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Virman SS : Bahon ke Darmiyaan Part 14 pg 54 (Page 10)

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LuvVirManNiShal

Superb Update!
I Felt So Sad For Virat Dadaji Sed So Much To Him Yet He Didnt Say A Word Poor Virat Im Glad Dadaji Is Supporting Manvi But Im Sad And Angry At His Behaviour And Attitude Towards Virat
Loved VirMan's Conversation...
The I Promise You Partner Was Fabulous And He Without Hesitating Placed His Head On Her Lap And She Carressed It So Now Manvi Is Guna Help Virat Build His Own Image
Awesom Update Beautifully Written
Update Soon And PM Me Please
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Hey hun thanks for the beautiful long comment ...  i love getting long comments well who doesnt ... right ... thanks again for appreciating my work ...

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awesome di.loved it Thumbs Up
cont soon & thnx 4 d pm Hug

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continue soonDay Dreaming
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Lovely update

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Hello everyone ... i am back again with a new Part ... Sorry for being late ... i was really sick for the past few days ... and was not regular with IF unfortunately ... but ou guys were all in my mind ... Hopefully u guys will like this chapter as well ... and will give me lovely comments ... Thank you for liking this story much ... <3<3<3

CHAPTER 4

After few moment of time Virat realized that he was resting his head on manvi's lap ... Manvi's... his bhabhi's behna ... he quickly let go of it ... and brought manvi back to reality as well ... Manvi was lost in words and again she felt nervous ... she was trying to escape Virats gaze and was trying to remove a strand of hair which had fallen on her face ...

Virat: hmmm Ma..nv..ii ... virat stammerd taking her name ... Manvi woh ... i am sorry ... virat said feeling guilty ...

Manvi: was surprised hearing sorry from Virat she gave a confused look first then realized what he may have said sorry for " Woh... its ok ... i knoe tumhe yeh pillow laga hoga" with that she bit her toungue for what she said ... virat looked smirking ...

Virat: Pillow u r kidding me rite ... mera sir dukh raha hai ab ... lagta hai gardan akar gayi tumhari wajah se ... agar pillow hota toh atleast soft hota lekin ... yeh to ... hayee re my poor gardan said virat smirking and looking at manvi which by now the awkwardness was far gone from them ... manvi was now fuming in anger ...

Manvi: Tum ...

Virat: Main kya Manvi ...

Manvi: Tum na ... forget it ... said manvi who was boiling with anger ... and she turned around to leave the room ... when virat took hold of her hand and pulled her near him where manvi collided with his chest ...

Virat: Main mazaq kar raha tha ... tum ho ki gussa ho gayi ... I am sorry baba ... they were both inches apart ... so close that both didn't realize their closeness ...

Manvi: Virat woh main ...

Virat: Woh main kya manvi ...

Manvi: Virat mera haath choro ... mujhe jaana hai ...

Virat let go of manvis hand and turned around ... manvi also turned around to leave the room when ...

"Manvi" ... virat called out her name ... manvi din take another step and turned to face virat ... virat also turned to look at her ... and said ...

Virat: Manvi tum itni achi kyun ho ... tum kaise sab ka dard samajh jaati ho ... Manvi maine apne zindagi mein tum jaisi ladki kabhi nahi dekhi ... abhi kuch ghante pehle ... tumhare upar jo bita ... tum usse bhool kar yaha mujhe sambhalne aaye ho ... mujhe sahi raah dhikane ... Pata nahi main kya kar beth tha ... shayad yeh ghar chodne ka khayal aata ya phir pata nahi kya ... lekin tumne ek pal main hi ... mujhe aur mere gusse ko shant kar diya ... Kyun ho tum aisi .. huh ...

Manvi: Oye Virat ... mujhe nahi maloom tha ... meri kahi huyi baton ka tumpe itna assar padega ...waving her hands in the air (the way she usually does) i mean ... tumhara to dimaag hi fir gaya hai ... heheh ... said manvi laughing ... acha suno meine kuch bhi nahi kiya samjhe ... main theek hoon ... meine sirf tumhe yeh bataya ki tum kiss kaabil ho thats it ... and now mein tumhe kal tak ka waqt dethi hoon ... kal subah tak tumhe ... yeh sochna hoga ki tumhe kya karna hai samjhe ... tumhare paas sirf aur sirf kal tak ka waqt hai ... samjhe ... haan aur agar tumne mujhe kal tak yeh nahi bataya ki tumne kya socha hai ... to bachu tum tho gaye ... yeh mat bhulna ... jaante ho na ki main kaun hoon ... main (manvi was cut of by virat)

Virat: ki tum bhooki sherni ho ...

