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Virman SS : Bahon ke Darmiyaan Part 14 pg 54 (Page 14)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arohi16

di once again loved the update!!
and the last line...awww Day Dreaming
continue soon...

p.s. sorry for the late reply Embarrassed
 
Thanks Arohi ... :)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged

Ok guys I am back with an update Hopefully I am not going to disappoint many of you ... Thanks for liking my work ...

 

 

 

Virat is feeling restless and wants to say something to manvi but he doesn't know how to ... their is an awkward silence in the room ... when virat keeping his gaze fixed at manvi says in a whisper kum soft voice ...

Virat – Manvi ... then silence ... ( Manvi is just looking at virats face ... with a questioning look)

"Manvi can i get a hug please" .. his gaze fixed at manvi reading her expression ... his hearbeat racing ... he himself was confused on why he said that ... Manvi and Virat have an eyelock and both lost in each others eyes ... Manvi's heartbeat racing ... she just looked down without saying a word she closed her eyes tight ... waiting for the embrace of peace ... waiting for virat to hug her and just relax ... Virat took a step forward towards her ... manvi was all silent and lost in his smell, she could feel him coming near her .. his smell of cologne making her weak ... she stood still ... virat came really close her they could feel each others warmth ... as there was silence in the room they could even hear each others heartbeat ... Virat was so close to her now ... she clutched her duppatta so tight ... when suddenly they hear viren screaming Virat's  name ... they both came out their trance and to reality ... Boths eyes popped up and they kept staring at each other with shocked expression and right then virat took a step back ... realising about his surroundings ... unknown to the fact on what was actually happening to him ...  he ran his hand over his head ... and he just turned around and left to go ... before leaving he turned back to take look at manvi who was still lost and shocked of what happened ... and then he left to go with Viren ...

Yeh mujhe kya hogaya tha ... maine usse kuch kaha kyun nahi ... aur meri heartbeat ... woh zaroor phir mazaq kar raha hoga ... mujhe tang karne ke liye ... us chep ko to main chodungi nahi ... manvi thought to her self ... Lekin ... manvi confused ... then her inner self spoke again ... " Lekin wekin kuch bhi nahi, tu pagal ho gayi hai sirf bas ..."

Scene Shift

On their way to the office Virat was lost in his own world ... he was thinking about what had happened earlier or lets say what was going to happen ... he was quiet the whole way ... Viren thought that probably he is nervous about going to work so he didn't bother saying anything to him ... and they reached office ... Everyone greeted them and all was happy seeing Virat there ... He received a warm welcome by all ... Viren was busy with his meetings where as virat spent his day reading all the cases that was piled at virens desk ... the whole day virat was at the office ... reading the cases carefully ... Many times he wanted to text manvi ... but he thought to just concentrate in his work so he didn't bother ...

Where as in Vadhera Mansion ... Manvi was lost the whole day ... she wouldn't be able to do anything properly ... Everyone thought that she is prolly still going through the stress of past few days so they let her rest ... Back in her room she is just staring at her phone ... waiting for someone to call her or text ... but she dont know who is she waiting for ...

"Manvi tujhe ho kya raha hai ... Di to yahi pe hai .. to tu Di ke phone ka wait kyun kar rahi hai ... nahi main di ka wait thodi naa kar rahi hoon ... main to woh virat ka ... shocked of what she was blabbering to herself ... Pagal hogayi hoon main ... Main Virat ka wait kyun karungi bala ... uska wait karegi meri jhooti" Manvi was fighting with herself ... she knew she was missing something but she did not knew what is she missing ...

 it was now 6:30 in the evening now  ... when Viren entered the office room where Virat was busy studying the cases ... with lots of law books piled all around him ...

Viren : Virat mere bhai ... kab se yaha betha hua hai ... thora to rest karlo ... ek dam se apne dhimag mein pressure dalna sahi nahi hoga ... said viren being worried ...

