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CHAPTER 8

 

Viren: Waise Jeevika Hum ne yeh soch toh liya hai ki humein karna kya hai ... par hum yeh karenge kaise

Jeevika: Mein bhi yahi soch rahi hoon Viren Ji kya .. hum sahi karenge ... lekin agar sab kuch ulta ho gaya to ...

Viren: Nahi Jeevika kuch ulta nahi hoga ... Be positive ...

Jeevika: Lekin mein to O negative hoon ... and she giggles ...

Viren: tum bhi naa ... apni behen se kam nahi hoo ..

Jeevika: Hoongi bhi kyun nahi ... Badi behen hoon mein uski ...

Viren walks towards her ...

Jeevika: Viren Ji ... she almost scremed his name ...

Viren stopped and turned around to see what happened ... he asked from his expressions ... "what"

Jeevika: Idhar aayiye jaldi se ... (he walks near her smirking)

Viren: hmmm (standing close to her)

Jeevika: arrey viren ji ... aur kareeb aayiye naa ...

Viren: Not bad Jeevika ... lekin darwaaza to band karne do ...

Jeevika: lekin viren ji mujhse sabr nahi hota ..

Viren: Jeevika yeh tum keh rahi ho ...

Jeevika: aur nahi to kya ... jaldi viren ji ...

Viren comes really close to her ... slids his hand to her waist and brings her more close to him ... and he bends his head to her neck line ...

Jeevika: viren ji yeh kya kar rahe aap ... koi aa jayega ...

Viren: tumhi ne toh kaha .. tumse sabr nahi hota ...

Jeevika: arrey woh toh mein aapko apna idea batana chahti hoon ... aap ne kya socha ...

Viren had a dissaapointed look on his face ... and Jeevika was literally laughing ...

Viren: chodo jaldi idea batao ..

Jeevika now comes near him and tells him her idea in his ear ...

Viren: arrey wah Mrs . Vadhera not bad ... toh humein abhi is mission ko shuru karna chahiye ...

Scene Shift

Swamini on phone " Haan haan humne jaise socha hai waisa hi hoga ... tum fikar mat karo ... Virat is surprise ko dekh kar zaroor kush hoga... waise tum time se aana der mat karna samjhe ... abhi hum rakte hai bahut kaam hai... bye"

V.Ma: didi aap kisse baat kar rahi thi ...

Swamini: woh kuch nahi bhabhi ... aapko kuch kaam tha...

Vanshika: haan woh Jeevika aur Kadhambari ne soch hai kyun naa hum party ke liye theme rakh le ... jaise sab saari pehne ...

Swamini: Haan yeh bilkul theek rahega ...

V. Ma: Theek hai mein un se keh doongi ... (Didi kis se baat kar rahi thi .. jab meine poocha toh baat thaal diya ... akhir baat kya hai)

Vanshika smilled towards her and left to go ...

Manvi is sitting in her room ... and she is collecting all the moments that happened between her and Virat ... "Yeh kya ho raha hai humare beech ... kuch samajh nahi aa raha ... mein kyun khud ko sambhaal nahi paati kya such mein mujhe faraq parta hai uske mere kareeb hone se ... mujhe itni khushi kyun ho rahi virat ke mujhe khubsoorat pukarne se ..."

Manvi was lost in her thoughts when Jeevika entered her room ...

Jeevika: Manvi tu yaha bethi hai ... Manvi tu sun rahi hai naa

Manvi: Haan di aap kab aayi ... said surprised ..

Jeevika: Mannu kya baat hai ... koi baat pareshan kar rahi hai tujhe ...

Manvi: Nahi di aisi koi baat nahi ... kahiye naa ...

Jeevika: Nahi kuch nahi  ... kaafi raat ho gayi hai tum so jao ab ... theek hai ...

Manvi: Di kya baat hai batao naa ...

