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Monal

@littleflaws

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Posted: 11 years ago

DISHUUU *our typical greeting*! ! So, yup the weekend finally came. I was eagerly waiting for you to post Entwined on IF! and U did! Congratulations. Coming to my views you already know from your 'sasural' heheheh *wink* I am really waiting to read more! Update asap on RTW! and for the 1st chappy *copy-paste* my long comment. Ditto as in rtw. That you already know now. ryt?

Congrats once again for starting your very own ff! I already know you are going to rock it! All the best! Cont asap... Love ya babe <3

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disha

@.FemmeFatale.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mugdhafan01
hmmm i read it.. n u know i reALLY LOVED IT...had not read any of the ff similar to this one..it really nice...lovely😊 ohk prithiv an handsome doc.. n dhruvi n beautiful doc😊 cool!
n both r best frnds.. yipeee.. 😉 n i liked their fighting part... n prithvi is in love with dhruvi...hehe bday pe nai propose kiya next week tha n then 5months bhi hogaye😭 n prithvi said what the yeh sunke toh Mujhe ASR ki yaad agaye.. hehe..😆 n i lked it when prithvi wispered in dhruvi ears.. in end loved it nice update ... nw update chapter 2 soon..😊 want to read agge jaldi jaldi😆

Im really glad you liked it 🤗 and what the-lol i had this friend whose good mornign and good night-used to be what the f 🤣 ASR..ya i got that from another IPK fan too (one of my cousin who read this 😛) updating next part tomorrow 😛

Edited by disha15 - 11 years ago

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disha

@.FemmeFatale.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
Yipeee one more RtMc ff :) wowww nd congrats 4 it disha.

Actually i hav read it on RTW nd requsted u der to post it here nd today u did it :) thanx for it

i liked dis story, plz continue

parineeta rite? 😃 ya i rememba..updating tom here :)

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disha

@.FemmeFatale.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kasurbest
DISHUUU *our typical greeting*! ! So, yup the weekend finally came. I was eagerly waiting for you to post Entwined on IF! and U did! Congratulations. Coming to my views you already know from your 'sasural' heheheh *wink* I am really waiting to read more! Update asap on RTW! and for the 1st chappy *copy-paste* my long comment. Ditto as in rtw. That you already know now. ryt?

Congrats once again for starting your very own ff! I already know you are going to rock it! All the best! Cont asap... Love ya babe <3

Monalll 🤗 yup!weekend is finally here! SOOO glad dude!

And Entwined (im still drooling over the name 😍 ) chap 3 will be updated soon-ish 😛 updating the 2nd one tom morning here..and 3rd one in the evening..so that i can updat ein RTW also n here together 😛 warna phir next sunday tak intezaar karna padega 🤓

Love you too! 🤗

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Monal

@littleflaws

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: disha15

Monalll 🤗 yup!weekend is finally here! SOOO glad dude! me tooo!
And Entwined (im still drooling over the name 😍 ) Awww I am flattered!!!!! chap 3 will be updated soon-ish 😛 -ish! I read that! updating the 2nd one tom morning here..and 3rd one in the evening..OH thats great! Cant wait for tomm evening! so that i can updat ein RTW also n here together 😛 Cool! u will be most probably getting my comment in your sasural! and ditto paste over here haha :p warna phir next sunday tak intezaar karna padega 🤓 No Ways dude! tom evening! is set. no more delays!
Love you too! 🤗 Always! <3

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

resed fr now..

wil read n cmt soon..

~~EDITED~~

Believe.. u r incredibly awesome in story writing..

But plz keep it this way only..

Coz, mujhe simple reading bhott jyada psnd h, had se jyada psnd h…

Pehle tho banner, kya awesome banner h.. yeh talent tho pata tha mujhe tumahra…

Lekin stry wala talent.. haye, gazab dhaa buddy tum yahan. Sachi main awesome characterization..

Rain ho rhi h,, yahan dilli main bhi ho rhi h.. feel aa gyi boss,…

Prithvi.. cool banda h, always a leader he is.. oye hoye.. a ruler always.. pata nahi, kab humari dhruvi ke dil koo rule karega h..

Yah phirr karta tho h.. but dhruvi dnt wanna disclose it now..

Prithvi tho dairy likhta tha, isliye , uska pata h ki voh bachapan se dhraa ko pyaar karta h, but dhruvi kabse karti , uska kasie pata lagega..

Yeh tho h,.. pyaar tho karti h bandi.. isliye tho corse chodd diya, just bcz prihvi ko ek ladki ne flirt kaha…

Haye,.. kya ladki h yeh..

Prithvi blish karr rha h.. arey baap re.. matt karo blush.. bhott jayada cute lagte ho prithvi.. dhraa ko ek aur baar pyaar ho jayega tumse.. but phirr bhi yeh ladki batayegi nahi tumhe…

Dairy wala part was too gud.. mujhe bhi panda tha aage ka part.. kya gandi timing h prithvi ki by god.. vry wrng yaar..

Balki mujhe pata h ki kya h aage… but agar dhruvi paddh leti tho sure ho jatai na main…

Koi nahi..

Prithvi abhi confess karo plz.. kahin koi problem na ho jaye badmain..

Which I strongly feel is gonna happen.

Finger crossed.. dono ko ase hi khush rakhna god..

Plz. Ud soon,. Lov u for this stry yaar.. u are a lovely writer.

bANNER MAIN THO TUMNE JAAN DAAL RAKHI H.. SO AWESOME

Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Goldie

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

next tym bada font chaliye

k i read it by pressing ctrl and scrolling the mouse and magnifying it. gals u also try

love it sooper duper fantastic

loved ur description of rt n mc

loved their fight

i liked mugs name dhruvi

banner is awesome

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disha

@.FemmeFatale.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202
next tym bada font chaliye

k i read it by pressing ctrl and scrolling the mouse and magnifying it. gals u also try

love it sooper duper fantastic

loved ur description of rt n mc

loved their fight

i liked mugs name dhruvi

banner is awesome

font sorry sorry 😛 woh bada kiya tha maine baad mein 🤪

thank you pranita! means a lot you being here

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disha

@.FemmeFatale.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

@nandini : i cant believ you've landed here 😍 im so honoured! thank you so much!

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

cmnt ho gya h.. dekho lo plz..
late hun, sry fr that..
bada cmnt h, poora padhna

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