Virat: Nahi bhai mein bilkul theek hoon ... najane kyun mujhe yeh cases itne interesting lag rahe ab ... mein jald se jald kuch kar dhikhana chahta hoon ... meine yeh saare cases pare ... bhai ... aur mujhme phir se wohi josh char gaya hai ... bhai

Viren: Virat mein samajh sakta hoon ... lekin uss ke liye tumhe apne upar itna zor daalne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ... main jaanta hoon ... ki tum zaroor kamyaab honge ...

Virat: Bhai meine yeh Mr. Jaiswal ka case pada ... kya mein yeh case lar sakta hoon ...

Viren was shocked hearing this ... he was loss at words as he didn't know how to react ... was he suppose to be happy that his brother was ready to face the challenge already ... or was he suppose to stop him from making a fast move of starting his career ... he was unsure ... he gave a slight smile to virat ..

Viren: Virat dekh mein jaanta hoon ... ki tum mein kafi kaabiliyat hai ... lekin itni zald baazi bhi theek nahi ... hum kuch aur din thehartte hain aur phir uske baad hum kuch faisla lete hai case ke bare mein theek hai ...

Virat understood what his brother meant ... he didn't argue further ... he felt bad but then again he realised that his brother didn't say a no but was just not sure if it would be a right step or not ... he just nodded with a smile to his brother.

Viren: acha sun kaafi der hogayi hai .. humein ab chalna chahiye ... ghar mein sab intezaar kar rahe honge ...

Virat: Nahi bhai aap chaliyee ... bhabhi aapka intezaar kar rahi hogi ... mein yeh last file par ke aapko ghar mein milunga ... theek hai bhai ...

Viren: Virat are you sure ... tum ... i mean ... tum yeh kal bhi study kar sakte ho ...

Virat: nahi bhai kal kisne dekha hai ... aur waisi bhi i have planed something else for tomorrow ... aaj mein yeh khatam karke hi ghar aaunga ... aur phir kal kaafi saare alag kaam hai mujhe ... agar aapko aitraaz naa ho to ...

Viren gave big smile ... patted over virats shoulder and said ... main ghar pe tumhara intezaar karunga ... he gave another assuring smile to virat and left to go home ... "Bhai main is case ko ache se par kar apko iske solution ke saath present karunga aur phir aap mujhe khud ye case larne ko kahoge" Virat got back and engrossed himself in the books and the case ...

Scene Shift

Manvi: Di aap yaha kitchen mein kya kar rahe ho ... maloom hai naa appko aaram karna hai ... meine kaha naa aap koi kaam nahi karenge ... lekin kissi ki baat sune to naa ...

Jeevika: Arrey baba kissi koo kuch bolne ka mauka dogi tum ... waise bhi main yaha abhi aayi hoon ... main apne haaton se virat ke liye uska favourite dish banana chahti hoon ... woh kya hai naa woh abhi thaka haara ghar aayega ... to usse ... Mannu kaha kho gayi hai tu ... (Manvi was lost as soon as she heard virats name)

Manvi: Di woh kuch nahi aap yeh sab chodiye aur jaake aaram kijiye baaki sab mein sambhaal lungi ... abhi aap jaye ... ( jeevika was sent from the kitchen and manvi was back at the kitchen and started making virats fav dishes) it was now 7:50 ten minutes for the dinner and everything was prepared and organised at the table ... everything by manvi ... everybody was present at the table Jeevika and Viren also came seated at the table ...

Manvi got herself seated as well ... Again everyone was present except for Virat ... Manvi's gaze was fixed at the stairs ... "Yeh ladka kabhi nahi sudharne wala aaj bhi dinner ke liye late pata nahi kya hoga iska, aane de bachu ko" when Dadaji spoke ... Virat aaj bhi late hai ... woh kabhi nahi sudharega ... everyone got upset hearing that ... when Viren spoke

Viren: Dadaji woh kya hai keh ... Virat abhi tak ghar nahi lota ...

Dadaji gave a no nonsense look to Viren ...