Jeevika: Mannu koi baat nahi tum so jao ab chalo ... she makes her sleep kissed her on her head and turned to leave ... Goodnite Mannu...

Manvi: Good nite Di.. (but she could not sleep she kept thinking about Virat, hours passed but still sleep was no where near her when suddenly she heard a noise outside ... she quickly gets up runs towards her door)

Manvi: with confused look " Tum"

Virat: Haan main ...

Manvi: tum itni raat ko mere kamre ke bahar kya kar rahe ho...

Virat: woh kya hai naa ... mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi to socha walk ke liye jao ... to phir mere dhimaag mein tumhara khayal aaya ... phir mein dhekne aaya ki tum so rahi ho ya nahi ... par tum to mere aane se pehle hi ...

Manvi: tumhe neend kyun nahi aa rahi ...

Virat: tumhe kyun nahi aa rahi ...

Manvi: pehle maine poocha ... aur mein so rahi thi ...

Virat: acha .. to tum yaha neend mein chal ke aayi...

Manvi: Nahi wooh to main ... choro main jaa rahi hoon sone...

Virat: grabs a hold of her hand " hello ... mein jaanta hoon tumhe neend nahi aa rahi ... chalo naa walk ke liye chalte hain ... "

Manvi: tumhare saath kabhi nahi ... mera haath choro ...

Virat: kyun dar lagta hai ...

Manvi: pagal ho kya ...

Virat: to phir ..

Manvi: kissi ne humein aise dekh liya to garbar ho jayegi ...

Virat: kuch nahi hoga ...

Manvi: tum akele jao naa mujhe to neend aa rahi hai ...

When suddenly they hear someones voice ...

"Kaun hai waha ..."

Virat suddenly push her inside the room and locks it and they are both standing behind the door close to each other ... virat still has his grip over her shoulders ... Manvi is just staring at him ...

Virat: Bach gaye ...  (suddenly he meets her eyes and they both have an eyelock and they stood there staring at each other )

Manvi realises the situation and takes her gaze off him ...

Manvi: Virat mera haath ...

Virat: Realising the situation now ... "Oh sorry"

Manvi: Lagta hai koi jag gaya hai ...

Virat: Haan shayad ... Sorry ... tumhe bhi abhi so jaana chahiye ... Goodnite

They were still stuck in the same position ...

Manvi: Virat ...

Virat: hmmm his eyes fixed on her beautiful angelic face ...

Manvi: Tum mere saamne se hato ge to tabhi mein jaake so paungi naa ...

Virat: Oh ... yeah ... sorry ... he moves aside and he slightly opens the door and walks out to go to his room ...

Manvi was continuously smiling at his antics ... she didnot realize when she dozed off and went to sleep ...

Next Morning ...

Jeevika: Mannu uth naa subah ho gayi hai ...

Manvi: Di sone do naa ... hiding her face with her blanket ...

Jeevika: mannu dekh breakfast ke liye der ho jaye gi ... aur waise bhi koi tumhara intezaar kar raha ... jaldi uth ...

Manvi: di Virat office ke nikal gaya kya ... I mean Jeeju ... woh log chale gaye ya abhi jaa rahe hai ...

Jeevika: Nahi to kyun ... tujhe unki itni chinta kyun ho rahi hai ... haan tu chalke tayaar ho ...

Manvi: Nahi di woh to main bas ...

Jeevika: tu chal zyada bol mat ... jaake fresh ho ja ... mein niche jaa rahi hoon ... tu jaldi niche aa

Manvi: waise di mera intezaar kaun kar raha hai ...

Jeevika: Hai koi khaas jo sirf tumse milne aaya hai ...

Manvi: Di mujhse ...

Jeevika: haan baba kitni boolti hai tu ... jaake tayaar bhi hoja ...

Manvi : ok di ... love you ... she runs to the washroom to get freshen up ... she got herself ready ... was ready to kill virat with her looks ... she was wearing a royal blue anarkali ... and had left her hair open to one side only and had applied her make up as well ... despite of having make up on she looked so pure and naturally pretty ... she runs out of her room to see who was waiting for her when she bumped onto some one ...

