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~| Being in Love |~ Part 3 page 3 ManVeer SS

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Hello guys. Kaise ho? Anyways I've written this OS. I don't know what it isSilly Romantic,funny etc basically it's storyless! LOL only their POVS and all! Plus It's like a ummm dedication to all the DEK characters. It's just too lame. Read it at your own risk LOL
 
                                                                 ~| ManVeer OS|~
Standing here, when he is kissing me on my cheeks and my forehead I feel like I need an ambulance right away! He is the PRINCE CHARMING that I always wanted, silly me I was searching my PRINCE in Akash. I always betrayed him, hurt him and what not but still he is standing here loving me and caring for me. I feel like the luckiest girl in the world.
Manyata: Uday do you know how much I love you? Do you know I feel like the luckiest girl in the world?
Uday: Princess you were destined to be mine.
Manyata: I'm sorry Uday. I always betrayed you.
Uday: Princess oops right now Ms Haan nahi toh tum itni emotional kyu ho rahi ho chill.
Manyata: Oye Halkat vede teri toh.. (and she started running behind him)
They both were running through the hallway right now. Bhaagte Bhaagte door pe pahuch gaye and BOOM they both atlast fell on each other. They were lost in each others eyes. His touch made a current run through her body. He was a DREAM for her. They were still in that position that too in the loby!
                                                                                      *********
Brijraj and Komal were out for sometime. They both had sorted all their problems now. They both were real husband and wife now. They were going to surprise the kids at home so that the atmosphere at home would lighten a bit. They entered the Mahal and saw... saw... Manyata and Uday on top of each other. They didn't even know when Brij and Komal entered.
Brijaraj: Ahem.. Ahem...
Manyata realised she was on top of Uday and her parents were standing infront of them. She at once got up and started giving explainations.
Manyata: Ab... Ab.. Data woh mein na bhaagte bhaagte gir gayi Uday ke uppar.
Komal: Par beta aap bhag kyu rahi thi?
Manyata: Woh yeh Halkat mujhe chidha raha tha.
Brijraj: Kya kaha beta aapne? Woh yeh...
Manyata: Halkat (normally)
Brijraj: Kya? (getting angry now)
Manyata: Oops... Matlab Uday hummein chidha raha tha. (realising her mistake)
Uday could no more control his laughter. He burst out laughing. His laughter echoed the whole Mahal. Komal and Brijraj just stood there confused and Manyata shooting daggers with her eyes at Uday. Finally Uday stopped laughing.
 
Uday: Woh Aunty Komal and Uncle Brijraj humna janbuj kar Manyata ko chidha rahe the  kyuki ab hum dono ke bich sabkuch thik ho gaya hai. (smiling at Manyata)
 
 
 
Suddenly Vijay and Unnati entered. Yes, they went out on a date but no one knew. Vijay heard Uday's words.
 
 
Vijay: Kya? Such mooch? Mama, Mami aaplog wapas aagaye?
 
Uday: Vijay banna aapne sahi suna Manyata aur humare beech sab thik ho gaya hai.
 
Vijay: Vaise Udayveer Unnati aur humein bhi aapko kuch bolna hai.
 
Brijraj: Bacchon hum dono chalte hain aap sab baatien kijiye. ( came to know what happend between Manyata and Uday and left giggling)
 
Uday: Haan boliye Vijay banna kya kehena hai aapko humien?
 
Unnati: Hum batate hai dada. Woh actually Vijay aur hum ek relationship mein hai. (embarrased)
 
Uday: Bhaai behen ke na? (confused)
 
Manyata: Oye bewakoof yeh dono ab hum dono ke jaise pyaar ke panchi hogaye hai.
 
Uday: Kya? (super duper confused now)
 
Manyata: Tum mere kamre mein chalo samjhati hu. (no need to specify)
 
Vijay: M bhaai Ahem ahem...
 
Manyata: Kya?
 
Unnati: Kuch nahi aaplog jayo.
 
                                                                      *******
In Manyata's room. Uday was soo soo confused and Manyata was in a naughty mood today.
 
 
Uday: Neeche kya hua? Choti aur Vijay banna bol kya rahe the?
 
Manyata: ( no answer + she was searching for something)
 
 
 
She finally came next to Uday and handed him a MENTOS.
 
