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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
Lol Ridz, first let me just get this out of the way- it really isn't over until the ending's happy for you and this warms my "leave-them-suffering-and-wallowing-in-misery" heart. LOL


THIS is the kind of behaviour I wanted to see from Arnav. Some semblance of acknowledgement that he KNOWS how badly he hurt Khushi. I always expected him to let her go after he discovered the truth, unable to forgive himself. I knew Khushi would forgive him and I expected her to persuade him that she understood why he did what he did. 

I just... the line where he says he would kill anyone who dared to do something like that to his sister- it reminded me of the time when they first met at the fashion show and Khushi asked what would he do if someone said the same thing's about HIS sister as he was saying about hers.

This OS is what I wanted Arnav and Khushi's story to be like post-revelation.

Instead... we get the freaking Old Lady Traffic Police and Bed-Cricket. I'm all for ArShi scenes- I just want some sign that Arnav realises what he did was wrong and his fault and that he NEEDS to feel guilty- not guilt-trip Khushi.


Edited by arisai - 12 August 2012 at 2:15pm

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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
So I'm late I know!

Don't kill me! You have so many res's to edit as well LOL!

Awwhh what an OS! The little boy scene was so cute! That made him realise and he said sorry and let her go ...

After that I thought no wait Khushi will forgive him and will stay but she said she needs time and went.

That was a big no even I know she needed space. I thought she wouldn't go back

But then hey what's Arnav for ;)

He stalked her LOL!

And she obv knew awww!!!

Loved it SS

Mwahh love you too MUCHO

Edited by Aveiro - 30 August 2012 at 3:25pm

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Ridzz.. OMG that was sooo sweet.. I absolutely loved the OS

The little kid at the temple was soo sweet and Arnav's realization had me go- FINALLY

I'm so glad that he realized that he hurt her and he let her go

I would've preferred it if he did some grovelling but this works too

 He stalks her?! I should be creeped out but this is Arnav we're talking about
*Sigh*


Edited by shiv-gauri4eva - 15 August 2012 at 8:30am

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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
Apologies! 

I usually don't reserve and not edit, so I'm really sorry!

It's nothing personal - of course!.

Just finished reading it! I loved it! 

Great OS, you portrayed everything beautifully! The emotions were great and realistic. 

I loved the fact that Khushi wanted her own space for a while - but of course, Arnav being Arnav, just stalked her. LOL

And the scene with the little boy who wanted Khushi to be his Di was super sweet!

Well done! Smile


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ahahha! ROFL got it babes! ;)

-edit.

Comment - I dont know which number. Time : - 23:02.

Now this is what Arnav should be like! he should really understand the depth of his faults and regret deeply. The bucking basshole! If it were up to me I would guve this fictional chqracter a left and a right. Honeatly. But you have bought a wonderful shade off his too be regret beautifully. And I cant spell anymore -_- dont look at me like that okay. I am just too tired.

Her doubt and naivety was bought up fantastically. :D His feelings and thw point regarding his aiater was so well put because we can very well imagine him throttling the offender but for Khushi? he would probably think about it like a milllion times.

A marvelous come back Ridz

Love You.

a a s h i f a

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