Manvi: ouch ... kya hai tum dekh ke nahi chal sakte

Virat's gaze was fixed in manvi ... she could feel his gaze and became conscious on how she looked ... her gaze was fixed on the floor now ... and Virat thought ... "yeh itni khbsurat kaise lag sakti hai" he came out of trance after his thoughts ...

Virat: kya baat hai .. tum itni train ki speed mein kaha jaa rahi ho ...

Manvi: woh di ... neeche ... she could not make eye contact with her ...

Jeevika: Mannu tu waha khare hoke kya kar rahi hai ... Jaldi aa naa niche ...

Manvi: ji di aayi ... they both walked down the stairs quietly ... manvi trying hard to avoid virats gaze and was just walking straight ... she was having a very different feeling ... When she saw the person who was waiting for her and was standing beside her di ... As soon as she saw the person ... her eyes got filled with tears and she had a huge grin on her face ... she stood at the steps for a moment ... virat realised and just looked at her ... when at his surprise manvi just ran down the few steps and ran towards the persons and flew her hands around him and hugged him tightly ... she hugged him so tight that virat could not believe his eyes ... he could not believe to what he just saw ...

He was just questioning himself ... who is that person? Why did manvi got shocked seeing him here ??? and how dare she run to him and hug and that too tight ??? and she is still hugging him ... Jeevika could notice the change in expression in her devars face ...

Manvi: looking at the persons face ... "tum ... tum kab aaye ... mujhe bataya kyun nahi ... mein tumse bahut naraaz hoon ... ek phone ... OMG!! Abhay mujhe yakeen hi nahi ho raha tum mere saamne khare ho ... she hugs him again ... I missed you so much"

And here Virat was fuming in anger ... he did not know why but he had started hating the guy before meeting him ...

Viren: "Arrey virat tu yahan kyun khara hai .. chal niche ..."

Everyone else had already met Abhay already ...

Jeevika: Viren Ji ... abhay yeh hai Viren ji and she blushed ...

Manvi: mere di ke woh ... and worlds best Jiju ...

Viren and Abhay shook hands and also hugged each other ...

Jeevika: aur abhay ... yeh hai mere devar ji ... Virat ... aur virat yeh hai abhay ... manvi ka dost kum zindagi zyada ... Abhay ...

Virat: oh zindagi and giving a dirty look to manvi ... by manvi was all confused by now ... Nice to meet you Abhay ... mujhe nahi pata tha ... ki tum manvi ki zindagi ho ... waise agar tum uski zindagi ho to ab tak kaha they aap ... (jealousy is only the word that could describe virats feelings right now ... viren and jeevika gave each other a look ... even Vanshika noticed Virats situation )

Abhay: iska matlab manvi ne aap sab ko mere bare mein kuch nahi bataya ... this is not it manvi ... tumne apne zindagi ke important person ke baare mein nahi bataya ...

Manvi: woh kya hai kabhi moka hi nahi mila ... waise bhi ab tum aa gaye ho to introduction bhi ho gaya .. sabse mil bhi liye ...

Dadaji : acha barkhurdar ... tumse milke bahut acha laga ... kaafi kushmijaaz ho aap ... abhi chalo nashte ka time ho gaya hai ... waise to hum har kaam time pe karna pasand karte hai ... toh chaliye nashta kare ...

Abhay: Ji bilkul ...

Everybody at the dining table ... Manvi and Abhay were seated beside each other and virat right infront of them ... everybody was busy eating except for virat as he was busy concentrating on manvi and abhay ... he was observing them so closely each and every moment of theirs ... The whole day passed all the family members were busy getting ready for the party where as Manvi was busy with abhay the whole day ... and Virat and Manvi had ignored each other the whole day ... Virat did not have his lunch or dinner as he had engrossed himself at work ... he was not able to concentrate but also was not ready to face anyone or anything ... all the time every moment manvi running towards abhay and hugging him flashed infront of his eyes ... Viren noticed his brothers condition ... but did not say anything to him ...

