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*ENTWINED* RTMC ff-chapter 13 pg 43 pg 43 (Page 41)

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 10:31pm | IP Logged

Ye kya tha- itna chota sa update- '

Bache ko lolly pop dekha ker chidhaker bagh gayi disha madamaap!!...

so rude!!..not fair!

 

Abhi tho update shoro hi hoa tha ki khatam bhi ho gyaa!..-   :'(

After so big days u hav updated that too so little!-

 

Prithvi is sleeping-!!..ohoo ohoo!! That too wid his arms around her-  sahi h prithvi- jaane matt dena use apne se durr!

Catch her tight ok!.

Nice nice- dhruvi is cultivating WIFEY WIFEY habits in her- ^_^  sarvagunn sampan patni banegi.. kala tikaa lga do dhra ko'

 

"That girl.She's going to kill me someday." he said,smiling,as he heard her footsteps fading.- yeaa right! She can kill u- bcz the cooking she had done- the brunt toast is so delicious that he cud die!  :D haha!!..

 

Moms ki timing thodi galat hoti h!!- but no matter- after all moms r moms!.:)

 

"u r leaving me again"- dis dialogue of prithvi scared me!...koi deeper meaning tho nahi h naa iss line kaa??- or shud I take dis dialogue more than serious.

 

One more thing I didn't miss is-"but tonight is mine"- ahem ahem! AHEM AHEM!...

 

Ek song h jiski bhot yaad aa rhi h iss update k baad-

 

Zara zara mahekta h, bahekta h,

Ajj tho mera dil,..

Mei pyaasi hun..

Muje bharle apni baaho mei!!...  



Edited by sweetsanyo - 30 June 2013 at 10:32pm

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 5:53pm | IP Logged
hmmm,iss story ka kya hoga :|

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 6:31pm | IP Logged
^Kuch nahi! You will continue it and soon post the next part. That is whats going to happen! 
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:20am | IP Logged
hey! i discovered ur ff recently.. Smile read it n loved it.. superb! Thumbs Up Waiting for the next part.. since i am ur new reader pls dun forget to pm me when u update it Tongue
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
hey thanks! =)
And yeah sure :) 
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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Hey disha sweetie...that was a fab update...too good...
I am waiting for the next...
Lov ya
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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:54am | IP Logged
dishaaa...
upd8 yaarrr..
its beeenn superrr looong..

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Awesome update...luved it dishu :)
srry for late cmnt

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