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Virman SS : Bahon ke Darmiyaan Part 14 pg 54 (Page 33)

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CHAPTER 9
 
 

Manvi was so hurt and she was now getting mad hearing what Virat had said to her ... instead of going to her room she walks up to the terrace ... Standing under the sky filled with stars ... Manvi looked up tears rolling down her cheeks ... "Mama papa ... aap to sab dekh sakte hai naa ... apne dekha kaise virat ne mujhe un baaki larkiyon jaise bola ... kya such mein ... main un baki larkiyon jaisi hoon ... Abhay to mera acha dost ... sirf dost .. lekin lagta hai virat ko kuch ghalat lag raha hai ... lekin kyun ma papa ... or waise bhi mujhe is se kya faraq parta hai ... ki woh kya sochta hai kya samjhta hai ... mujhe uski baaton ka itna assar kyun ho raha hai ... batao naa ... kya mein such mein boori hoon ... nahi boori main nahi ... virat ka soch hain ... main ab usse kabhi baat nahi karungi kabhi nahi ... kash aap log yaha hotein ..." she started complaining she just sat there and hugged her knees and was still crying ...

Next Morning ...

As usual as every morning Jeevika walks into Manvis room to find it empty and its all cleaned seems like manvi was never even in the bed ... she walks into her washroom to find it empty as well ... She got worried by now she checks each and every room but she still could not find manvi ... When she bumps into Virat ...

Virat: Bhabhi aap theek ho sambhal ke ... (he noticed jeevikas worried expressions)

Jeevika: Virat .. tum ... tumne Manvi ko kahi dekha hai kya ... (shocking virat)

Virat: nahi to bhabhi lekin kyun ... shayad woh apne kamre mein hogi so rahi hogi woh ...

Jeevika: nahi meine sab jagah dekh liya lekin uska kahin pata nahin chal raha ... phone bhi nahi uttha rahi .. pata nahi kaha chali gayi itni subah subah ... lekin woh itni subah kabhi nahin uth thi ...

Virat: kya aapne abhay ke kamre mein check kiya .. (virat said with hurt expressions and stern voice )

Jeevika: she replies in a NO and runs towards abhays room ... Virat followed her ... his heart was hoping that manvi should not be there cuz then he did not know what would he do ... Jeevika stopped outside abhays room and knocked ... abhay opened his rooms door rubbing his eyes ...

Abhay: Goodmorning Jeevs ... virat ... itni subah subah ... sab theek to hai ... (sleepy voice)

Jeevika: Abhay kya manvi tumhare kamre mein hai ... stealing glance over at virat ... she knew if manvi was in abhays room he would be so hurt ...

Abhay: mere kamre mein ... nahi jeevs woh yaha kyun hogi ... kya baat hai ... manvi theek to hai naa ..

Virat: woh yaha nahi hai ... (in a low voice  )

Abhay: confused expression ... nahi ...

Virat remembered his words from last night it hit him ... and he knew he did not do right by telling such things to manvi kind of girl ... virat deep inside knew that abhay and manvi are just friends but he just could not digest the fact of someone else touching manvi ... he was lost in his own world ... he did not realise when his bhabhi and abhay had left and were looking for manvi all over the place ...

Virat also tries to look every where in the house ... when he noticed the terrace door open ... he just rushed towards the door and was shocked to see the scene infront of him ... He noticed manvi lying on the floor hugging her knees ... he runs towards her ...

Virat: Manvi .. manvi ... tum yahan ... manvi aankhen kholo ... manvi please ... he had cupped her face ... when manvi slightly opens her eyes ... and looks at the gloomy eyes infront of her ... he was lost on those chocolate brown eyes ... she kept staring at him ... she felt nice having to see his face first thing in the morning but the second when virats words buzzed in her ears  she moved his hands away from her face ... she did not want him to touch her anymore ... and tries to get up ... right then abhay walks in ... Abhay almost screams manvis name and runs towards her ... hugs her tightly ... and even manvi hugs him back ... virat's blood was boiling by now ... seeing them hug each other ... he was really hurt and it was all shown in his expressions ...

Abhay : kaha thi tum ... pata hai main kitna pareshan ho gaya tha ...

Manvi: woh main ... pata nahi kaise ...

Abhay: manvi (lifts her chin up ... tum royee thi) virats gaze fell over manvi now ...