Scene Shift ...

Viren and Jeevikas room ...

Viren: Jeevika tumne Virat ko dekha ...

Jeevika: haan Viren ji ... mujhse uski yeh haalat dekhi nahi jaati ... yeh sab meri wajah se ...

Viren: Nahi Jeevika tumhari wajah se kuch bhi nahi ... woh virat ka gussa hi usse uske pyaar ke kareeb lekar jayega ...

Jeevika: Viren ji kya aapko lagta hai ... kya hum sahi kar rahe hai ... mera matlab ... abhay ko yaha bula k humnein sahi kiya kya ...

Viren: haan jeevika ... virat ki yeh haalat dekh kar to mujhe aise lagta hai ... ki us ke andar ki jawala ... bahut jald hi fatne wali hai ...

Jeevika: yahan aapko maza aa raha hai ... aur waha bechara virat pata nahi uske upar kya guzar rahi hogi

Knock knock ... "kya main andar aa sakta hoon"

Viren: arrey abhay tum aao naa please ...

Jeevika: abhay thankyou so much ... tum itni jaldi se yaha aa gaye ... it really means allot ...

Abhay: Arrey Jeevs yeh kya keh rahe ho aap ... yaha aake agar mein manvi ko uske pyaar ka ehsaas dila sakta hoon to kyun nahi ... Jeevs such batau ... meine un dono ke aakhon mein ek doosre ke lliye pyaar dekha hai ...

Viren: tumne bhi dekha naa ... dekha jeevika meine kaha naa meri ankhein kabhi dokha nahi kha sakti ...

Jeevika had a huge grin now ... " Mere liye is se khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ... mein aur meri mannu hum dono ek saath is ghar mein rahe aur us se bari baat ... us se virat jaisa jeevan saathi mile ..."

Abhay: yeh baat to such kaha tumne jeevs ... aur tum chinta mat karo ... mein hoon naa ... ab tum dekhna jaise bin pani ka machli tadapta hai ... waise hi virat manvi ki doori bardaasht nahi kar payega aur woh apne pyaar ka izhaar karega ... aur manvi bhi ... (he stopped saying anything as he noticed a pair of eyes staring at him ... with an angry look on her face )

Abhay: Manvi tum yaha ...

Manvi: mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi ...

Viren: Manvi meri baat suno ... is mein uski koi ghalti nahi hai ... woh to ...

Manvi: bas jiju ... main sab samajh gayi ... apko iski taraf daari karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ...

Jeevika: mannu dekh tu meri baat sun ...

Manvi: nahi di aaj mein kissi ki nahi sunne wali ... aur tum .. tumhari himmat kaisi huwee ... mujhe waha neeche intezaar karwa ke khud yaha .. di aur jiju se gappe laraane ...

Abhay : Gappe hahaha gappe ... jeevs hum gappe lara rahe the ...

Jeevika: Ha ha gappe ..

Viren : Gappe Jeevika ... hum gappe lara rahe the ...

Manvi was confused with their reaction ... yeh kya gappe gappe laga rakha hai aap ne ...

"NAHI HUM GAPPE LARA RAHE THEY" they all said together ... manvi was even more confused now ...

Abhay: woh i am sorry jaan ... woh kya hai naa mein yaha se guzar raha tha ... to Viren se socha kuch baat karta chalu ...

Manvi: acha bachu ... yeh batao ... tumhe jiju kaise lage and dont worry sab sach batana ... jiju boora nahi manne ge ...

Viren smiled ...

Abhay: main to sirf ek baat kahunga ... jeevs u r lucky to have viren kinda guy in ur life ... lekin ...

