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*ENTWINED* RTMC ff-chapter 13 pg 43 pg 43 (Page 6)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

me 1st..
 wil cmnt kal..

edited~~




 

haye, yeh greek god, aur yeh greek god ki maharani.. dono milker mujhe iss stry ko itna jyada psnd karwa rahe h .. kya batao..

 naughty dhruvi.. haye.. aapne love ko aise pyaar se dekh rhi h..

ki by chance agr prithvi use aise dekh le thi prithvi ko na jane kitni  baar pyaar hp jayega iss ladki se..

kya kammal ka scene tha..

 

knock  knock.. aapne sapno ki duniyaa se bahar nikalo balike'

powerkut ho gya h..

mere society main jab power cut hota h, poora society raat k time bahar aa jata h.. and hum.. raat bhar khelte h'

chit chat karte h.. and den skul main sote h..

 

but jab light aati h.. n hum sab jo chill ate h.. bhaiya.. ass paas ki bakki societies bhi uthh jati h..

we actually celebrate ' THE RETURN of light'

 

sooper doooper ladki h yeh tho.. aivien chali gyi prithvi k pass.

 Achi baat h, ghar main koi aur nahi h'

 

Oye hoye.. kya face expression k type h by god'.

Hey mera fv pata h kausa h??

THE  I give a shit FACE'.

Tumhara favorite kaunsa h????...

 

Haye.. kinta romantic banda h humara prithvi.. pakka ek acha jeevansaath banega..

Itne pyaar

 Se mana raha h dhruvi ko.. wow'

God god god' wait.. yeh last main kya hoa..

 

Prithvi is so much worried fr her.. but voh tho thik thak uske samne khadi h'

 Prithvi k dialogues se kuch bhott hi ganda.. miserable.. pathetic.. hazardous lagta h..

 Kya hoa tha dhraa k saath past main..??

O no.. why he is talking abt that abyss'. God'

Ud soon plz.. I wanna know further'

 



rashu!i love reading ur comments! Big smile power cut hone ka mazaa kuch aur hota hai nahi? ROFL

thank you so much for the lovely comment darling Hugagla update kar diya hai..in page 5..had sent u pm..jab time mile toh padh lena Hug

Originally posted by sweetsanyo

reso jii
 edit wil take time.. sry again
arre no problem at all..i had updated coz i knew i wudnt find the time for the rest of the week..so updated jaldi..u read whenever u find the time Smile
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 8:29am | IP Logged
It was an amazing update but I don't like d fact that Dhruvi had someone in her life other than Prithvi Confused, actually u know what Rashu k saath rehkar mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hai jaha RT wah Mugzz LOL LOL I am becoming like her only... Wink

But that Advait Angry  Angry  Angry I wanted to kill him... but no worries my Prithvi...

oops... I mean Dhruvi's Prithvi...

 will take care of his Dhruvi Embarrassed

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
lovely update disha Smile keep it up.Clap..waiting for the next chapSmile

Edited by Mugdhafan01 - 10 August 2012 at 2:41am

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samu_khamkar

It was an amazing update but I don't like d fact that Dhruvi had someone in her life other than Prithvi Confused, actually u know what Rashu k saath rehkar mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hai jaha RT wah Mugzz LOL LOL I am becoming like her only... Wink




rashu ko partner mil gaya
hamari rashu toh sooper possesive hai

u know in samantha's dharam veer version ff prem kahaniya
rashu was sooper angry wen annaya hugged her friend played by"ashish kapoor-cgm"
bachi bhi na mujhe toh elder bro or best friend ka feel aaya but hamari rashu ko kaun samjhaye after all RTMC ke pyaar me pagal jo hai

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by samu_khamkar

It was an amazing update but I don't like d fact that Dhruvi had someone in her life other than Prithvi Confused, actually u know what Rashu k saath rehkar mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hai jaha RT wah Mugzz LOL LOL I am becoming like her only... Wink

But that Advait Angry  Angry  Angry I wanted to kill him... but no worries my Prithvi...

oops... I mean Dhruvi's Prithvi...

 will take care of his Dhruvi Embarrassed

ROFL rashu maarnewaali hai phir toh mereko Tongue par kahaani mein twist toh banda hai na Tongue

thank you! Hug


Edited by disha15 - 07 August 2012 at 12:41pm
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pranita1202

Originally posted by samu_khamkar

It was an amazing update but I don't like d fact that Dhruvi had someone in her life other than Prithvi Confused, actually u know what Rashu k saath rehkar mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hai jaha RT wah Mugzz LOL LOL I am becoming like her only... Wink




rashu ko partner mil gaya
hamari rashu toh sooper possesive hai

u know in samantha's dharam veer version ff prem kahaniya
rashu was sooper angry wen annaya hugged her friend played by"ashish kapoor-cgm"
bachi bhi na mujhe toh elder bro or best friend ka feel aaya but hamari rashu ko kaun samjhaye after all RTMC ke pyaar me pagal jo hai

main toh gayi Dead rashu ande maaregi  meko Silly
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
cmnt edited

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pranita1202

Originally posted by samu_khamkar

It was an amazing update but I don't like d fact that Dhruvi had someone in her life other than Prithvi Confused, actually u know what Rashu k saath rehkar mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hai jaha RT wah Mugzz LOL LOL I am becoming like her only... Wink




rashu ko partner mil gaya
hamari rashu toh sooper possesive hai...n aap bhi ho mere liye...pranita di..  :D

u know in samantha's dharam veer version ff prem kahaniya
rashu was sooper angry wen annaya hugged her friend played by"ashish kapoor-cgm"
bachi bhi na mujhe toh elder bro or best friend ka feel aaya but hamari rashu ko kaun samjhaye after all RTMC ke pyaar me pagal jo hai

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