Manvi: arrey nahi woh ... kal raat ko main yaha bas yoohi neend nahi aa rahi thi to aa gayi ... pata nahi kaise aankh lag gayi ... and she gave slight smile ... (abhay knew something was wrong as he could see the expression on manvis face being around virat now and also could see virats expression of being hurt and may be guilt ...

Jeevika : Mannu ... she runs towards her ... and hugs her tightly .. meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi ... tu yaha kya kar rahi hai ... aur kal raat ko ... tu yahan soyi huwee thi ... mannu tu kabhi nahi sudregi naa ...

Manvi: di main bilkul theek hoon ... aap pareshan kyun ho rahi ho ... sorry di meri wajah se aap itni pareshan ho gayi ... woh ..

Jeevika: kuch mat keh ab ... mujhse puchti hai mein pareshan kyun ho rahi hoon ... mannu par tu yaha ... acha ab choro ... chal fresh hoja ... aur naashte ka time ho raha hai ... abhay tum bhi jaO ... Virat chale ...

Virat just nodded ... everybody at the breakfast table were eating quietly as manvi was quite so was everyone else ...

Dadaji: kya baat hai aaj breakfast mein koi kissi se baat hi nahi kar raha ... kya baat hai manvi beta tumhari tabyat to theek hai naa ... tumhari ankhein itni sooji huwee kyun hai ...

Manvi: ji dadaji ... meri tabyat ko kya hona hai ... main theek hoon ...

Dadaji: to phir aap aaj itne chup chap sehmi se kyun ho ... kissi ne kuch kaha ... batao humein

Viren Jeevika abhay looked at manvi and virat ... Whereas virat offcourse knew the reason behind manvi's silence... Manvi fixed her gaze at virat and replied ...

Manvi: Nahi dadaji aisi koi baat nahi .. waise bhi kuch logo ki bato se MUJHE KOI FARAQ NAHI PARTA ... (virat had almost took the spoon to his mouth when he stopped and gave a look to manvi)

Dadaji: haan beta kabhi kissi ki bhi baaton ka ghalat assar nahi parne dena tum aapne upar ... humesha kush rahoo ...

Abhay:  issi baat par ek sher arz hai ... "Gham nahi wahan jahan ho fasana aapka
Khushi bhi dhundhti hai har pal fasana aapka,
Aap udaas na hona kabhi zindagi mai,
Bohot achha lagta hai hame muskurana aapka…!" aadaab aadaab ...

Manvi was smiling by now ...

Dadaji: arrey wah kya baat kahi hai aapne beta ...

Virat: Karta raha fareb koi saadgi ke saath,
Itna bada mazak meri zindagi ke saath,
Shyad mili saza iis jurm ki mujhe,
Ho gaya tha lagaw mujhe ek ajnaabi ke saath ….

Manvi gave a very dirty look to virat : Sitam karo ya na karo, hum gila nahi karte,
Virano mein kabhi phool khila nahi karte,
Magar itna yaad rakhna,
Hum jaise dost baar baar mila nahi karte… changing her gaze to abhay now ... and they high fived each other ...

Viren: kya baat hai ... lagta hai aaj sab shayraana andaaz mein hai ... to hum bhi ek sher arz karna chahte hai ...

Manvi was now back to herself ... arrey wah jeeju ... irshaad irshaad ...

Viren: Nigahen aapki pehchan hai hamari,
Muskarahat aapki shan hai hamari,
Karna hifazat tum apni,
Kyounki sanse aapki jaan hain hamari… (looking at jeevika)

Manvi: wah kya hai baat hai jeeju ... wah wah ... kyun di ... teasing her and jeevika blushing ...

Abhay: mujhe nahi pata tha .. app log bhi shayrana andaaz rakhtein hai ...  kya baat hai man kush ho gaya humara ...  jeevs tumhari baari ...

Jeevika: nahi main nahi .. mujhe kaha ...

Manvi: haawww di jhoot nahi ... please di ... jeeju ke liye kuch bol do ...

Dadaji: haan beta sunao ...

Jeevika: Garmiye hasrat ke nakam se jalte hai
hum chiragon ki tarah shaam se jalte hai…
jab aata hai tera naam mere naam ke saath..
naa jano kyon log hamare naam se jalte hai

Manvi: oh ho ... kya baat hai ... Jeevika was blushing by now ... Dadaji ... chaliye ab aapki baari aap bhi to kuch boliye ... please dadaji ...