Manvi: Lekin kya ...

Abhay: dekhiye Viren no offence ok ... jo main mehsoos karta hoon mein wohi kehta hoon ... appka jo bhai hai naa ... Virat naam bataya tha naa appne ... (manvi eyes lit up hearing virats name ... she waited for abhay to say good things about him ..) virat kaafi akru type nahi hai ... bilkul apse alag hai woh ... kafi akru ... saru .. aur kaafi gusse wala lagta hai ... kya woh humesha ...

Manvi: Abhay yeh kya bole jaa rahe ho ... tum abhi virat se sahi se milli kaha ho ... woh itna bhi bura nahi hai ...

Viren: kya baat hai saali sahiba ... kal tak woh akru aur saru tha ... aur ab ek dum se party change ...

Manvi: nahi jiju aisi koi baat nahi hai ... woh to bas aise hi ...

Virat was passing by their room

Jeevika: arrey virat yaha aao ..

Virat: Ji bhabi ... his gaze went at manvi and Abhay ...

Abhay: hum sab abhi sirf tumhari hi baat kar rahe they ... Manvi mujhse keh rahi thi ki  tum kitne .. akru or saru ho ... (viren and jeevika were trying hard not to laugh and manvi was shocked ) with that he laughed ...

Manvi: arrey abhay yeh kya keh rahe ho tum ... maine aisa to nahi kaha ...

Virat: koi nahi abhay ... kuch logo ko meri taarif karne mein kaafi mazaa aata hai ... woh apna aayna dekhna bhool jaate hai ... waise bhi mujhe ab KOI FARAQ NAHI PARTA his gaze fixed at manvi ... (for some reason manvi was hurt hearing those words from virat ...

Manvi: Virat woh ...

Abhay: oh thats good to hear ... manvi ab tum jo chaho virat ko bula sakte ho ussey KOI FARAQ NAHI PARTA .. kyun virat ..
(virat just nodded manvi smiled ... and viren and jeevika didnot know how to react they were having fun seeing virat being so jealous but also did not like the fact that they were somehow hurting him ... manvi was just staring at virat and virat was trying hard not to look at him ...)

Abhay: waise manvi main tumse ek baat kehna to bhool gaya ...

Manvi: kya abhay ... looking at him now ...

Abhay : (he walks near her tucks her fallen hair from her face and says ... tum par yeh rang kaafi acha lagta hai ... tum kaafi khoobsurat lag rahi ho ...) manvi blushed ... which did not go unnoticed by virat ... he closed his fist tight )

Manvi: tumhari flirt karne ki aadat abhi tak gayi nahi hai naa ...

Abhay: kya karu baba ... tum hamesha hee itni khoobsurat dhikti ho ... to humein compliment to dena hi parta hai ... agar hum compliment na de to kaun dega ... hmmm...

It was always usual between abhay and manvi ... they love to tease each other compliment each other and also flirt with each other ... they knw each other since the age of 10 ... just like how Jeevika is an important part of manvis life ... just like that abhay is also an important part of her life ... they grew up together .. studied together ... there love for each other is too strong ... there love is not like lovers but its a different relationship they had ... it was like bestfriends but more than that ...)

Manvi: acha ab yeh sab choro mein tuhe tumhara kamraa .. dikhati hoon .. kaafi thak gaye hoge naaa ... chalo ab chalke soo jao ...

Abhay: arrey manvi iski kya zaroorat hai ... main tumhare kamre mein bhi so sakta hoon ... Yaad hai rishikesh mein hum dono kaise raat raat bhar jaag ke gappe shape lara te  they fir pata nahi kaise hum sote the ...

Manvi : was laughing tumhe woh sab yaad hai ... omg ... hum kitne pagal they naa ...

Viren: arre wah saali sahiba .. aap dono ki dosti itni gehri thi ...

