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Thankyou so much for all the beautiful comments, I am so glad you guys liked the story.
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Gr8 start!! Cont soon. I luv da title:)

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Part 2

Virat: bhai suna aapne ...
Viren: kya virat ...
Virat: koi chilaya ...

Viren: nahi tohh ...

Virat cudnt resist and ran upstairs towards manvi's room to see if she is ok ...

Viren : Jeevika hum lights ka dekh ke aatein hai ...

Viraat rushed to manvi's room and could hear manvi's scream again ... he panicked

Virat : Manvi manvi darwaza kholo manvi kya hua ... maaanvi darwaza kholo ...

Manvi ... manvi yeh kaisa mazaq hai darwaza kholo nahi toh mein darwaza tod dunga ... with that her scream getting louder ... virat gave hard push to the door (filmy style) and dere the door wide opened ... as its dark he can hardly see anything ... suddenly his gaze fell ... towards the bed he could see her sit in the corner of the bed lifeless.

Virat: Ma .. manvi ... he whispered ... hard to see what was infront of him fighting with his emotions he tried to call her name again ... Manvi ... and then he saw shadwn running towards the balcony, before he could react the shadow disappeared he ran towards the balcony and saw viren and jeevika...

Virat: BHAI USSE BHAGNE MAT DENA ... CHODUNGA NAHI MAIN USSSE ...

Viren started chasing that person ... jeevika turned to come up ... Viren kept running after that person .. he could hardly see that persons face ... he didn't even know the real reason why is he running after him in the streets of Chandigarh ... before he could get a hold him ... he saw a car coming in a full speed with a full spung hit the person and the person layed lifeless ... viren came near him to see who he was if he was still breathing but he was no more ...

Scene shifted

She looked up to see virats face ... and started weeping badly ... virat forwarded towards her. She was sitting in a corner of her bed hugging her knees ... virat came near her and saw her face ... he coudnt believe his eyes seeing manvi in that state no words coming from his mouth all he did was stared at her ... he hit his fist hard at the wall ... manvi looked up and put her hands around his neck and hugged him tightly, she started crying even harder ... virat couldn't see her in that state ... he closed his eyes tight to take the fact in.

Virat : in a firm voice "Manvi main hoon naa yaha, kuch nahi hoga" lights were back on ...

Manvi looked up to see his face ... and virat was shocked seeing manvi in that condition ... tears down her face ... hair messy ... her sleeve ripped ... a cut near manvi's mouth with stain of blood ... virat pulled manvi back in his arms in a jerk ... anger was now all over virats face ...manvi could feel him boil in anger ...

Virat: Manvi kaun tha woh ... Kaun tha woh manvi ...

Manvi: main... mai ... main .. nahi jaanti replied through her sobs ...

Virat: shh ... shhh ... manvi kuch nahi hoga main hoon naa ... main kuch nahi hone dunga ... lekin woh jo koi bhi hoga ... main usse nahi chodunga ... nahi chodunga main usseee ...

Jeevika:"Mannuuu ... said shocked Jeevika ...

Jeevika looked shocked looking at the scene infront of her ... jeevika rushed towards manvi ... Manvi too scared to even show her face to her di ... she gripped virats shirt tighter and hid her face in his chest now ...

Jeevika getting all worried : Mannu ...looked up at virat to get her answers "virat mannu ko kya hua ... woh meri taraf dekh kyun nahi rahi ... virat jawab do"still got no reply ... Jeevikas gaze fell towards manvis bed where everything was scattered and manvis dupatta lying on the floor ... she was shocked she stood still ... not able to move ... Jeevika was too shocked to react but she put on a strong face for her mannu ... ... Tears rolling down her face she looked up at virats face and his eyes ... virat giving her the assurance that she is fine ... she grabbed her dupata from the floor and wrapped it around manvi and held her by shoulders ... manvi then felt her di's presence and pulled herself from virat and broke into her di's arms, her world and started sobbing. Virat walked out to check on Viren ... Jeevika held her tight tears rolling down her cheek, still comforting her mannu ...

Jeevika : Manu main hoon naaa ... sab theek ho jayega ... dekh meri taraf ... teri di aa gayi hai naa mannu ... bata mujhe kya hua ... Manu dekh naaa ... tears rolling down her face ...

Virat: Bhai kya hua ... kaun thaw oh usse pakda naa aapne ... (viren was all quiet he didn't know how to tell his brother, the person who he was chasing is dead and he is no other than virats friend ) "Bhai kuch bolo naa"

Viren: hua kya hai woh yaha se bhaga kyun ... viren all confused ...

Virat: Bhai woh Manvi ...