Dadaji: nahi .. mujhe kaha shayri aati hai ..

Manvi: dadaji zaroor aapne kabhi to dadi ji ke liye kuch naa kuch to bola hoga .. unhi mein se kuch bol dijiye naa ..

Virat was now just admiring her .. he had forgotten about abhay for a few seconds all he could see and think was how cute manvi is ... she can be so childish at time and so mature at second ...

Dadaji: acha toh sochne do humein ... (swamini and vanshika were enjoying there shayari now ...) Har Ek Chehre Pe Guman Uska Tha Basa Na Koi DiL Me Ye Khali Makan Uska Tha Tamam Dukh Mere DiL Se Mit Gaye Lekin Jo Na Mit Saka Wo 1 Naam Uska Tha.

Viren: wah dadaji …

Manvi: Dadaji bahut pyaar karte the aap dadiji se naa … kitni khushnaseeb hai dadiji … ki unke jaane ke baad bhi aapke dil mein woh hai ….

Dadaji: Beta sacha pyaar jo hai naa … woh ek aisa ehsaas hai ki chahe jo ho jaaye woh humare saath marte dum tak rehta hai …

Abhay: Dadaji I am pretty sure …. Dadi ji bahut khoobsurat thi naa …

Dadaji: Bahut … pata hai … uss zamane mein bhi kitne log marte they unke upar … ek baar to hum bazaar gaye they …. Aur kaafi yo ko pata nahi tha ki who shaadi shuda hai … khule aam aake unke saamne shaadi ka prastaav rakhte they … aur jab unko pata chalta ke mein unka pati hoon to sab ki hawa nikal jaati …

Everybody laughed …

Virat: Kya aapko bura nahi lagta mera matlab aapko dard nahi hota jab koi aur unki taraf dekhta ya unko choota …

Dadaji: Lagta na kyun nahi lagta … lekin mujhe to apne pyaar par pura yakeen tha naa … kyunki usmein uski kya ghalati thi … who thodi naa gayi thi uske paas … aur choone ki baat … kissi ki himmat nahi thi … kyunke mein who naubat aane hi nahi deta … aur aisa koi karta bhi naa to woh too … mano gaya tha …

Virat: lekin dadaji agar woh larki khud uski taraf jaaye mera matlab

Manvi: virat tum jo ho naa apna matlab apni soch apne paas hi rakho … zaroor nahi har larki ek jaise hoti ho … kabhi har ungli ek barabar hoti hai nahi naa … to please apna logic apne tak rakho to behtar hoga …

Viren, jeevika and Abhay got the idea of what must have happened between them …

Virat: Manna ki har ungli ek barabar nahi hoti … par iska yeh matlab to nahi hota … ki har koi acha ho har koi un jaisi larkiyo ki tarah naa ho … waise bhi har larkiyon ka sirf ek maqsad hota hai …. (Manvi was hurt again … hearing that from him …)

Manvi: Virat … tum

Swamini: Manvi … Virat ne aisa kya kaha ki tum uske upar bharak uthi … tumne aise kyun use baat ki … I think tumhe usse sorry kehna chahiye …

Jeevika was looking really worried … because she thought things had turned around and she exchanged looks with Viren …

Manvi: Bua ji meine aisa kuch ghalat nahi kaha … and she just left …

Jeevika: Mannu … she just looked at everyone and sat back …

Abhay: Jeevs don't worry mein dekh ke aata hoon … jeevika just nodded and took a look at virat ….

Dadaji: Abhay kitna acha larka hai … aur manvi aur iski Jodi kitni achi lagti hai naa …

Virat was about to leave when he was shocked hearing what Dadaji said ….

Jeevika: Pata hai dadaji maine bhi kuch aisa socha tha …

Viren: Jeevika toh lagta hai humein Unse baat kar leni chahiye kyun…

Jeevika: Haan viren ji …

Swamini: Haan … yeh dono kaafi ghule mile rehte hai … shayad yahi sahi rahega … MANVI KE LIYE … looking at virat …

To everyones shock … Virat just stood up from his place making noise from his chair as he puled it hard and just barged out of there and made his way upstairs ….

Everyone exchanged looks …

Swamini: lagta hai manvi ki baton ka kuch zyada hi asar par gaya hai virat par … kahi who ab phir se pehle jaisa na ho jaaye … yeh larki bhi pata nahi aur kya bawaal machayegi … she gave a dirty look over to jeevika and just left from there as well …

Vanshika: "Main dekhti hoon"

Jeevika and Viren were exchanging worried looks to each other ... when ….