Manvi: haan jiju bahut ... ab aap dono bhi so jayiye naa ... ok gudnite ... chalo bhi ab ... gudnite di ... (before leaving viren gives a thumbs to them and abhay winks at them .. whereas Virat was quietly standing in the corner and was listening to their conversation ... with no expressions ... before leaving manvi looked at virat ... she knew somethings bothering him ...)

Jeevika: Viren Ji ... acha huwa ke abhay aa gaya aur meri mannu ke chehre mein khushi wapas aa gayi ... virat gave a stern look to jeevika...

Viren : haan jeevika ... woh kaafi kush lag rahi hai aaj ... chalo acha hai ...

Jeevika: Viren ji ... mere man mein ek khayal aaya hai ...

Viren: kaisa khayal ...

Jeevika: aapko manvi ki aur abhay ki Jodi kaise lagti hai ... virat tum batao tum to uske dost ho naa ... tumhe unki Jodi kaisi lagti hai ...

Virat: (was so mad at her bhabhi) bhabhi yeh kya keh rahi ho aap ... and then he stopped ... with a straight face and stern voice he said .. "mujhe nahi pata" and he walks out ...

Viren and jeevika gave each other a victory smile ...

Viren: shayad ab kuch zyada hi ho gaya naa ...

Jeevika: hmmm ...

Virat was lost in his thoughts ... he walked towards his room and on his way ... he noticed abhays door slightly open he peaked in and found manvi in abhays arms ... they were hugging each other again ... and abhay kissed manvi on her cheeks and wished her goodnite ... (manvi was confused with his this gesture but didn't let it bother her ... abhay knew virat would peak in ...) she wished him goodnite as well and left the room ... and she noticed ... virat standing outside her room with hands folded ...

There was a fear in her heart now ... she was scared what if virat had seen abhay kissing her ... what would she say ... she slowly walked near her room and was about to walk in when she stopped and looked at virats face ... who looked so disturbed and anger was shown all over his face now ...

Virat: to mil liye apne bichde huwe dost se ...

Manvi: virat tum ...

Virat: Kaafi kush lag rahi ho aaj tum ... hogi bhi kyun nahi ... tumhari zindagi jo tumhare paas aayi hai ... (manvi was giving confused look to virat) waise ... mujhe nahi pata tha ... tum bhi un baaki ladkiyon jaisi ho ... manvi's eyes were filled with tears by now ...

Manvi: virat tum ...

Virat: sshhh ... tumhe kuch kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ... main sab samajhta hoon ... sab larkiyaa ... ek jaisi hoti hai .. mujhe laga tum thoda different ho lekin tum bhi un jaisi ... with that he left towards his room ...

Manvi was really hurt   she was crying ... she did not know that virats words would have so much affect on her heart ... she never took virat seriously in her life but today each and every single word he was saying had affected her heart ...

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Edited by meant4uonlie - 11 years ago
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i loved it :D
UPDATE SOOON :) x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love jealousy, for me it is the best
way to realize your love and Virat
angry young man avtaar is just mindblowing!
Uff! He would look so hawt if he will
be jeaous.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iLoveKushal.T

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i loved it :D
UPDATE SOOON :) x

 
Yay!! lol you are .. thankyou so much ... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ will definitely update soon ... πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

Love jealousy, for me it is the best

way to realize your love and Virat
angry young man avtaar is just mindblowing!
Uff! He would look so hawt if he will
be jeaous.

 
thank you dear ... so happy to see ur cmment ... πŸ˜ƒ and i agree with you .. you relaise ur love when you cant see your loved one with some one else ... just keep reading ... πŸ˜ƒ
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OMG!!!
Loved the update!!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!
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LOL JEEVS IT WAS TOO MUCH HOPE VIRMAN ISSE AUR DUR NA HO JAYE
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Super lovely nice sweet amazing and awsoum update
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I loved it! Jealous ViratπŸ˜†You're a great writer, update soon, thanks for the pmπŸ€—
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Amazing update!
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