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Posted: 26 June 2006 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel_83191

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LOL

might want to be careful in what you put in the next part...you'd be losing a lot of readersLOLLOLLOL

LOLhmm.ure rite..but i'd probably lose more readers if I decided not to contLOLLOL

yes u will now can u plz continue soon i'm getting bored here

SOO Sorry...Iam actually a bit ahead of track and my next part for this ff will be tom instead of wed...Tongue

 

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Posted: 26 June 2006 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by moderngirl

Originally posted by angel_83191

Originally posted by moderngirl

Originally posted by zhasan2

LOL

might want to be careful in what you put in the next part...you'd be losing a lot of readersLOLLOLLOL

LOLhmm.ure rite..but i'd probably lose more readers if I decided not to contLOLLOL

yes u will now can u plz continue soon i'm getting bored here

SOO Sorry...Iam actually a bit ahead of track and my next part for this ff will be tom instead of wed...Tongue

 

oh great can't wait

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Posted: 26 June 2006 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by moderngirl

Originally posted by angel_83191

Originally posted by moderngirl

Originally posted by zhasan2

LOL

might want to be careful in what you put in the next part...you'd be losing a lot of readersLOLLOLLOL

LOLhmm.ure rite..but i'd probably lose more readers if I decided not to contLOLLOL

yes u will now can u plz continue soon i'm getting bored here

SOO Sorry...Iam actually a bit ahead of track and my next part for this ff will be tom instead of wed...Tongue

 

great! cant waitTongue! no more laziness i guessLOL

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Posted: 26 June 2006 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Can't wait till u continue!!

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Posted: 26 June 2006 at 5:35pm | IP Logged

Thanks everyone!

Originally posted by zhasan2

Originally posted by moderngirl

Originally posted by angel_83191

Originally posted by moderngirl

Originally posted by zhasan2

LOL

might want to be careful in what you put in the next part...you'd be losing a lot of readersLOLLOLLOL

LOLhmm.ure rite..but i'd probably lose more readers if I decided not to contLOLLOL

yes u will now can u plz continue soon i'm getting bored here

SOO Sorry...Iam actually a bit ahead of track and my next part for this ff will be tom instead of wed...Tongue

 

great! cant waitTongue! no more laziness i guessLOL

no, infact more laziness...why do you think iam writing LOL

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Dhruv and Vedika leave to go shopping

Dhruv first stops at the mithai(sweets) shop

Dhruv( as he gets out of the car) Ved tum yahin tehro mein mithai pick up kar ke atha hoon!!

Ved (quickly gets out) nahi, mein bhi chaloongi!!

Dhruv nods as they both walk in the store

Dhruvs mouth starts watering as they walk into the store

Theres a long line at the counter

Dhruv and Ved join the line

Dhruv (to Ved) mmm yum, I love sweets!! I think I'll buy some for us too!! Ab muje bahut bhook lagi hai~!!

Ved laughs

The lines moves and both are at the counter now

Cashier (happily) may I help you sir?

Dhruv (smiles) yeah, We placed an order for the Raizada Family!!

Cashier (cheerly) sure sir, that'll be here in a few mins! Would you like anything else??

Dhruv (nods) yep, may I please have a serve of barfi's and jalebis!! (turns to look at Ved) aur Tumhe kya chaiye??

Ved (smiles) muje kuch nahi chaiye!!

Dhruv- arre yaar, agar tum mere saath nahi khaogi tho mama mujh par naraaz hojayegi ki mein akela hi mithai khagaya!!

Ved - fine! Mein bhi barfi khaloongi!!

Dhruv nods just as their order comes

Ved carries the mini bags of food they just ordered and Dhruv carries the huge box of sweets to the car..

He puts the big box in the back seat as both sit in the front seats and eat their sweets

Ved only eats one barfi and Dhruv quickly gouges down a few jalebis and barfis..

Afterwards

They go to the diwali shop and buy tons of fireworks!

Dhruv also picks out a few decorations as Ved helps him choose..

Dhruv carries all the stuff to their car

They finally make the last stop at the flower shop.