Dadaji: Kya tum dono ko sach mein lagta hai ki Manvi ki Jodi abhay ke saath achi hai …

Viren gave a confused look to jeevika …

Jeevika: Ji dadaji said hesitantly …

Dadaji: mujhe to nahi lagta … meine kuch aur hi dekha aaj …

Viren: Kya dekha aapne …

Dadaji : Viren main ek judge hoon kaafi duniya dekhi hai maine … aur mein logo ki taraf ek nazar se dekh loon to mujhe sab pata chal jaata hai … aaj meine jo virat aur manvi ke aankhon mein dekha … who shayad tum dono ne mujhse pehle hi dekh liya tha … shayad tabhi to … Jeevika beta tumne Abhay ko yaha bulaaya …

Jeevika: dadaji aap … she was just smiling and was shocked hearing that from dadaji …

Dadaji: kyun choka diya na … us din jab tum abhay se baat kar rahi thi … tab mainw tumhari thodi thodi baatein sun li thi … aur mujhe isse zyada kya khushi hogi ki tumhari behen manvi humari choti bahu banne … aur tum dono ke is plan mein mein tumhare saath hoon …

Viren and Jeevika was so happy hearing all this from dadaji …

Jeevika: Thank you so much dada ji … agar aap maan gaye hai to mujhe aur kissi baat ki chinta nahin hai …

Viren: Mrs. Vadhera … chinta to honi chahiye … kyunki yeh mat bhulo humare ghar mein abhi world war hone jaa raha hai … kyun ki cold war to shuru ho chukka hai …

Dadaji: haha haha … yeh baat to tumne sahi kaha beta … lekin tum fikar mat karo … un dono ko bahut jald ehsaas ho jaaye ga …

Scene Shift …

Abhay: Manvi meri baat to suno … darwaza khol do … sirf mein hoon aur koi nahi …

Manvi kholo naa …

Virat was passing by there to go to his room … when he saw Abhay there outside manvis door …

Virat: Kya huwa …

Abhay: pata nahi manvi darwaaza nahi khol rahi …

Virat: lekin kyun …

Abhay: lagta hai tum se naraaz hai …

Virat: tum naa chup karo … (Virat was now banging the door really hard now he knew this would irritate her now … "dekho ab Jhansi ki rani kaise aati hai" he heard her footsteps and stepped aside from the door)

Manvi: Kya hai tumhe karaar nahi hai kya … samajhte kya ho … aise koi darwaza mein maarta hai … mujhe thodi der ke liye chen se rehne nahi de sakte … (she was screaming her lungs out at abhay now … and virat was enjoying the scene infront of him … abhay was all shocked hearing her so loud … he knew she is loud but never knew she could be this loud too)

Abhay: Manvi main woh … nahi…

Manvi: kya main woh nahi laga rakha hai … Please abhay mein thodi der akela rehna chahti hoon … (when she saw a reflection of someone and she knew it could not be abhay banging the door so hard )… Abhay I am really sorry mujhe tumpe aisa chilana nahi chahiye tha … main kissi aur ka gussa kissi aur pe nikal rahi thi .. waise bhi mujhe aise waise logo ki baton par itna react nahi karna chahiye naa … I am sorry … will you forgive me … who kya hai naa … ki tum bahar kyun ho andar aao naa … main humare beech koi disturbance nahi chahti …

Manvi took abhay inside with her … and this fumed virat even more … he went inside his room …

Virat: "kyun kar rahi ho tum aisa manvi … kyun … mein kyun nahi bardaasht kar sakta uski nazdiyan abhay ke saath … aure maine usse gusse mein kitna kuch keh diya … kyun … kyun … mujhe jaake uss se maafi maang leni chahiye naa … main jaanta hoon manvi un larkiyon jaisi nahi hai .. phir kyun maine usse utna kuch kaha … kyun dar lagta hai ki kahi manvi bhi waisi larkiyon ki tarah naa bane … aur yeh abhay … kyun aaya humare beech … kyun who manvi ke itne kareeb rehta hai … kyun wooh usse chotha hai … mujhe kya ho raha hai … aur manvi ka itna affect mujhpe … kya main manvi ko … nahi .. mainto sirf manvi ko protect karne ki koshish kar raha hoon … manvi meri bahut achi dost hai to main … usse kaise kissi aur se dosti karte dekh sakta hoon … urrggg … MANVI MANVI MANVI … main kyun manvi manvi laga ke rakha  hoon… kyun …"

Viren: Kya main andar aa sakta hoon ..