Viren: Manvi ko kya virat ... before virat could say anything he rushed towards manvi's room and understood everything ... he went near them and put his hand on jeevikas shoulder for giving her the support she needed ... jeevika looked in his eyes with a helpless look ...

Viren said nothing but " He is dead"

All looked shocked ...

Viren: noticed manvi shocked as she stopped sobbing ... "Manvi dekho hum sab yahan hai darne ki koi baat nahi ... aur usko uske kiye ki saza bhi mil gayi hai ... ab ghabrao nahi sab theek h jayega" he placed his hand over manvis shoulder...

Jeevika: Viren ji yeh sab kaise ... hai baghwan ... (with this manvi started weeping harder)

Viren: Jeevika sambhalo apne aap ko ... sab theek hai ... tum manvi ke kapre change karwa aaaooo ... mein abhi aata hooon ... (viren and virat walked out the room)

Jeevika: mannu mujhe bata kya huwa tha mannu ... jeevika heard whatever manvi told her quietly ... and assured manvi that everything is fine ...

"Mannu bhagwan ka laakh laakh shukar hai ki virat time pe aa gaya ... huh tu ghabra mat sab theek hai aur sab theek ho jayega ... teri di, jiju aur virat hai naa ... to tu dar mat hum kuch nahi hone denge"

Manvi was quiet she din say anything after ... she din utter a single word after ... Jeevika took her to the washroom ... she got manvi washed and changed her clothes ... she combed her hair ... and held manvi in her arms ...

Virat: bhai kaun thaw oh ...

Viren: kept a hand on his brothers shoulder ... and said "Virat woh vikram tha tumhara dost"

Virat all shocked to say anything anger all over his face ... he held his fist so tight "Uski himmat kaisi huyi ... woh"

Viren could understand his brothers situation ...

dekh virat yun gussa hone se kuch nahi hone wala .. usko uski kiye ki saza mil gayi naa ab chod sab theek ho jayega ... humein is samey maanvi ko honsla dena hai, we have to assure her that everything is fine ... we have to give her courage ... is tarah agar tum bhi toot jaoge to kaisa hoga sab... Bhagwan ne usse uske kiye ki saza hum se pehle hi dedi ..."

Virat: "bhai"said virat softly ... and hugged his brother ...

Viren always knew about virats feelings ... without virat even saying a word viren always knew whats going on in his mind ...

They both headed upstairs towards manvis room ... but they coudnt find them there ... both had a worried expression on there face, they looked at each other ... virat walked to check if they are in the washroom and viren headed towards other room ... but couldn't find dem anywhere ...

Virat: Bhai aapne dekha unko ...

Viren: Nahi shayad mere kamre mein (with that they headed towards viren and jeevikas room) and found them cuddled in the corner of the bed ... both brothers sighed in relief ...

Viren: Maanvi theek to hai na ...

Jeevika: haan viren ji manvi theek hai ...

Viren: Jeevika .. mujhe lagta hai humein manvi ko doc ke paas le jana chahiye ... viren said looking down ... where jeevika and manvi were shocked hearing this ...

Jeevika: Nahi nahi viren ji uski koi zaroorat nahi hai ...

Manvi: nahi jeeju plz .. plzzz jiju main theek hoon ... please doctor ko nahi ...

Viren: walked towards manvi sat beside them ... and hugged manvi side ways ... and said theek hai main doc ko nahi bhulaunga kush, with that manvi faked a smile ... viren said ... Manvi tum sach mein theek to ho na ... with worried expression ... Viren have always been like a father to manvi, he always pampered her like a father do to her daughter...

Manvi : Haan jiju main theek hoon she walked towards the window and stood dere ... silence filled the room ... when manvi spoke ...

Jiju agar aaj virat sahi samay pe nahi aata to shayad main yahan aap logo ke saath nahi hoti ... main kab ka apne aap ko khatam kiya hota ...

Virat and Jeevika: at the same time "MANVI"

Jeevika: mannu kaisi baatein kar rahi hai ... shukar maan sab theek hai samjhi ab chal aaa tum so jao ... jeevika tried to get from the bed when she felt dizzy and sat back down ... "Jeevika" "di"

Viren: jeevika tum theek to ho naa ... tum beto ..

Virat: main pani lata hoon bhabhi ke liye ... before leaving he looked at manvi's face and left to get water for his bhabhi ...

Manvi: Di i am sorry di please... please di i am sorry app tension mat lo ... please di ...

Jeevika: manu yeh kya sorry laga rakha hai huh ... main theek hoon ... samjhi ... said with a smile on her face...

Manvi: di khabar dar agar appne yaha se utne ki koshish bhi ki to ... toh .. toh ...

Jeevika: Toh kya mannu ... huh toh kya ...

