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*ENTWINED* RTMC ff-chapter 13 pg 43 pg 43 (Page 2)

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aru_86

hey congo on ur 1st ff..but 1 req pls keep the fonts a bit big

hey thanks! Big smileAnd font,yes will do that now,sorry Tongue
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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Yipeee one more RtMc ff :) wowww nd congrats 4 it disha.

Actually i hav read it on RTW nd requsted u der to post it here nd today u did it :) thanx for it

i liked dis story, plz continue

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
DISHUUU  *our typical greeting*! ! So, yup the weekend finally came. I was eagerly waiting for you to post Entwined on IF! and U did! Congratulations. Coming to my views you already know from your 'sasural' heheheh *wink* I am really waiting to read more! Update asap on RTW! and for the 1st chappy *copy-paste* my long comment. Ditto as in rtw. That you already know now. ryt? 

Congrats once again for starting your very own ff! I already know you are going to rock it! All the best! Cont asap... Love ya babe <3

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mugdhafan01

hmmm i read it.. n u know i reALLY LOVED IT...had not read any of the ff similar to this one..it really nice...lovelySmile ohk prithiv an handsome doc.. n dhruvi n beautiful docSmile cool!
n both r best frnds.. yipeee.. Wink n i liked their fighting part... n prithvi is in love with dhruvi...hehe bday pe nai propose kiya next week tha n then 5months bhi hogayeCry n prithvi said what the  yeh sunke toh Mujhe ASR ki yaad agaye.. hehe..LOL  n i lked it when prithvi wispered in dhruvi ears.. in end loved it nice update ... nw update chapter 2 soon..Smile want to read agge jaldi jaldiLOL

Im really glad you liked it Hug  and what the-lol i had this friend whose good mornign and good night-used to be what the f ROFL ASR..ya i got that from another IPK fan too (one of my cousin who read this Tongue)  updating next part tomorrow Tongue 


Edited by disha15 - 04 August 2012 at 11:20am

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samu_khamkar

Yipeee one more RtMc ff :) wowww nd congrats 4 it disha.

Actually i hav read it on RTW nd requsted u der to post it here nd today u did it :) thanx for it

i liked dis story, plz continue

parineeta rite? Big smile ya i rememba..updating tom here :)
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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kasurbest

DISHUUU  *our typical greeting*! ! So, yup the weekend finally came. I was eagerly waiting for you to post Entwined on IF! and U did! Congratulations. Coming to my views you already know from your 'sasural' heheheh *wink* I am really waiting to read more! Update asap on RTW! and for the 1st chappy *copy-paste* my long comment. Ditto as in rtw. That you already know now. ryt? 

Congrats once again for starting your very own ff! I already know you are going to rock it! All the best! Cont asap... Love ya babe <3

Monalll Hug yup!weekend is finally here! Dancing SOOO glad dude!
And Entwined (im still drooling over the name Day Dreaming ) chap 3 will be updated soon-ish Tongue updating the 2nd one tom morning here..and 3rd one in the evening..so that i can updat ein RTW also n here together Tongue warna phir next sunday tak intezaar karna padega Geek
Love you too! Hug
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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by disha15

Originally posted by Kasurbest

DISHUUU  *our typical greeting*! ! So, yup the weekend finally came. I was eagerly waiting for you to post Entwined on IF! and U did! Congratulations. Coming to my views you already know from your 'sasural' heheheh *wink* I am really waiting to read more! Update asap on RTW! and for the 1st chappy *copy-paste* my long comment. Ditto as in rtw. That you already know now. ryt? 

Congrats once again for starting your very own ff! I already know you are going to rock it! All the best! Cont asap... Love ya babe <3

Monalll Hug yup!weekend is finally here! Dancing SOOO glad dude! me tooo! 
And Entwined (im still drooling over the name Day Dreaming ) Awww I am flattered!!!!! chap 3 will be updated soon-ish Tongue -ish! I read that!  updating the 2nd one tom morning here..and 3rd one in the evening..OH thats great! Cant wait for tomm evening! so that i can updat ein RTW also n here together Tongue Cool! u will be most probably getting my comment in your sasural! and ditto paste over here haha :p warna phir next sunday tak intezaar karna padega Geek No Ways dude! tom evening! is set. no more delays!
Love you too! Hug Always! <3 

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
resed fr now..
 wil read n cmt soon..

~~EDITED~~

Believe.. u r incredibly awesome in story writing..

 But plz keep it this way only..

 Coz, mujhe simple reading bhott jyada psnd h, had se jyada psnd h…

 

Pehle tho banner, kya awesome banner h.. yeh talent tho pata tha mujhe tumahra…

Lekin stry wala talent.. haye, gazab dhaa buddy tum yahan. Sachi main awesome characterization..

 Rain ho rhi h,, yahan dilli main bhi ho rhi h.. feel aa gyi boss,…

Prithvi.. cool banda h, always a leader he is.. oye hoye.. a ruler always.. pata nahi, kab humari dhruvi ke dil koo rule karega h..

 Yah phirr karta tho h.. but dhruvi dnt wanna disclose it now..

 Prithvi tho dairy likhta tha, isliye , uska pata h ki voh bachapan se dhraa ko pyaar karta h, but dhruvi kabse karti , uska kasie pata lagega..

 Yeh  tho h,.. pyaar tho karti h bandi.. isliye tho corse chodd diya, just bcz prihvi ko ek ladki ne flirt kaha…

Haye,.. kya ladki h yeh..

 

Prithvi blish karr rha h.. arey baap re.. matt karo blush.. bhott jayada cute lagte ho prithvi.. dhraa ko ek aur baar pyaar ho jayega tumse.. but phirr bhi yeh ladki batayegi nahi tumhe…

 

Dairy wala part was too gud.. mujhe bhi panda tha aage ka part.. kya gandi timing h prithvi ki by god.. vry wrng yaar..

 Balki mujhe pata h ki kya h aage… but agar dhruvi paddh leti tho sure ho jatai na main…

Koi nahi..

 Prithvi abhi confess karo plz.. kahin koi problem na ho jaye badmain..

Which I strongly feel is gonna happen.

Finger crossed.. dono ko ase hi khush rakhna god..

Plz. Ud soon,. Lov u for this stry yaar.. u are a lovely writer.


bANNER MAIN THO TUMNE JAAN DAAL RAKHI H.. SO AWESOME




Edited by sweetsanyo - 05 August 2012 at 7:03am

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