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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Hii friends here i am writing my first OS on the 50th AT celebration of our fav jodii Inshii..

Please do share ur reviews this is my first attempt ...!!!



               ~~~~~   Momentum of Love ~~~~



Its 11.30 late nite Rishi comes down from terrace, searches for Indira and finds her siting in her room in her own thoughts, Rishi comes in open the wardrobe and gets a box which is gift wrapped says "shreematii jii yeh lijiye, Indira asks whats this, Rishii asks her to open up the box.

Indira with a confused expression opens the gift box and find a beautiful red  saree... She was was veryy happy seeing it and asks Rishi- "Rishii ye kis liiye"? Rishii says " aap ye saare sawaal baad mei kijiye aur ise jaldii se pehen kar bahar aaiye mein aap ka intezaar kar raha hun.." Indira before she could raise any other question Rishi left the room and closed the door... Indira had no option takes the saree and gets ready...


Indira opens the door, Rishii looked at her she was looking stunning in the red saree..Rishii glares at Indira with open mouth, Indira comes close to Rishii and with a veryy innocent smile closes his mouth and asks "khush"??? Rishii cmes back to his senses and says " Qayamath dhaal rahi ho aap toh shreemati jii lekin ek min ek kamii hai" Indira with a confused look, looks at Rishii, he cmes towards Indira removes the hair pin, all her beautiful hair falling down and Rishii couldn't stop starig at his lady love ...Later  realizes its 11.55 he asks indira to close her eyes.. Indira says--" yeh kya aadhii raat ko aankh meecholii khel rahe haii aap mujhe nahii khelna".. Rishii says-- "aap aise nahii manegii so he cover her eyes with a cloth lifts her in his arms  and walk towards terrace..Indira keeps on asking--'Rishii aap kahan le jaare haii   mujhe, aap kya kar rahe haii ???? Rishi frustrated says--"shreematii jii aapke aankh ke saath  shayad aapka muh b band karna  chahiye ta mujhe.. please thoda intezzar kijiye bas thodii der".


Finally they reached terrace, Rishii puts Indira down and says "mein abhii aapka aankh ke patti  khol raha ho, par aap aankh mat kholiye jab tak mein na kahun" ..Indira nodded with a yes... Rishi removes the cloth and says.." abhii aap aankh kholiye "...Indira slowly opens her eyes and was surprised to see the  entire terrace decorated with all beautiful lights and flowers.. Rose petals were all over the floor and she loved taking each step on those spread roses. Rishi showering the petals over her with every step she takes... she looks around and find everything so beautiful, the flowers decorated in a such a lovely manner where in a heart both ther names written Rishii-Indira...!!!


Indira all surprised and asks Rishii wat is all this turns and sees Rishi on his knees with a ring in his hand, holds Indira's hand and wishes her "Happy Anniversary Indira" Indira all shocked and happy had tears in her eyes then suddenly the last word of Rishii strikes her and asks "kya kaha aapne ??? ".. Rishii in a naughty mood gets up and says "kya kya kaha happy anniversary kaha , kyuii aap toh bhul gayii thi na..." Indira says nahii uske baad kya??? Rishii- Usske baad kya kya???? Chaliye ab aapkii baarii wish kijiye apne patidev ko.. Indira again asks-- "mere pyaare patidev jiii aapne abhii kya kaha, phir se kahiye giving him a hitler look" Rishii with his naughty smile.." shreematijii aisiii baatein kabhi kabhii achii lagtii haii isiliye ise baar baar nahii kehte" and winked at her... 


Indira too undertsood and blushed over it and asks yeh sab kya aur kyui?? Rishii says looking at her eyes and holding her hand--"aaj hi ka din tha shreemati jii jab aap mere zindagi meii aaye, aaj hi ka din tha jab hum janam janmantar ke bhandhan mei band gaye the, Samaaj ke nazron meii nahii balki uss parmeshmer ke saame and apne dil se hum iss rishte mei jud chuke the, aaj hii ka din tha jo hamare pyaar ka saakhsii bana tha... merii zindagii mei aane ka bahut bahut shujriya shreemati jii.. Ab tak pyaar ke liye tarasta tha, lekin jab se aap aaye ho merii zindagii mei, merii zindagii mei woh kamii aapke pyaar ne  purii kardii.. Aap ki wajah se woh din merii zindagii ka sabse khoobsurat din tha aur mei iss din ko aapke liye b yaadgaar bana chahta hun.." Indira hearing this was so touched was almost in tears gave a tight hug to Rishi..  Rishii tooo controling his tears held her tightly in her arms, don wanna this moment to let go...


Now both Rishii and Indra walks towards the small table kept at the middle of the terrace  ther was a small cake on which happy anniversary was written, both Indira and Rishiii blow the candle and cuts the cake, Rishii again wishes Indira gives her a bite of cake and so did Indira.. Then the music starts Rishi held Idira's hand and they both start dancing on the romantic version of our fav bol na halke halke...Indira keeps her hand around Rishii neck and Rishii around her back both deeply lost in ther world of love...!!!