Dadaji: Main jaanta tha aaj subah kahi gayi baatein bhi sirf usne jazbaat mein aake bola... woh kabhi bhi nahi sudarne walon mein se hai ... Aap sab jaante hai 8 baje ke baad koi dinner nahi hota ...

Viren:  Dadaji par ...

Dadaji : Par war kuch nahi Viren...

Viren: Maaf kijiye ga Dadaji ... lekin Virat abhi bhi office mein hai ... woh apna kaam kal ke liye nahi chorna chahta tha ... Aaj subah se woh man lagage kaam kar raha tha ... ek pal ke liye bhi usne .. aaram nahi liya ... woh bas kaam main masroof raha ... usne ek case ko kaafi ache se study kiya hai ... to isliye woh us case ache ko study karna chahta tha to isliye woh wohi rook gaya ...

Dadaji : woh abhi bhi office mein hai ... yeh to bahut achi baat hai ... lagta hai woh waqay mein badal gaya hai ... chalo achi baat hai ... ab aap log shuru kijiye ...

Manvi thought chep abhi bhi kaam kar raha hai ... pata nahi kab lautega ... aur meine uske liye ... chalo chodo na mujhe usse kya ... she was happy hearing god things about virat from his bro as well as dadaji now ... who seemed a little convinced ...

Everybody ate their food and then left to go to their respective rooms ... Manvi cleaned up the table with Vanshika Ma...

Manvi : Aunty aap yeh sab choro main karlungi ... aap jaake so jao ... kaafi thak gayi hogi naa ...

V. Ma: Nahi manvi main bilkul theek hoon ... maine to kuch kiya bhi nahi ... waise bhi saara kaam to tumne kiya hai ... waise manvi tumne aaj virat ki saari fav dishes banayi ... Thankyou

Manvi: arrey nahi aunty woh mujhe di neh kaha tha ... di chahti thi ki woh apne devar ke liye uski fav dishes banay lekin main nahi chahti thi ki woh kaam kare ... to isliye meine bana liye ... is mein thankyou wali koi baat nahi ...

V.Ma: Uske liye nahi mmanvi ... aaj tumne virat ko responsible banaya usse kaam jaane ke liye motivate kiya uske liye thankyou ...

Manvi: Arrey nahi aunty meine kuch nahi kiya ... aapka jo beta hai naa woh tubelight hai ... kaafi der se jalta hai ... to ismein mera contribution thoda kam hai ...

V.Ma: Manaa ke mera beta Tubelight hai lekin tubelite bhi to electricity ke bina nahi jalti .. to tum huyee naa uske indagi ki Bijli ...

With that both laughed ... they carried on with their talking ... manvi left to go to her room ... she was really bored she was feeling all weird ... she wanted to call virat but stopped herself when the thought of morning came to her mind and virats words ... "Manvi can i get a hug please" ... and then V.Ma calling her bijli of Virats life...

"Urgg Manvi yeh kya soch rahi hai tu" ...

Scene Shift

Viren and jeevikas room

Jeevika: Virenji kya baat hai aap kaafi pareshan lag rahe ho ... sab theek to hai naa ...

Viren: Haan Jeevika sab theek hai ... woh bas mein Virat ke bare mein soch raha tha ...

Jeevika: Virat ke bare mein ... kyun kya kiya ab usne ...

Viren: Nahi usne kuch kiya nahi woh bas... mein uske sudden decision ke bare mein soch raha tha ... aur mein yakeen se keh sakta hoon ... iske decision ke peeche bhi Manvi ka haath hai ...

Jeevika: Haan virenji mujhe bhi aisa lag raha hai ... aur pata hai ... aaj mujhe apne aap ko manvi ki Di kehte huwe naaz ho raha hai ... main aaj bahut  kush hoon ...

Viren: Haan Jeevika aur main bhi ... lekin mujhe ek bahut ajeeb sa dar lag raha hai ...

Jeevika: Kaisa dar Virenji ...

Viren: Pata hai aaj Virat ne mujhse Mr. Jaiswal ka case ladne ki baat ki ... usne itne saalon baad law practise karni shuru ki hai aur woh case bhi ladna chahta hai ... to mujhe uske itne tezi se badne se dar lag raha hai ...