Manvi : Toh main aap se baat nahi karungi ... manvi thought for a while ... nahi mein appse baat kiye bina bhi to nahi reh sakti ... toh di app please appna khayal rakhe aur haan humara hone walle cute se baby ka ... woh kya sochega ek hi mansi hai ... aur woh bhi unki mama ko hamesha tang karti hai ... toh woh to mujhse aane se pehle hi kuti ho jayega naa ... manvi made a puppy face... Jeevika and mavi both started giggling over it ...

Viren and virat who were observing the two sisters kept admiring their relationship ... its so easy for them to forget their pain for the sake of others ... thought the bros ...

Virat: acha toh madam ji abhi app chaliya yaha se aur bhabhi ko aaram karne deejiye ... gave the water to jeevika ...

Manvi: haan di abhi aapko aaram karna chahiya .. main apke honey wale baby ke saath koi compromise nahi chahti samjhey naa app ... acha samjhe ...

Viren: Sali sahiba thanku ... ab aap bhi jaake so jayiye ... ok theeke kafi raat ho gayi hai na ...

Manvi "ji jiju" manvi kissed her sis gudnite but jeevika held her hand ... manvi tu theek to hai na ... main aau tere saath sone ... manvi knew if she told her sis she is not comfortable going back to that room ... then she might worry herself and might not even sleep the whole night, so she faked a smile ... "Di main bilkul theek hoon ... aap fikar mat kijiye .. waise jiju ne aapka naam sahi rakha hai .. FM ji ... ab aap so jayiye .. aur hum sab ko bhi ... thike ... gudnite di"she hugged her di tight, wished her jiju gudnite and left to go to her room ...

She came outside her room, she stood still. Now she didn't have the guts to go inside .

Virat: Kya hua ... dar lag raha hai ...

Manvi: didn't say a word but virat could feel her fear ... when he headed towards the room first ... and manvi followed ... she stood near the door and didn't move a step further ...

Virat: Manvi daro nahi main hoon na yaha ... he fixed her bed for her ... and he realized that she is too scared to even come inside ... he looked up at her and walked towards her and said ... " chalo mere saath"

Virat took hold of manvis hand and headed towards his room ... aaj raat ke liye tum yahan so jao theek hai ... gave her a slight smile...

Manvi smiled back and said "Thankyou Virat"

Virat"Kisliye ... acha kamre mein sone ke liye ... haan to chup chaap sunlo sirf aaj raat ke liye ok sirf aaj raat ..."

Manvi couldn't help but smile ... "tum na chep ke chep hi rahoge" virat knew that his old manvi is still dere he kept staring at her and admiring her ... "Virat thankyou is liye .. kyunki tum sahi waqt pe aaye aur mujhe bachaya ..." Virat was just staring at her ... " Manvi tum yeh sab kaise kar leti ho , how do u do this ... I knoe how hurt you are but still you are trying to pretend everything is fine with you ... kyun itna dard deti ho apne aap ko tum manvi"

Manvi: she turned around not to face him and said ... "maine kuch bhi nahi kiya hai samjhe tum aur ap mera sar mat kapao aur mujhe sone do ... den she realized she is in his room ... "Virat tum kaha so o ge ..."

Virat: dont worry bandhariya ... tum bed pe so jao mein yaha couch mein sahi hoon ... theeke ... chalo ab jaldi so jao ...

Manvi laid in his bed ... when virat gaze fell on manvis neck ... and noticed a bite mark there ... he flinched his fist together tight ... but didn't say anything and just wished her goodnite and adjusted the sheets over her and walked back towards the sofa to sleep ...

Manvi: Virat ... virat so gaye kya ...

Virat : nahi kyun kuch chahiye kya ...

Manvi: virat hum humesha .. kitna jagadtey hai kitna kadte hai hum dono ... par jab bhi hum kissi mussibat mein hote hai yaa hum mese koi dhukhi hota hai ... hum k dam se ek doosre ko hasaane ki koshish karte hai ... humesha ek doosre ke sukh mein gham mein ... yaha tak ki dard mein bhi saath hote hai ...tum hamesha mera support karte ho humesha mera saath dete ho ... meri fikar karte ho ... kyun na hum aaj is rishte ko naya naam dede ... (Manvi forwarded towards him and forwarded her hand to him and said)

MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE ... MERA PARTNER BANOGE ... with a huge grin on her face ...

Virat who was mesmerized by her words had a wide smile on her face and accepted her friendship and said ...

"SO PARTNERS HUH"

And dey both shaked hands ...

 

  

 

So how was it guys ... i know a EXTREMELY long sorry ... i hope you guys weren't bored of reading it ... let me know if i should continue or just end it here ...

 

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