Suddenly Rishi's phne rang and they both moved apart, Rishii attended the call, Indira was now in a masti mood took a small piece of cake and went towards Rishii, as soon as Rishii hanged up the phone, Indira cme close to him, keeping her hand back, Rishii looking at her suspiciously, Indira wishing him happy anniversary patidev jii and puts the creams on his cheek and runs...  Rishii shocked with her act tires to cach her running after her all the terrace finally catches her, holds her one hand and places the other hand back, comes close to her, more close, they wer just inches apart, Indira and Rishii can clearly hear each ohers heart beat they were tooo fast, Rishii comes more close, Indira closes her eyes, and Rishii rubs his cheeks and apply the cream on her cheeks.. Indira all shocked, Rishii leaving her hands says "Happy Anniversary to u too shreemati ji"  and wispers in her ears-- "aapse hii sikha haii shreemati jii " Indira blushes stand still and looking at him, Rishii gave a wink and enjoyed al her expressions..!!!


Indira shying and just wanted to change the topic and say-- "Arrey meine toh aapke liye koii  toofah nahii layii and made a cute baby face...". Rishi says "aapne toh mujhe duniya kii  sabse khubsurat toofah diya haii" Indira again with a confused look 'meine kya diya haii aapko"...Rishi leaves from ther and gets a gift which was kept under the table, and tells Indira "Yeh dekhiye yeh diya haii aapne mujhe"... Indira 'abb yeh kya haii " Rishii "Khol kar dekhiye".. Indira opens the gift and was surprised to see wat was ther in -it was a beautiful painting of Indira smiling which was made my Rishii.. Rishii looking at the pic says "yeh haii aapka toofah sabse khubsurat aur sabse keemti aapki Muskaan" Aaj hi ke din mujhe ye tofaah mila tha aur us lamhe ko meine is tasveer meii khaid karliye aur ab yeh hamesha ke liye merii haii".. 


Indira hearing this was so touched and loved the painting and even more was moved how  immensely this person loves her.. Indira holding Rishii 's hand says- " aap mujhe shukriya keh rahe haii, lekin mein aapse kehti hun meri zindagi meii aane ka bahut bahut shukriya... aap hii hai jisne mujhe jeena sikhaya, aap ne mujhe pyaar karna sikhaya, aapne mujhe parivaar par logon par vishwaas karna sikhaya, merii zindagii khushiyon se bhardi, mujhe ek aam ladki ki tarah sapne sanjogna sikhaya, mujhe  muskurana sikhaya, mujhe itna pyaar diya itna pyaar ki mein ab hitler nahii rahii,  zindagi haste huye khelte huye jee rahii hun, aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf aapki wajah se Rishii.. Aapke saath bitaya hua zindagii ka har pal har lamha mere liye anmol haii, merii zindagii ki sabse badii khushi aap hai Rishi " saying this tears fell from both ther eyes Rishii held her in her arms tightly and says "love you shreemati jii"...


Both in tears holding each other tightly, then rishii loosens the grip and says "ab bas rona

dhona nahii, aaj ka yeh pal sirf hamare pyaar ke naam" and wipes the tears.. Indira-"mujhe keh rahe haii aur khud aansun baha rahe haii".. Rishii "toh aaphi pochiye na aansun shreemati jii" Indira comes close to wipe his tears and to his surprise she ended kissing him on his cheek. Rishii was shocked and Indira blushing again 


Then there  was a falling star- Rishii "shrematijii woh dekiye tutta taara jaldiii se kuch wish karte haii"... Indira "aap maante haii ise"??? Rishii--  "haan kyu naii aaj ke iss special

din hum dono kuch maangte hai..." Both Rishii and indira holding each other hand closing ther eyes makes a wish... Rishii-- "mein aapse bas yahi maangta hun ki merii shreemati jii ko hamesha mere saath hi rakhiye, iss zindagii ke safar meii mein hum hamesha saath chale saath rahe aur hamara pyaar aur bhi gehra hota jaye aur zindagii ke aakhrii pal mein hum saath rahe..." Indira "mein jaanti hun Rishii ne aapse hamara saath maanga hoga, aur mein yehii maangti hun ki unkii har iccha har khwaish purii ho.. hum hamesha har mod par saath rahe chahe woh hamari zindagii ki aakhrii saans hi kyui na ho..."


Wish every moment of ther life be as special and as beautiful as this lovely jodii Inshii Heart



Inshii forever  Heart




Edited by shona90 - 05 August 2012 at 7:28am

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Shona its very very beautiful OS. Clap i can't believe its your first OS, the way you wrote symbolizes inshi perfectly Heart it looked as if our own InShi were their at this place Embarrassed just want to say keep writing dear you are my Star Star Star ShonPari ka naam roshan krte rahiye Hug loved it, keep going Thumbs Up

Edited by pari117 - 05 August 2012 at 9:52am

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:31am | IP Logged
nice os shona...!!!!...

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
very nice!!!!!
inshi forever

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Ahh shona! I cnt believe u wrote an OS..Lovely and a sweet OS dear.. Keep up.! Need mny more OSs,FFs n SSs frm u!

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Very nice amazing os inshi forever thanks for os

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Shona.Hug
beautiful os.Big smile. Loved it.Embarrassed
keep writing more.Wink

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shona wonderful osClap
keep writing more on InshiSmile

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