Dhruv lets Ved do all the picking there

Later on

They drive home and take everything inside the house

Kavita (walks out from the kitchen) arre, tum dono agaye!

Dhruv (smiles) ji mama aur hum sab kuch laayen!!

Kavita smiles as Rudra and nih walk out

Ved smiles at them

Kavita introduces Ved to them

Taras introduced as well since they weren't here when Ved and uma came

Everyones jobs assigned

Rudra and tara do the firecraker arrangements!!

Tara (whispers to Rudra) bhaiya, I've got a plan!!

She tells Rudra her plan as both smile

While nih, kavita, uma and titli do the rasoi work

And Dhruv and Ved are doing the decorations

Dhruv hummingly walks down the staricase as he loops the long flower garland around the rails

And Ved puts little bows on the ends of the stairs

Its looking very cute

When Ved cell rings

She goes and answers it

Dhruvs not paying attention he's too busy with the decorations

Ved (on the phone) hello

Rahul (happy) hi Ved

Ved (turns happy hearing his voice!) Rahul!! Kaise ho??

Rahul- mein teekh hoon, tum?

Ved - iam good,

Rahul- what are you doing there?

Ved- vo mein Dhruv ke saath decorations laga rahi thi!

Rahul - Dhruv kaun??

Ved- oh, voh kavita aunty ka ladka! He's really nice! You would have loved to meet him!

Rahul- oh! tum wahan jate hi un logo ne tumhe kaam deh diya!!

ved - Rahul aisi koi baath nahi, mein tho sirf thori madat kar rahi hoon!! aur aunty ne muje mana bhi kiya tha lekin maine hi madat karni ki zor dali!!

rahul- Well, aaj mera meeting cancel hogaya so shayed muje kuch din aur yahan par rehna parega!!

Ved (sad) kuch din wur!! Rahul tum thora Jaldi nahi a sakthe..kavita aunty tumse milne keliye bahut utsukh hai

Rahul( loud) Ved! Tum janti ho mera kaam muje mere liye kitna important hai! Aur tumhare kavita aunty muje shaadi par bhi mil sakthi hai na!!

Ved- rahul (Dhruv interrupts)

Dhruv (hapily) Vedika!!(sees her on the phone) whoops, sorry!!

Ved smiles at him as she says bye to rahul

Ved-(quietly) koi kaam tha Dhruv!!

Dhruv (happily) no acutally, aapke mummy aapko bularahi thi.

Ved- ok thanks (walks to the kitchen)

Later in the evening

Everyones getting ready for the party

Dhruvs got a goldish sherwani on...he's feeling nervous..even sweating a little

While downstairs

Nih and Rudra have matching clothes on..nih wearing a red sari and Rudra wearing a black suit with a red shirt

Ved wearing a pink and gold lehenga and umas wearing a peach sari

All the guests have arrived

Everyone comes downstairs

The fireworks just started

Nih, Rudra, tara and titli mami run ahead to see them

Ved just walks out of her room as she sees Dhruv slowly walking down the stairs

Ved (happily) arre Dhruv!! Tum fireworks nahi dehkoge??

Dhruv (nervous) uhh, you go, I'll be there in a bit!!

Ved runs ahead and joins tara

Everyone like WOW! The fireworks are so pretty

Its been 10 mins

Ved notices everyones there but Dhruv

She looks back and sees him standing by the door looking very uncomfortable

Ved like whats wrong with him

Tara turns around and sees that Ved talking about Dhruv

Tara(laughs) oh!! Bhaiya's very scared of fireworkS!!(laughs as she looks back towards the fireworks)

Ved smiles and enjoys the colors in the sky

Everyones cheering and clapping..

More guests have arrived at this point

"AAAAAAAAAHHH"

When everyone hears a pircing scream and turns around!!



Edited by moderngirl - 05 July 2006 at 11:20pm

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WOW GREAT PART!!!!! I wonder who screamed?? Actually I think it's Dhruv....but why did he scream??? LOL

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great i luved that part and finally u actually wrote the next part

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