Virat: Bhai aap .. aayiye naa …

Viren: smiled and walked in … kya baat hai mere bhai … kaafi pareshan lag rahe ho .. sab theek to haina …

Virat: Ji bhai sab theek hai … aap …

Viren: virat dekh mein tera bhai hoon … aur tu chahe jitna bhi chahe naa mujhse nahi chupa sakta … bola b kya baat hai … kya tu manvi ko leke pareshan …

Virat: (he was shocked hearing his brother guess about manvi) bhai woh kya hai …

Viren: virat dekh maine notice kiya hai .. ki tum manvi se kaafi naraaz ho … par usne aisa kya kiya hai …

Virat: bhai usne … kuch nahi kiya …

Viren: to phir … wwoh aaj dining table par tum dono aise kyun jagar rahe the … aisi kya baat hogayi hai ki tumdono utni choti baat ko lekar behas kar uthe … jaha tak mein jaanta hoon tum dono ko .. tum aise nahi ho … kaafi understanding hai tum dono ke beech … tumhare har faisle mein manvi ka saath humesha raha hai … usne tumhe kya se kya bana diya … tum dono ki dosti ek misaal ban sakti hai … to phir akhir kiss baat par tum dono jaghar uthe … virat kahi … tumse manvi ki dosti abhay ke saath nahi dekhi jaa rahi … kahi tum usko lekar possessive to nahi ho rahe … meri to kuch samajh nahi aa raha … tum dono ki dosti ki itni gehri hai … ki tum apni din ki shuruwat usse karte ho aur khatam bhi … aisa kyun hai ki saara din tumhare hooton par sirf aur sirf manvi ka naam hota hai … manvi ne aisa kyun kiya … usne aisa kyun kaha … maine tum dono ko humesha jagarte dekha hai … lekin aaj jo maine dekha … who tum dono nahi they … tum dono ka rishta kaafi alag hai … baaki sab tum jaante ho … virat kahi tum …

Virat: kahi main kya bhai …

Viren: tum samajh daar ho khud samajh jaoge … main chalta hoon abhi … der ho rahi hai … party ki tayaari bhi karni hai …

Virat was lost in what his brother just said … "kya bhai jo keh rahe the … who such hai … kya mein manvi ko lekar waqay mein possessive ho raha hoon … kya issiliye mein usse kissi ke  itne kareeb nahi dekh sakta … kya mujhe itna faraq issiliye par raha hai … kyunki main manvi se …. Kya such mein… main manvi se … (he stood up … started walking around the room back and forth and then stood infront of the mirror …) Kya tum virat vadhera … us bandhari ke liye possisive ho rahe ho … kya tumhe such mein … usse … oh god … kya mujhe usse …. Pyaa..aaa…aaa.r (dragging the word pyaar) ho gaya hai … and givng his million dollar smile) and then he closed his eyes … and he got the flash backs of all the times spent with her and from their first meeting, their nok joks at the wedding till there present situation… and he was indeed smiling more than anything … and then the thought of abhay and manvis jodi struck him … and coming out of his thoughts … lekin ab mein us abhay ko manvi se door kaise karu … kahin manvi bhi to …. Nahi nahi… manvi usse pasand nahi … wooh sirf dost hai … sirf dost .. Agar sirf dost hai to phir who usse apne itne kareebkyun aane de rahi hai … main bhi to uske kareeb gaya tha … lekin … mujhe usse baat karni paregi .. mujhe usse apne dil ki baat batani paregi …. Usse apne pyaar ka ehsaas ab dilana padega … main aaj mein sabke saamne apne dil ki baat karke rahunga"

Everyone else in the family is busy in the preparations of the party …

Jeevika: Mannu chal ab tu jaake thodi der aaram kar le … kaafi thak gayi hogi naa tu …

Manvi: Nahi Di … main theek hoon … waise pregnant main nahi aap ho … toh is liye aaram ki zaroorat aapko hai mujhe nahi …

Jeevika: meine bahut aaram kar liya … tumne mujhe kuch karne diya hi nahi … sab kuch tumne kiya hai … dekho hall kitna sundar lag raha hai …

Manvi: di mere saath saath abhay ne meri bahut help ki … di abhay bahut acha hai (virat heard her say that)

Jeevika: noticed virat … haa mannu abhay waqay mein bahut acha hai … jo bhi usse shadi karegi naa who bahut lucky hogi … tera is bare mein kya khayal hai …

Manvi: di yeh baat to aapne such kahi … abhay ki biwi kaafi lucky hogi … aur pata hai … usne mujhe bataya ko who kissi ko pasand karta hai ….