Uday: Yeh kya hai?
 
Manyata: Mentos. Dimmag ki batti jala de. Shayad tummein isse khaake kuch akkal aa jaye.
 
Uday: Shut up Manyata. Please tell me what happend.
 
Manyata: Vaise toh apni HUSHYAARI ke bade dinge haak te rehete ho ab kya hua?
 
Uday: Jawab dogi yaa nahi.
 
Manyata:Fine. They both are in LOVE.
 
Uday: Really? Choti ke liye Vijay banna se zyada accha ladka nahi mil sakta. I'm so happy.
 
Manyata: And I'm glad that you're happy.(smiling)
 
 
                                                                                     ************
 
J was now a lonely cow. She apologized to her Jiji but she was still busy in her newly found love. She did understand but what about her love for Uday? She also loved him. She was removed out of her chain of thoughts by Manyata.
 
 
Manyata: Jeh. Umm hum aur Uday shopping jaa rahe hai. Saath chalogi?
 
Jeh: Jiji aap aur Uday ab love birds ho. I'm not pleased with the idea.
 
Manyata: Matlab?
 
Jeh: I don't want to be a bone in the beef.
 
Manyata: Chalo na. There's nothing like that.
 
Jeh: Please Jiji don't force me.
 
Manyata: Fine. Byeee.
 
                                                                      *************
 
She got so happy being here once again. This place was so dear to her. The mall in which she met her sister, the mall in which she saw loads of dreams and a mall where she met Akash. She was grateful to Akash because he made her realise that she loves Uday and not Akash. He was just staring at her and smiling.  She got out of her thoughts and spoke up
 
 
Manyata: Chalo Uday uss shop mein chalte hain (pointing towards Manish Malhotra's big store)
 
Uday: Na princess aaj tumhein hum shopping karwayenge. OK.  Humari choice se.
 
Manyata: Ok sweetie.
 
 
They both stopped at a huge store. It was fully loaded with denims, tops, tees etc etc. She was confused but it was Ok with her as long as she is holding Uday's hand. He talked to the shopkeeper and she was lost in him. Finally she came out.
 
Uday: Yeh lo yeh try karo.
 
Manyata: Hayye rabba Uday yeh toh woh kya kehete hai isse apna... apna... woh...
 
Uday: Denims.
 
Manyata: Haan... Mein yeh kaise pehenu yaar mujhe anarkalis chahiye. Jaisi hu vaisi pasand nahi hu kya?
 
Uday: Tumhein toh hum har roop mein pasand ho. (Coming closer and closer to her and smirking.)
 
Manyata: Halkat Vede yede hum mall mein hai. Dekha na aaj ghar mein kya hua.
 
Uday: (starts laughing again.)
 
Manyata: Stop laughing, Chalo mein change karke aati hu.
 
Uday: OK.
 
Manyata came out of the trial room in a white colour cute halter neck top and a pair of denims. She was looking very very cute and all Uday did was he went inside the trial room closed the door and kissed her on her lips. She returned the kiss even more enthusiastically. She loved being in his embrace and he loved her lip gloss's flavour right now! The kiss was long and passionate they broke apart when they were out of breathe and all she said was
 
Manyata: This is not the end but the begining of a new story (for Forumvasi's )
 
 
So how was it guys? Hit the LIKE button if you like it. And please tell me if it was Lame and Bad. Sorry if I wasted ur time
 
 
Tanvi:)


Edited by princess_T - 10 August 2012 at 1:12am

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Finaly found something to dream about tonight :)
Thanks dear,
It was awesome!!

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cham42195

Finaly found something to dream about tonight :)
Thanks dear,
It was awesome!!
Thanks Cham... Met u after a long time!
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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess_T

Originally posted by Cham42195

Finaly found something to dream about tonight :)
Thanks dear,
It was awesome!!
Thanks Cham... Met u after a long time!

Yeah you too,
I wasn't here for some time, school stress
 now I'm back to trouble you allBig smile

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:21am | IP Logged
awesome awesome... why an OS??? please make it a SS... wud love to read more updates SmileSmile

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Awesome OS!

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
AWESUM OS Thumbs Up LOVED IT

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Tanvi.. It was a beautiful OS. Pls continue na. OS part II bhi chahiye. 

Loved it.

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