Manvi: Viraaat ... tu to gaya ... (with that they started running around the room behind the sofa ... and den on top of bed ... just trying to chase each other ... they din even realise how loud they were and who was already present in the room) Manvi ran towards the door to run out when she pulled a fast break on herself and made virat collide on her and he held her by arms behind her ... and there eyes were stuck at the door)

Viren, Jeevika, Vanshika Maa and kadhambari chachi were standing there and were looking at them with amusement but deep inside they were so happy seeing virat and manvi happy ...

V. Maa: Tum dono yeh bacho ki tarah idhar se udhar kyun kud rahe ho ...

Manvi: Aunty woh virat hai naaa ... she was cut by Jeevika

Jeevika: Mannu tu yaha virat ko tang karne aayi thi ...

Virat: Haan bhabhi dekho naa yeh bandhariya ... bhooki sherni ki tarah mere peeche pari hai ... (with that all started laughing)

Viren: Virat chup kar ... khabar daar agar meri ek lauti saali ke khilaaf ek aur shabd bola tho ... (he went near manvi and stood beside her)

Manvi: haan jeeju dekho na is chep ko pata nahi kaise kaise naam leke pukar raha hai ... sticking her tongue out to virat ...

Jeevika: Viren ji main bhi bata deti hoon haan ... mein bhi bilkul bardaasht nahi karungi ek bhi lafz apne ek laute devar ke khilaaf ...

Manvi: Acha di toh apne party badal li ... koi nahi mere paas jeeju hai ... aap aur yeh chep humara kuch nahi bigaar sakte ...(standing right beside beside viren, holding his hand)

Virat: aur mere paas ... maa samaan bhabhi hai ... tum bhi humara kucch nahi bigaar sakte ... going towards jeevika ...

Viren and Jeevika giving each other a look and then looking towards there siblings with the sweetest expression on their face ...

Kadambhari Chachi: Haay nee Mere kuch kuch hota hai ke ... Srk aur kajol ... tum dono jagda kiss baat pe kar rahe ho ... huh ...(with that they all started laughing) and viren went near virat and jeevika to hug them and he pulled manvi in a hug too ... all four hugging together ...

K. Chachi: Hayee bhabhi dekhiye naa ... yeh hai humare ... kya kehte hai English mein ... haan humare awesome Foursome ...

V. Maa: Haan ... inko kissi ki nazar naa lage .. yeh humesha aise kush rahe ... acha bacho thoda dheere dheere bolo ab ... kafi raat ho gayi hai ... agar bauji uth gaye to acha nahi hoga ... ab jaake sab so jao theeke ... she walked towards virat and cupped his face and said Gudnite with teary eyes ... and den she went near manvi ... cupped her face with both hands and kissed her forhead ... giving her blessing Kush raho humesha ... with that she left with K.chachi to her room ...

They all bid gudnite and left to their respective rooms leaving virat behind in his room. Virat had a huge smile on his face he didn't know the reason behind it ... but he was smiling ...

Scene shifts

Jeevika: Mannu tu ab jaake so jaa kaafi raat ho gayi hai theeke ... gudnite ...

Viren: Hmmm Manvi ... (Manvi turned)

Manvi: Ji jeeju ...

Viren: woh manvi mein tumhe thank you kehnaa chahta tha ... woh virat ke gusse ko shant karne ke liye aur uske chehre pe muskarahat wapas lane ke liye ...

Manvi: Arrey jeeju ... yeh keh ke aap mujhe sharminda mat kijiye ... waise bhi virat ko dhukhi dekhke koi kush nahi rehtaa to sabke chehre mein kushi lane ke liye uss chep ka mood theek hona kafi zaroori tha ... aur waise bhi yeh sab kafi had tak meri wajah se hi hua ... meri wajha se dadaji ne ... anyways ... appko mujhe thank you kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai .. samjhe ... ab aap dono jaake so jaeeye ... ok gudnite ... giving a million dollar smile ...

Viren: Smiled and wished her gudnite ...

