*ENTWINED* RTMC ff-chapter 13 pg 43 pg 43 - Page 30

Originally posted by: disha15

hahaha!I know right?! Blame it all on exams!They totally suck! :|

dat was beautiful..
luvd it..

Originally posted by: disha15

hey nams =P

Ye kya tha- itna chota sa update- '

Bache ko lolly pop dekha ker chidhaker bagh gayi disha madamaap!!...

so rude!!..not fair!

 

Abhi tho update shoro hi hoa tha ki khatam bhi ho gyaa!..-   :'(

After so big days u hav updated that too so little!-

 

Prithvi is sleeping-!!..ohoo ohoo!! That too wid his arms around her-  sahi h prithvi- jaane matt dena use apne se durr!

Catch her tight ok!.

Nice nice- dhruvi is cultivating WIFEY WIFEY habits in her- ^_^  sarvagunn sampan patni banegi.. kala tikaa lga do dhra ko'

 

"That girl.She's going to kill me someday." he said,smiling,as he heard her footsteps fading.- yeaa right! She can kill u- bcz the cooking she had done- the brunt toast is so delicious that he cud die!  :D haha!!..

 

Moms ki timing thodi galat hoti h!!- but no matter- after all moms r moms!.:)

 

"u r leaving me again"- dis dialogue of prithvi scared me!...koi deeper meaning tho nahi h naa iss line kaa??- or shud I take dis dialogue more than serious.

 

One more thing I didn't miss is-"but tonight is mine"- ahem ahem! AHEM AHEM!...

 

Ek song h jiski bhot yaad aa rhi h iss update k baad-

 

Zara zara mahekta h, bahekta h,

Ajj tho mera dil,..

Mei pyaasi hun..

Muje bharle apni baaho mei!!...  

Edited by sweetsanyo - 10 years ago

hmmm,iss story ka kya hoga :|

^Kuch nahi! You will continue it and soon post the next part. That is whats going to happen! 

hey! i discovered ur ff recently.. 😊 read it n loved it.. superb! 👍🏼 Waiting for the next part.. since i am ur new reader pls dun forget to pm me when u update it 😛

hey thanks! =)

Hey disha sweetie...that was a fab update...too good...
I am waiting for the next...
Lov ya

dishaaa...
upd8 yaarrr..