Jeevika: pretending to be shocked … KYA …

Manvi: aap itna chok kyun gayi ho … haan who kissi ko pasand karta hai … aur usne mujhe kaha ki mein usse jaanti hoon bahut ache se …

Jeevika: Kya who larki bhi usse …

Manvi: arre kaha di .. abhay itna bewakoof hai ki usne abhi tak usse nahi kaha … aur who larki bhi pagal hogi agar usne abhay ko naa kaha ..

Jeevika: Agar who tujhse kehta kya tu usse haan kehti ….

Manvi: Di kaisi baatein kar rahi ho aap … abhay mere dost jaisa hai … aur … pata nahi … meine aisa kabhi socha nahi … shayad …

Jeevika: acha …

Manvi: di aap bhi naaa … saying that she left … she turned and saw virat standing there and she noticed hurt in his eyes … cuz as soon as he met her gaze … he lowered his eyes and turned around and just left … manvi didn't like seeing this from virat … but she was really mad at him … she knew he didn't mean what he said … she knew he said that in anger … she knew he prolly saw her hugging abhay … she knew he saw abhay kiss her in the cheek … and she knew that for a fact he did not like her being close to him … but she was still mad at him … for not understanding her …

Jeevika : Mannu kaha kho gayi tu …

Manvi: di nahi kuch nahi … she walked away from there … and while going to her room she noticed virats door slightly open … she peaks in and finds him fighting his emotions with his punching bag …

Abhay: arrey manvi tum yaha kya kar rahi ho aur kya dekh rahi ho … (he opens the door and marchs in taking manvi along … ) Oh virat … kya baat hai … kiska gussa nikaal rahe ho is bechare punching bag ke uppar …

Virat was just ignoring them and was punching the bag harder and everytime abhay would say a word he punches becomes stronger and harder … Manvis notices that virat is not even wearing a band around his fingers which means that … he is hurting himself with that ..

Manvi: Virat yeh kya kar rahe ho tum … virat tumhara haath … virat ruko please … she tries to go around him … to stop him but it seems like he is just not in the place and busy fighting with someone … abhay relaises he situation and walks out of the room quietly …

Manvi: Virat meri baat suno … Virat … VIRAAAT … SHE SCREAMED THIS TIME …

He stopped the punching bag holding it with both hands … Sweat was dripping all over his body which was making him look even more hotter … He turned his face around and looked at manvi …

Manvi: tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko haa … tum kyun kar rahe ho yeh sab … kya saabit karna chahte ho … Virat tumne kal raat ko jo kuch bhi mujhse kaha maine chup chap who sab sun liya … lekin tumhari yeh harkate … who jo aaj breakfast table pe … yeh sab karke kya dikhana chahte ho tum … tumhe lagta hai main bhi un baaki larkiyon main se … pata hai tumse baat karna hi bekaar hai ….

Manvi just pouted and moved to leave the room when two hands gripped her by her shoulders and pinned her to the closest wall … she panicked and just closed her eyes tight … She could feel his breath on her face now as they were just inches apart … Virats eyes were fixed at manvis … and manvi still had her eyes tight shut … A part of manvis face was blocked by her hair which was blocking his view from her face … he moved his right hand and his other hand was loosened in her arm too … and by now manvi was not able to bear the closeness between them … his breathe on her face was tickling her … as soon as she feels his touch on her face … she got goosebumps all over her body …. Her eyes were close still but not tightly close as she was not scared of anything anymore ….  He moved her hair from her face and his other hand went towards her waist now … he had missed being close to her like this … he had missed tucking her hair behind her eye … he had missed the feeling he gets after his fingers touch her angelic face … He brings his hand under her chin now … indicating her to open ur eyes …. But manvi still had her eyes closed … Virat brought his face more close to her … they were really close to each other now … Manvi could feel her body weaking  … she held him by his arms now … she slightly slowly opened her eyes and found a pair of brown eyes staring at her … she got lost on them simantanously ….

