naksh OS:we will be always together :))

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Posted: 11 years ago
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the seen starts 4rm where the last episode ended goons breaking naitiks car...
one men come near window ans ask both naitik and duggu to come out of car..naitik gets off from car,his phone was left in car and aksh was continuesly calling..he was walking to hospital as duggu was having high fever.no rikshaw aur taxi were there on street.he made naksh chekup at the hospital ,doctor said its normal viral fever..naitik ask can he make a call but there was no signal ..😭
he comes out 4rm hosp tensely walking along the road
ai M's
Akshara rings g3, she misunderstood that it was naitiks call ans ,is there any news about naitik and lalla
Ak:maa..kuch nahi pata naitik aur duggu kahan hai,maine naitik ko call b ki lekin unka num nahi mil raha(whil crying continuesly)
G3:bahu,kuch toh dhyan rakah kar hadh hoti hai laparwahi hi kam se kam poch hi leti khaan ja rahe hai rok leti,ab kuch kehna hi bekaar hai.!cuts the phone
akshara was crying even more saying in heart"mere naitik aur duggu bilkul theekh hn"
it was 10 pm
vish:abhi tak kuch nahi pata chala hai sub jag poch liya kahin nahi hain jamai sa😲
all tensed aksh along rj crying😭😭
now time was passing swiftly
akshara was feeling as her heart was feeling very lowshe havnt any food 4 the whole day,no energy was left in her,even she was thinking that naitik was fasting too
rj:beta kuch kha le nahi toh kamzor padh jae gi!!
ak:maa jab tak naitik aur duggi nahi a jate mai 1 ghonth pani bhi nahi piyon gi..😭

akshara was standing near ms gate lost in memories she has spent with naitik and duggu🥺
suddenly a wide smile came on all ms people saying arrey jamaisa ap a gaye😆

akshara sees him and ran towards him hugs him tightly as she was never gonna lose him again😳😳
Ak:naitik ap kahan chale gaye the!!aapko pata hai na mai kitna ghabra jati hun...😭😭aapko kya pata meri kya halat ho gayi thi(breaks the hug)takes duggu 4rm him kisses him continuesly a sign of satisfaction was shining on her face brightly😳she sees naitik conditon as he was looking very much weak and tired and tensed.she was about to ask everything but stoped as she was soo much angry on him😡
ak:maa mai duggu ko dodh pilane aur sulane ja rae hun
rj:han beta bhoka hoga tu ja...
aksh goes 4rm there.
 vish :jamaisa ap aise in halat mai kahan chale gaye the ?😕
rj:ji ,abhi chodhiye jamaisa ka vrat hai phle unhe kuch kha lene dijiye🤪

nk:nahi maa phle mai zara akshara se baat karlun unka ka vrat khulwa dun phir khaon ga...
all says ok naitik goes to aksh room.
naitik cums o room with plate of food😊
aksh was sitting beside bed corner in very angry mood😡naitik sits beside her
naitik:akshara muje pata hai ap ne kuch nahi khaya plz kuch kha lijiye
Ak get up 4rm there and sit on her dressing table chair and start removing her jwellery,,
naitik goes near her and ask 4 a bite of food.
aksh:(stand up)muje kuch nahi khana hai!!!😡
naitik:im sorry akshara plz im sorry mai jantha hunmuje aise bina batye nahi jaana chahiye tahlekin naksh ro raha tha maine socha mai usey park le jaon.
Ak:kya! park le jaon,?naitik ap itne laparwah kaise ho sakt hain!!itne se bacche ko ap aise halaat mai park le gayeaur mujh se keh rahe the naksh ko bukhaar hai...ab ap apni galtiyon ko aise chupayen gy😡

naitik was feeling very guilty..he go to bathroom 4 changing clothes ,meanwhile aksh saw some medicine on bed that were of fever.aksh realises that without even being listening to whole thing she blasted out her anger on naitik
naitik come after changing aksh was standing there wid plate 2 feed him
ak:naitik,ab apna vrat todh dijiye muje pata hai ap mujh se bohot pyar karte hai,ab kuch kha lijiye😳
naitik(sadly):nahi ak,muje bhookh nahi hai ,plz ap kuch kha lijiye waise hi maine apko ohot tension di hai
ak:ab ap aur de rahe hain plz jaldi se kha lijiye😆
naitik :sath mai khate hain😳
both naksh feed each other

aksh change her clothes takes a bath and cums out of bath room .now both are in romantic mood😳naitik wa about to lie on bed when aksh cums near him
ak:q ...bohot jaldi hai sone ki??😳her wet late were on her face
naitik romoves them 4rm her face
Nk:nahi toh,bilkul nahi😳
Ak:toh hum neeche hi settle ho jaen!!
naitik:kya matlab??
ak:matlab aj sirf ap aur mai(trying 2 be cozy)☺️
naitik:put 1 pillow down 4rm bed,put matress there,and ask aksh to sleep there wid him(ofcourse his intension were not of sleeping)😉
ak:kya matlab(trying 2 be inocent)😕😆
naitik:matlab wohi akshara..aj sirf ap aur mai.😳ap duggu k aas paas pillows laga dijiye😉holding her tighter😳
ak:naitik ap chodhen gay toh lagaon gi na😳😆
then both naks lie on floor with no distance b/w them ,naitik bents towards akshi kisses on her neck,cheeks and so on...shhh agey piya bawri and ur imaginations😳😉😆

hope u all liked it as it was my 2nd attemptsorry if i pakaofy any1😭
likes and comments are always welcumed😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
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edited

awesome os keep writing
Edited by geetu_naksh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice .
wonderful attempt .
I hope dat we sumthing like dis in d epi . Dying 4 seeing tommorow's epi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ...
hope it goes in d  same way ...
waiting 4 9:30 2morrow

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os maha , nice one,

in the room scene  ak angry with naitik  😊  so nice , really this me  gives so nice one

nice os maha , 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vry emotional...loved it yar...
ae vaise hum bhi pure kameene hai...har baat ko ghoom phira ke smo oe lakar hi chodte hain...🤣
fooo uuu...🤗Edited by -Naksh4ever- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wah aaj FF day hai kya ? 😕 Ek emotional toh ek romantic kya baat hai maha awesome keep rocking  😃😃😃  hope aisa kuch hojaye 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waise maha idea acha hai bed ko chod niche settle hone ka i like it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pree4ru

waise maha idea acha hai bed ko chod niche settle hone ka i like it :)


ab naksh bed pe toh kuch karte nahi socha neeche hi kuch karlen☺️🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maha_Naksh4ever


ab naksh bed pe toh kuch karte nahi socha neeche hi kuch karlen☺️🤣

acha idea hai yaar 😳😳