Jeevika: Meri mannu kafi bari ho gayi hai naa ... acha chal gudnite ... they left to go to their room

Manvi stood outside the room staring at the door ... suddenly her phone beeped as she received a text message ...

x- V ' dar lag raha hai

manvi (hawww ... she looks to her right then left ... turns around to see if he is standing somewhere kahin yeh mera peecha to nahin kar raha ... her fone beeps again ... )

x- V- dont worry main apne kamre main hoon ... tumhara peecha nahi kar raha ...

seeing that text she steps inside the room ... and goes to sit in her bed ... staring at her phone ... thinking for what to reply ...

x- M- main nahi darti ... tum soye kyun nahi

x- V- achi baat hai ... neend nahi aa rahi ...

x- M- beta so jao nahi to subah nahi uth paoge aur yaad hai naa .. tumhara faisla ...

x- V- haan baba yaad hai ... aur maine soch liya mujhe kya karna hai ...

manvi sits up her bed ... excited to know his decision ...

x- M- soch liya ... batao naa???

x- V- nope ... kal subah ... uske liye tumhe sona hoga ... aiite close your eyes ... aur ache ache meethe meethe sapne dekho ... Gudnite bandhariya ...

x- M ' gudnite chep ... J

Manvi thinking to herself ... kya decision liya hoga usne ... and with the thought of that she drifts to sleep ...

Virat thinking ... so gayi hogi ab ... lekin meine usse bol tho diya maine faisla le liya hai ... lekin main karu kiya ... he started staring at one place and he suddenly had a determined look on his face ... "Haan yehi theek rahega". With that thought he sleeps as well ...

Morning in Vadhera Mansion ... we can see sun beaming outside virats window and the sound of birds wakes virat up ... he grabs a pillow and covers his ear with that ... and the thought of it being morning he quickly gets up and sits on his bed to look at the time which states ... its quarter to 8 ... and he jumps out his bed and rushes towards washroom ... No body tried to wake him up in the morning, as they all knew how things had turned out to be last night and this wouldn't be a good idea to have virat for breakfast infront of dadaji ... as things could go worst ...

Its 7:58 now and everybody seated at the dining table for breakfast except for Virat ... but for everyones surprise Virat walks towards Dining table wishes everyone goodmorning and takes his seat ...

Everyone looked surprised except for manvi ... seeing virat there everyone was happy ... Virat looked at manvi and gave her a huge smile...

Dadaji: Shuru kijiye ...

Everyone busy having their breakfast ... and there manvi is eager to know virat's decision ... cuz by looking at him she noticed a big change in him ... as she felt that he knows what he exactly want to do, she knows when virat wants to do something ... he is determined to accomplish it ...

Viren: Jeevika aaj mujhe ek important meeting ke liye jaana hai ... uske baad kafi saara kaam baki hai to shayad late ho jau ... (he was cut by virat)

Virat: Bhai mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai ...

Viren: haan virat breakfast khatam karle phir uppar chalk e baat karenge ...

Virat- Nahi bhai main sabke saamne aapse baat karna chahta hoon giving a stern look towards dadaji ...

Viren looked surprised he looks at jeevika first den towards his mom and then to dadaji ... Jeevika and everyone worried of what Virat is about to say ... Manvi could feel her heartbeat beating faster than usual she puts her hand towards her heart first and then looked at virat ... giving her an assuring smile and winking at him with both eyes ... as if telling him ... not to worry as she is with him ... giving him the support he needed ...

Viren ' Haan bol ..

Virat ' Bhai maine ek faisla liya hai ... Main jaanta hoon maine apni zindagi main kaafi thokre khaayi hai ... maine kabhi apni zindagi mein kuch haasil nahi kiya hai ... main waqay main ek haara huwa insaan hoon ... lekin bhai mujhme kaafi kaabilyat hai jisse main khud anjaan hoon ... mujhe apne aap ko doondnaa hoga ek naya raasta doondna hoga ... to bhai maine socha hai ... ki main in sab baton ko bhoola doonga ... main apne is nazariye ko badal kar rahunga ... Main kuch kar dhikaunga ... (Dadaji looked pissed and everybody's attention went towards him as he was about to leave the dining table)

Virat- Ek minute dadaji ... aap is ghar ke bhare hai ... aur main chahta hoon ... ki aap bhi meri baat sune ... aur mujhe samjhey ... main jaanta hoon ... aap humare bhare hain aur humein apne bacho ko ghalat raah pe chaltein nahi dekh sakte ... is liye app humein humesha sahi raah dhikane ki koshish karte hai ... to dadaji aaj ke baad mein aapko kabhi shikayat ka mauka nahi doonga ... meine humesha apni manmaani ki hai aur mujhe usmein kuch haasil nahi huwa hai ... toh maine socha hai ... aaj se mein bhai ke saath firm mein kaam karunga mein phir se law practise karunga ... meine bhi ek bahut acha waqil banke dhikaunga apne aap ko ek kaabil insaan bana ke dhikaunga ... jisse aapko mujh par garv mehsoos hoga ... yeh mera wada hai aap sab se ... Bhai kya mein aapke saath kaam par aa sakta hoon ... aapka haath bataane ... Mein aap se bhi wada karta hoon ki aapko apne chote bhai par naaz hoga ...

