πwow...conzos 2 d new RTMC ff !! π₯³
its fabulus!!!
luv it !!!
Prithvi n Dhruvi...wow..gr8 names!! π
luv d banner!!! its wow.. βοΈ
Prithvi d greek God nevr had a gf!!!!?? he must luv Dhruvi a LOT!!π
uve written an amzng charactr sketch!!! superb description!! zodiac sign..to choise of clothes...to typical xprssns...!! perfect!!! π
dey r SO cute n perfect 4 each othr!!
luv their fights!!
Dhra...cute name! π
dey luv each othr a LOT!!!
parents r also gr8!!!
gr8 bondngs d families hav!!
diiary...wow...ye sab jo lika hai ab usse keh bhi do...π
luvd ur writng...fabulus!! luvd d pun...n d witt...n d sarcasm!! π
part 2-
oooh hooo... Dhra Prithvi ke view ko admire kar rahi hai!! π
kaash aisa neighbor mere paas bhi hota!!!! π
shes SO lost in him!!! π³
luvd their nok-jhok...
kya super cute scene tha...Prithvi holdng her...π
beautifully descrbd...by u...really like d sciency thng u include..βοΈ
but ye "he"kon hai?? how is he rel8td 2 dhra??π
kya huva ???
whos d jerk??? π‘
u also luv torturng us wid d mystry...beechare hum..our hapiness amzng ff writrs ki mercy pe hain..
part 3
wow...just wow...ure gr8!! βοΈ
fabulusly written ...d music...d visuals ur words were cr8tng...were superb!! π βοΈ
i feel lik im in anothr world...
like i can c Dhraa on d buildng...feel her pain...reliv her flashbacks...!!!! ure superb!! ππΌ βοΈ
Beechari Dhruvi...she fell 4 sum1...luvd him a LOt...only 2 get her heart broken...by d devil...π
d flashbacks were painful...So much shes suffered...π
really lik d way u include d zodiac charactrs..
Poor Prithvi...he luvs her wid all his heart n soul...2 c her in dat pain...cant imagine...π
damn dat Advait...d π€¬. 4 his lust he destroyd her...π‘
how culd he??? π‘
when a girl no longer belivs in fairy tale endings...it shows how much pain ..n betrayal she been thru..
Prithvi...i luv u even more...(dont noe how dats possble..) 4 being u...β€οΈ
dis part was beautifully written...ure amzng!! srsly!!βοΈβοΈπ
uve written a dark story wid quite sum light...
do continue soon...luv u...n dis awesum story...π€
P.S.- now d banner seems to fit perfectly...its 2 perfect!!!