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Di. . . .. . .
Not fair. . . .
Ek toh aapne ne kr ki sad endng di. . . .
Abb jab hume happy endng chahiye toh u r nt updatng. . . . . .
Plz di update karo na. . .
Kr ki sad ending kisse chahiye?? . . . .
Plz happy endng do na. . .
Update karo na. . . .
Plz. . . . . .

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UPdate kritz..
Or else...
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4 get my long cmmnts with colours...

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Kriti update it na Tongue

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Guyz My Pre- Boards got postponed so thought to write this one...Hope u all like this update
sorry for the short one
need idead for further updates...



Rey is crying bitterly in the BB court.he's alone,no one is here to sooth him'his friend is gone away after breaking friendship with him'and his love his kriya..is also gone away coz of his mistakes'He's praying to god to give him a second chance a second chance to rectify his mistakes'to get his kriya his baat cutter back in his life'.and he's also cursing himself for his mistake.

 

When he's busy in cursing and praying at a same tym,a ahand touch his shoulder ,he wipe his tears'and stand on his feet'to look at the person..and got shocked to see smriti here.

 

He turns to leave but stop at his track when he hear

 

"I will give u a Second Chance"

 

Rey look at her confused

 

Sm :yes main tumhe ek second chance dungi'tumhare liye nhi apni beti beti k liye'coz main jaanti hoon'meri beti sirf tumhare khush reh sakti hai'bar main apni beti ki khushi k liye use barbaad hota nhi dekh sakti'aur'is rey ka saath uska koi future nhi'.par rey k bina bhi uska koi future nhi hai'that's why I'm giving u a second chance to prove urself. Tell me kyat um is second chance k liye tyaar ho.

 

Rey :main taar hoon aunty'mujhse bas is second chance ki zaroorat thi'main kriya k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon'.

 

Sm :toh theek hai'tuhare paas 5 saal ka tym apne aapko prove karne k liye'ek kaabil insaan banne k liye'.par tum apne aapko prove sirf Reyansh banker karoge'Reyansh SINGHANIA nhi'tumhe jo karma hoga'apne bal pe karma hoga'apne dad ki power ki help se nhi'aur in 5 saalo main tum kriya se milne tak ki koshish nhi karoge'.bola manjoor hai.

 

Rey :manjoor hai'main apne aapko prove karke rahunga'aapko bhi aur world ko bhi.

 

Sm :I wish aisa hi ho




need ideas for further updates


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kriti



Edited by Kriti_rox - 10 November 2012 at 4:12am

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