Viren couldn't control his emotions anymore he just got up from his seat and rushed towards virat with tears eyes ... and pulled him in a tight hug ... and den cupped his face and said ...

Viren- Virat mere bhai mujhe abhi se tumhara yeh faisla sun ke tum pe naaz hai ... aur main apne bhai ki kaabiliyat ko jaanta hoon ... ek din mera bhai bahut bada banega ... mujhse bhi bada ... and den he pulled him in a hug again ...

Dadaji walked towards him and patted him in his back ... and said "Virat tumhara yeh faislaa sun kar humein bahut khushi milli hai ... aur umeed hai ki tum humari ummeed banaye rakho ge"

Everyone was so happy and gave pats to virat and hugged him wished him luck and gave him blessings ... and everybody left to go to their respective rooms ... Virat out of all was just looking for manvi who had suddenly disappear from there ...

Viren: Virat kya huwa kaha kho gaye ... chalna nahi mere saath aaj ... chal jaldi tayaar ho main tumhe saare kaam samjha doonga ... theek ... main bhi tayaar hoke aata hoon ... with that (Viren and Jeevika also left from there)

Virat went towards his room but suddenly his gaze fell at a figure who was standing a bit far from him ... and he took few steps towards her ... but she disappeared again ... and he was confused ... he decided to go to her room to talk to her ... He steps inside the room and looks the bed is empty as manvi is not dere ... and his gaze shifts towards the petite figure standing near the window...

Virat: Oyee ded futiya tum yaha ho aur main tumhe ... then he caught his toungue thinking what he was about to say ...

Manvi: haan woh mein apne kamre main aagayi ...

Virat: Tum waha se aise kyun chali aayi ... Mera faisla tumhe acha nahi laga ...

Manvi: woh kya hai naa tumhari bashan sun ke pak rahi thi ... to is liye ... and she started laughing seeing virats expression ... Mazaq kar rahi thi main ... Mujhe tumhara faisla bahut bahut bahut acha laga main jaanti hoon tum ek kaabil insaan zaroor banoge ...

Virat: pata hai manvi ... main yeh sab shayad nahi keh pata agar tumne mujhe ...

Manvi: Virat please ab phir se shuru mat ho jaana ... maine sach mein kuch nahi kiya ...

Virat: Manvi meine jo pyaar aaj sab ki aankhon mein dekha ... mere dil ko ek ajeeb si feeling huwee ... main aaj waqay mein bahut khush hoon ... bahut khush ... aur yeh sab sirf tumhari wajah se tum maanno ya naa manno ... they were both staring at each other ... they had eye lock ... unknown about the feelings thats going through them ...

Virat is feeling restless and wants to say something to manvi but he doesn't know how to ... their is an awkward silence in the room ... when virat keeping his gaze fixed at manvi says in a whisper kum soft voice ...

Virat: Manvi ... then silence ... ( Manvi is just looking at virats face ... with a questioning look)

"Manvi can i get a hug please" .. his gaze fixed at manvi reading her expression ... his hearbeat racing ...

 

So thats it guys, please do let me know how is it ... I ll continue if you guys like the story ... there is allot to come still .. Happy reading and please do leave your sweet comments as they are very much needed it motivates me to write more ... Next update will be coming soon ...

P.S: I hope this time the font is big enough for you guys ... thanks for all the lovely comments as they are much needed ... Smile



Edited by meant4uonlie - 16 August 2012 at 9:11pm

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Yipee I'm first 2 comment...Heart
Amazing update dear
Why did u stop at dis point, atleast we get to knw dat she say yes or no...Heart
I think virat feels 4 her, interesting...Heart
loved Heart it so much
cont soon, really eagerly waiting 4 ur next update. Smile
And thanx 4 d pm dear Smile
How r u now, r u fine dear Smile

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Di awesome...loving ur writing Thumbs Up
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