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Annies Book DEVIL'S DESIRE

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
I purchased Annie's book on flipkart.  It was great.  I read it in one go.

MARVELLOUS

But Annie can u stand some criticism on my part? 
My irresistible kidnapper should have been made into a book also.  It was a beautiful story.

 Some mistakes which I found with the book was poor editing and bad choice of font.  The whole book looks like some badly done Indian text book.  I think u should have been a little more involved in the font and the printing.

The word conscience is spelt as conscious all throughout the book.  

In the Preface column u have spelt Gurmeet's name wrongly and GHSP as Geet hsp.  Yaar you don't make so much mistakes in the forum as u have made here.  The continuing dialogues of one character have space between the line which breaks up the flow.

Even then for a new writer this was great.  Keep up the good work.  Write more books.  We are sure to buy them.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH.


Edited by sree10 - 05 August 2012 at 5:14am

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