice to meet you.
 
Sheena: Same here (showing arrogance)
 
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Manyata: Oh god Uday she was crazy. Aur tum itna kyu chipak rahe the haan usse? Tumhein kya woh itni pasand hai? Haan bolo.. Bolo na. Halkat Veda kahin ka
 
Uday: Arre she was just a friend yaar.
 
Manyata: Whatever she may be. Koi apni friends se itna chipak ta hai?
 
Uday: Wait a minute Are you jealous? (naguhty boy)
 
Manyata: And you called me your girlfriend. I'm supposed to be your fiance right?
 
Uday: Tumhi ne toh humse sagaai todi thi. So now you're my Girlfriend na.
 
Manyata: Fine but next time se mall mein black,red ya blue shirt mat pehena OK.
 
Uday: Tum bolo toh hum kabhi mall jaye hee na... (leaning close)
 
Manyata: Shut up...
 
 
Uday's hands were around my waist and mine were on his neck. Yes, I'm transfered to heaven again. He's like a drug to me now. We were in that positon for 15 minutes. Finally I snapped out of it.
 
 
Manyata: Uday Daadi sahab hummein ek saath dekh kar kitni khush hoti.
 
Uday: Princess humare paas abhi bhi time hai. We can call for the best doctors and make them trat Daadi sahab.
 
Manyata: But Uday I don't know any good doctor.
 
Uday: But I know. We will first talk to your parents and I will then call the doctors OK.
 
Manyata: Fine. Uday aaj raatko dinner table pe batayenge unhein.
 
Uday: Hmmm
 
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J was roaming about in the palace for the first time and she was loving it the lonliness was no more. She was her own friend. She knew her parents and family members loved her alot and she was living life with that thing in mind. Suddenly she saw Vijay and Unnati doing all coochie woochie.
 
 
J: What are you guys upto?
 
Vijay: Tumhein nahi pata we're now together. (keeping his hand on Unnu's shoulder)
 
J: What? Unnati are you OK? Tumhein yahi mile kya? ( childish)
 
Vijay: Oyee Jeh ghamandini humare baare mein aisa mat bolo haan.
 
J: Oh please Vijay bhai yeh toh sacchi bat hai haan.
 
Manyata and Uday entered.
 
Manyata: Chalo sab aaj sab family members ko humein kuch bolna hai. So be on the table.
 
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Everyone sat on their usual seats Uday and Manyata next to each other and same with Vijay and Unnati. Jeh was sitting with Buasahab. DS's chair was empty as usual.
 
 
J: Jiji aaj ap kuch important bolne wale the na?
 
Manyata: Haan J.
 
Vijay: Toh bolo kya bolna hai.
 
Manyata: Vijay bhai hum soch rahe the ki hum DS ke liye kuch doctors bulwaye.
 
 
 
Tell me how it was. Love ya'll and please hit the LIKE button.
 
 
Tanvi:)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Awesome update!! Plzzz continue soon:D

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AKlover101

Awesome update!! Plzzz continue soon:D
Thanks Fizza!!!
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 1:07am | IP Logged
I can't repeat that I'm in love with this, so I'll keep quiet :)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged

Loved the update.              Really happy that u decided to turn it into a Short Story...Title suggestion :      LIVING THE DREAM!!!

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