Manvi: Virat … she stammered calling his name in a whisper …

Virat was now holding her by her waist only with his both hands … "Manvi … mujhe nahi maaloom main kya kar raha hoon … main nahi dekh sakta … nahi dekh sakta … main" said in a whisper and now his gaze were down and were not loking in her eyes … Manvi was already melted with his touch and him stealing his gaze from her made her yern for his look now …

Manvi: Virat …

Virat just looked up at her and forwarded his head … and their forhead met … and they stayed there … Manvi's tears was rolling down her face … "Manvi … virat said in a whisper … manvi tried to look at his face … when she felt a kiss on her forhead … and manvi's eyes widened and she moved him away from her in a jerk … "tumhari himmat kaisi huwee" said manvi … "Kya matlab" said astonished virat … "kya matlab … yeh jo tumne abhi kya … tum samajhte kya ho" … she was cut by virat as forwarded towards and held her tight again from her shoulders … "kyu kya ghalat kiya maine … his grip on her got tighter … sirf tumhe tumhare sar par kiss kiya … uski tarah cheeks par nahi …" said virat in an angry hurt tone … "virat mujhe dard ho raha hai … choro mujhe …" said manvi …  but she felt him coming near her face now to kiss her … she closed her eyes tight shut again … as her body shuddered by his this move …

Suddenly they both came out of their trance when they heard the door opened up and virat released his grip from her quickly and noticed Swamini Bua staring at them both …

Swamini: yeh kya kar rahe ho tum dono…

Manvi was looking down and was really nervous she did not know the consequences …

Swamini: Manvi apne kamre mein chalo abhi aur issi waqt …

She didn't even look up at her or virat and just walked out of the room … swamini gave a look to Virat and walked out and straight went to Manvis room

Swamini: Manvi …

Manvi: Bua aap … mujhe bula liya hota ….

Swamini: Yeh tum abhi virat ke kamre mein yeh sab kya ho raha tha manvi …

Manvi: who bua main …

Swamini : HUMARI BAAT KAAN KHOL KAR DAYAAN SE SUNO …

Shift change …

Abhay: Jeevs lagta hai aaj humara plan kamyaab ho jaayega …

Jeevika: Haan abhay … mujhe bhi issi baat ki umeed hai ... mujhe lagta hai … ab humein eh sab yahi par khatam kar dena chahiye … lagta hai humnein kuch zyada hi kar diya … hai naa …

Abhay: haaan shayad mein josh mein aake … kuch zyaada hi kar betha … Virat to dekne laayak tha … itna gussa itna gussa meine aajtak kissi ko karte nahi dekha …

Jeevika: Baghwan kare sab theek ho …

Scene Shift

Swamini: ummeed karti hoon meri baateing tumhe yaad rahegi … and by saying that she walks out of the room …

Manvi lost her balance and crashed on the floor and started crying like crazy …

OK I hope I met upto ur expectations … i hope you guys are still interested in this story … do comment and leave ur feedback … its always so nice to read all the beautiful comment from you guys … As you all know ur feedback motivates me and makes me want to right more … its just I am busy with life … so I am trying my best to atleast give one update in a week atleast …. I am trying not to take too long … ad I hope you guys enjoy this one … I haven't reached to the party thing yet … but next update hopefully I ll have it longer and will be filled with more virman and party and swamini buas surprise … till then keep reading … and please do leave your sweet comments ….

Love you all

Sanam …  

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
Just Amazing, terrific update
Loved it 4rm core
What Swamini bua Angry damn prob always interfering... I hate her
I just love each n every shayari, it was superb
Love the whole update...
That swamini bua always creating prob between them hope it'll never affected their relationship
Thanx 4 d pm dear n update soon
Most important take care of ur health first
Heart

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Lovely update!
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
Great chap
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Viat's realisation was amazing once again viren did his job cupid bro
Loved dadaji wah kya judge hai so he has too joined virika and abhay so abhay is jus part of the plan for VirMan's realisation/confession
Loved virat's kiss on the forehead but argh SB
Always the problem now what she upto that manvi began crying oh my god im tensed SB Whts ur problem?
Updte soon and pm me please
Thanksz x
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
amazing update!! 
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Wow... Jealous Virat... Bt swamini urghh again vamp here... M sure she askd her 2 be away from Virat.. Awesome update. Continue soon.

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