Originally posted by: -krazyriya-
OMGGG behena... I'm speechless! π²
And I'm speechless on seeing the length of your comment π²π
the part is so...awww urmmm...n ummm... haayeee...βΊοΈ
haaiii allah...my behena is blushing :P
beautifully scripted...π³ loved each n everything...to the core... π€...so naturally described...n decorated with the cherry of reality...! aaah ! just loved it...β€οΈ..!!
I'm glad that you loved it π³
I was literally having goosebumps reading it...βΊοΈ..!!
I can imagine you haalat π€£
Megha's nervousness...fear... dari si...sehami si megha... yet she has that charm of sweetness...π³ simplicity n bindaaspan..π...awww i just love her like this..π€.!!!
And you know ki iss FF ki Megha kaun hai actuallyπ
Mohan couldnt help but smile... awww that was very sweetly written..π³...! He lost in her beauty...trying hard not to...π but megha ke charm se wo bach nahi paya...i loved this part... u have described these emotions of MM so well...π how both were nervous... though they know they r husband-wife now... still those initial inhibitions prevail inside... it was very aptly written..π.! must say, you understand these so well... really hats off to your capability of writing...executing... n handling such a situation so perfectly ..βοΈ..! too good for words behenaa...!!
Thank you thank you thank you sooo much! π³π³
Megha in pink salwar-suit with white dupatta...hayeee i loved it... its my fav. combination too...! teri aur meri pasand sach mein bahut milti hai...π
Abey yeh tujhe aaj pata chala? π Issi liye toh ek hi insaan pe marte hai *blush*
I loved the way...you are accompanying the part with so much matureness n realistic versions...π³ like Megha asking for help... its so practical these days... n we, girls shouldnt hesitate from expressing...atleast from our husbands!
I agree! See its just like.. they both know very well that being husband and wife, they can be like that yet as they're strangers, they get nervousπ³ Its like.. mind bol raha hai ki husband hai lekin dil hai ki ghabra jaata hai *blush*
Mohan...bechara... awww i loved the way he was feeling a li'l shy initially...π³ n my most fav. part/ line is :
"Mohan did notice
that she trembled under his physical contact but didn't ask anything
about it since he didn't want her to be uncomfortable."
the red part : awww nothing can be more sweetest than this... every girl desires for such an understanding n caring husband...! I just love MOHAN...hayeee...βΊοΈ
I know you love mohan but no worries, as i've tried to keep this ff realistic, he wont be perfect either..his imperfectness will show up slowly ;)
n Megha's balaji soaps wali line... was awesome... i literally cracked up there... π€£...yeh bindaas megha mujhe badi pasand hai by god...π€
tujhe pasand aani hi thi ;)
OMGG ! toh next part mein MM talk... tujhe pata hai kya... i have always dreamt of such a SR...βΊοΈ i want newly marrieds to talk... to talk more... n know each other more...baki i cant explain well here..π. tujhe SB mein btaungi...π. but i'm too damn excited for the next part...
Will be updating soon :D
And... I know its special for both you n me...! the reason is... ahem ahem...
*ahem ahem*
PS : I was imagining the whole scene side by side... as if I myself is present there...βΊοΈ
Aage aise bhi scenes aayenge jaha agar khud ko imagine karegi tohhh *cough cough* π
keep rocking meri behenaa...ππΌ
Thanxxx behena π€
love youuu...π€
Varshu β€οΈ
Love you toooπ³
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