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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
me 1st..
 wil cmnt kal..

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haye, yeh greek god, aur yeh greek god ki maharani.. dono milker mujhe iss stry ko itna jyada psnd karwa rahe h .. kya batao..

 naughty dhruvi.. haye.. aapne love ko aise pyaar se dekh rhi h..

ki by chance agr prithvi use aise dekh le thi prithvi ko na jane kitni  baar pyaar hp jayega iss ladki se..

kya kammal ka scene tha..

 

knock  knock.. aapne sapno ki duniyaa se bahar nikalo balike…

powerkut ho gya h..

mere society main jab power cut hota h, poora society raat k time bahar aa jata h.. and hum.. raat bhar khelte h…

chit chat karte h.. and den skul main sote h..

 

but jab light aati h.. n hum sab jo chill ate h.. bhaiya.. ass paas ki bakki societies bhi uthh jati h..

we actually celebrate – THE RETURN of light…

 

sooper doooper ladki h yeh tho.. aivien chali gyi prithvi k pass.

 Achi baat h, ghar main koi aur nahi h…

 

Oye hoye.. kya face expression k type h by god….

Hey mera fv pata h kausa h??

THE  I give a shit FACE….

Tumhara favorite kaunsa h????...

 

Haye.. kinta romantic banda h humara prithvi.. pakka ek acha jeevansaath banega..

Itne pyaar

 Se mana raha h dhruvi ko.. wow…

God god god… wait.. yeh last main kya hoa..

 

Prithvi is so much worried fr her.. but voh tho thik thak uske samne khadi h…

 Prithvi k dialogues se kuch bhott hi ganda.. miserable.. pathetic.. hazardous lagta h..

 Kya hoa tha dhraa k saath past main..??

O no.. why he is talking abt that abyss…. God…

Ud soon plz.. I wanna know further…

 




Edited by sweetsanyo - 07 August 2012 at 6:57am

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Okay :D

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nice update loved it..Smile waiting for the chap 3Wink n my siggy???Cry

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surbhi Hug

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
This was a nice update. They both love, tease, fight n care 4 each other. I love their bonding.

But wat happened wid Dhruvi in her past, dat she is so afraid? I mean is there something bad has happened?

Now u made curious enough, so plz update soon otherwise I'll keep nagging... ;) :p

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samu_khamkar

This was a nice update. They both love, tease, fight n care 4 each other. I love their bonding.

But wat happened wid Dhruvi in her past, dat she is so afraid? I mean is there something bad has happened?

Now u made curious enough, so plz update soon otherwise I'll keep nagging... ;) :p

Thanks parineeta Hug glad you liked it.And the reason behind Dhruvi's odd behaviour will be revealed soon-ish Tongue


Edited by disha15 - 05 August 2012 at 8:57am

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Dishuuu! part 2 up! yayyy! U know i am much more eager for the one thats gonna come next! and u also know my views on this update! PART 3 -ehhh waiting for it! 

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Originally posted by Kasurbest

Dishuuu! part 2 up! yayyy! U know i am much more eager for the one thats gonna come next! and u also know my views on this update! PART 3 -ehhh waiting for it! 

its ready monal :D will update in like two-three days Smile

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