Jeevika: Virenji ismein darne wali kya baat hai ... yeh to bahut achi baat hai naa ... agar woh case larna chahta hai ... to usse larne dejiye ... nahi rokiye ... Balki aap ko uska saath dena chahiye ... agar aapne usse aaj barne se roka ... kahin woh wapas humesha ke liye naa ruke ... to aap uska saaya banke usse guide kijiye ... aure usse uski manzil tak pahoonchayi ...

Viren: was just admiring his better halfs  for being so sensible ... jeevika shayad tum bilkul theek keh rahe ho ... while saying this there was a naughty smile on virens face ... he walked near her and wrapped his arms around her from back ... and " Shayad mujhe uska saaya ban naa hoga jaise mein tumhara saaya bana aur humari manzil chutku ko paya" hearing this jeevika felt shy ... she looked down blushing now ... and she just turned around and hid her face in her husbands chest and they embraced each other in their arms ...

It was now almost 11 when Virat walked in the house ... was just heading towards the stairs when V. Maa called his name out ...

V. Ma: Virat aagaya tu beta ...

Virat: arrey maa aap ab tak soye nahi ...

V. Ma: Mujhe neend kaisi aati apne bte ko dhike bina ... aaj sara din mera beta kaam par tha ... aur badi mehnat se kaam kar raha tha ... to kya mein uska thodi der intezaar nahi kar sakti ...

Virat: Arrey nahi maa mera woh matlab nahi ...

V. Ma: Haan main sab jaanti hoon ... yeh bata kaam kaisa tha ...

Virat: Maa mein bahut kush hoon ... jab mein US se wapas aaya tha ... meine soch liya tha ki main kabhi law firm ke bare mein bhi nahi sochunga lekin ... aaj wapas jaake mujhe ek bahut acha saa ehsaas ho raha hai ...

V. Maa: Yeh to bahut achi baat hai ... chalo ab aap jaake jaldi se apna mooh aur haath dokhe aayiye ... mein tumhare liye khana garam karti hoon ...

Virat: Thik hai maa main bas abhi aaya ...

After few minutes virat walked down and got seated at the dining table ... served him food ... Seeig all his fav dishes he had a huge grin on his face ... and he started eating ... he just loved the foods taste ...

Virat: "Maa its so yummy ... bahut acha bana hai khana aaj ... ji karta hai banana wale ke haath chum lu .."

V. Maa: phir to tumhe manvi ka haath chumna chahiye ... yeh saara usne banaya hai ...

Virat: Hearing Manvi's name Virat went all quiet and lost in his world ... " Ma Manvi ne Banaya hai yeh Khana ... Mere liye"

V.Ma: She smiled seeing the huge grin in his sons face and just nodded her head with a huge smile ...

Virat: Mujhe nahi pata hai ... woh bandhariya itna acha khana bhi banati hai ... lekin woh hai kaha ... his eyes searching everywhere ...

V.Ma: Woh so gayi hai ... kaafi thak gayi thi bechaari ...

Virat: Acha maa ab mein bhi chalta hoon aur aap bh jaake so jayiye ... kaafi raat ho gayi hai Gudnite ...

With that both left to go to their respective rooms ... before going to his room Virat stopped by Manvis room. He didn't know if she is still awake or not even though his mom told him that she is sleeping ... He sneaked into her room and saw her sleeping Peacefully in the bed ... Through the door he smiled "GOODNIGHT BANDHARIYA"

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
What a tym of viren. .gud to c virat dedicated .continue soon.

Edited by avika26 - 20 August 2012 at 12:19pm

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Amazing update!!! COntinuee soon and thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Amazin update

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Very cute update... I cud visualise evrythng going on... Viren bhi na wrong tym pe virat ko bula liya lol... Thanx 4 pm update soon dear:)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Awww no hug! hope there is one soon
and that was so sweet of manvi to cook for virat
Great update!

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Awww that was amazing!

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