Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
Rajmata, poore half an hour lage hai but mind you, cell ki wajah se short comment hi hoga. About your reply, kamini meine kaha tha ke hindi dialogue mat daliyo and use full name instead of M and G. But meri kaun sunta hai? Ab iska epilogue milega ki nahi ya sab work finish karke HIMALAYAS jayegi, sanyaas lene? Tu sirf mere Maan uncle ke peeche kyo padi rehti hai? Jealous. Thank god ke sameera aur meera ka part zyada nahi tha. Waise, dubara online aane ke baad tera phele read karke comment kar rahi hu.
The whole 'article', 'revenge' and 'sudden marriage' part was amazing. Pata nahi itne WACKO ideas kaha se lati hai? Mein toh apne aap ko table tennis ball samjh rahi thi, kiski side lu aur kisko sympathy du. Gosh, that was indeed a roller coaster ride but accha hua ke baaki characters 'unwanted gum' ki tarah nahi chipke. I really loved the plot and really enjoyed it. Overall, superb.
Even, GC ke baare mey notes was a really good thing between all this.
Do cont soon and do PM me.
Originally posted by: NawabZadi
Gosh... Its awesome i just loved it
read all the parts in a sitting itself and its really amazing😳 pressed like on every part except 8th one... IF didnt let me press the like😭
You are awesome dear 👏
Originally posted by: rsusmita
just loved it read all parts in one go
nice concept dear
loved it
please give epilogue for this
and please come back again with another story
last prt???
Sissy sare stries jaldi jaldi khatam kyu kari ho????
Btw nyc update...
Geet sacchi mein nehle pe dehla hai!!!!
She tricked maan...
Hehehe...
Sry fr l8 comment vo actually trip pe gayi thi...
Phir se ni hoga...promise
Lov u,
Mish u...
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