Jab Pyar Hua Tho......(Sindoor) - Page 2

Posted: 17 years ago
great beginning!!! can't wait for the next part ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 17 years ago


Uma: Lekin Rahul beta, Kavita Aunty tumse milnai ko bauhot kaish kari thi.

Rahul: I know Aunty, lekin yeh project bauhot zaroori hai, aur agar mein yeh nahi kara, to humare company ko bauhot bara nukhsaan hogayga.

Uma: Teekh hai beta. (still disappointed) lekin hum kya karsaktai hai. Kaam to zaroori hain.

Rahul: Thanks for understanding!

A little while later, both Rahul and Sundari leave. Vedika walks Rahul to the car as Sundari is talking to Kavita inside.

Vedika: Rahul, that's not fair. Are you sure tum aa nahi saktai?

Rahul: arre baba, agar main aa sakta tha, to main aatha, lekinโ€ฆtumhe kya lagta hai, mujhe diwali aapno ke saath mananai ko dil nahi lagda. Haan? Lekin yeh mere majboori hai aur tumhe pata hai ke mere company merai sab se important hain.

Vedika: (feeling sad) Teekh hain. (gets an idea). Fine, lekin tum mujhe kal shopping lekay jaana hoga, mujhe shaadi ke liye kuch cheezai lena hai.

Rahul: Vedika, ummโ€ฆmere kal ek bauhot zaroori meeting hai, sorry. lekin aik minute, Loo mere card lo aur jakai jee bharka shopping karo.

Vedika: Kal bhi meeting, teekh hai(she takes the card and puts on a fake smile, but is still pretty disappointed).

Sundari comes out.

Sundari
: acha beta, ab hum chaltai hain.

Vedika: teekh hai aunty, bye! (they both hug)

Rahul: Bye vedika!

Vedika: Bye!

The next day, Uma and Vedika start packing as they will be staying there for a while, so Vedika can do her wedding shopping.

A few days later, its time to go. They both are on their way to Kavita's house.

In the meantime, Riazada house is up and buzzing. Everyone is trying to get things done quickly for the party.


Kavita: Titli!! Titli! Titli! Ufo yeh Titli kahan hai?? Titli!!

Titli: Haan haan sunle, Kavita didi, apke yeh cheek(yell) se mere to death he hojayge.

Kavita: Titli, baatein ban karo, aur please zara dekho agar khana sab tyaar hogaya.

Titli: haan haan, dekhti ho!

Rudra and Niharika both come downstairs.

Kavita: Arre, Niharika aur Rudra, yaha aao.

Rudra: Gee ma.

Kavita: Beta, kya tum dono kuch chise pick karsaktai ho?

Niharika: of course, kya chayai?

Kavita: Beta, tum dono jakai diya lao, hume to bauhot sarai chaiya, aur haan patakai(fireworks) bhi, aur bachoon ke liya sparklers(sry forgot how to say that in hindi).

Rudra: teekh hai ma, hum abhi jaatai hain.

They both leave.

A little while after they leave, the doorbell rings.

Kavita runs to the door to open it.

She gets a huge smile on her face.

Kavita: Uma!!! Kaisa ho, aao andar aoo!

Uma: Main teekh ho Kavita, tum batao?

Kavita: Main bhi teekh hoon.

She sees Vedika.

Vedika: Namaste aunty! (she bends down and touches her feet)

Kavita: jheete raho beta, ab batao tum kaise ho? Bauhot sundar lagri ho?

Vedika: thanks aunty, mein teekh ho.

Kavita: aao, tum dono, aake bheto.

Kavita then calls down Dhruv to meet them. (everyone else has gone out)

Kavita: Dhruv beta, zara neeche aao!

Dhruv: Coming!

Vedika is busy looking around.

Dhruv comes down.

Dhruv: Arre, Aunty aap?? Kaisa ho(bends down and touches Uma's feet)

Uma: Jeeta raho. Tum kaisa ho?

Dhruv: mein bhi teekh ho.

Uma: aik minute beta, Vedika! Zara aao

Vedika was turned around looking at the picture.

When she turned around, both Dhruv and Ved were shocked to see what they saw.

D&V: Tum?!?!?

Kavita: Kya tum dono ek doosra ko jaante ho??

Vedika: kinda, we actually bumped into each other at the mall the other day.

Uma: Oh!

Dhruv: Hi, I'm Dhruv.

Vedika: Hi, I'm Vedika, nice to meet you!

Both shake hands.

After they all meet, everyone is back to the prep.

Uma: Kavita, main aur Vedika kuch madat kare?

Kavita: nahi, aap log bas aram se bheto, mehmaan kaam nahi kartai.

Uma: Arre, yeh kaise baat hoy. Main to yeh apna ghar samajh te hu. Aur apne ghar main kaam karta haina?

Kavita: acha teekh hai, aao, mujhe thora diya sajanay ki madat karo.

Uma: Aur Vedika ko bhi kuch kaam do.

Kavita: teekh hai, ek minuteโ€ฆDhruv!

Dhruv: yes mom!

Kavita: Dhruv, wo jo mein mithai(sweets) ka order de ho, usse jake pickup karlo, aur vedika ko bhi saath leke jao, aur ha, aur decorations bhi chaiya, aur haan, phool bhi. Vedika tum jao Dhruv ke saath.

Vedika: jee aunty!

Kavita: Aur Vedika, phool tumhe choose karna, aur bauhot saara.

Vedika: teekh hai aunty!

Dhruv: So, shall we go?

Vedika: Sure!

Dhruv and Vedika both hop into Dhruv's car and proceed to the shops.


Hope you guys liked it! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
♥♥♥
Posted: 17 years ago
awesome job!!!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
kya Rahul aur Vedika ki shaadi mai kuch garbar hoyngi?
I think Dhruv and Vedika may start to love each other
Posted: 17 years ago
WICKED...HEY GUYZ JUS STARTED READIN UR FAN FIC 2DYA..ITS ROCKING!!! PLZ CONTINUE SOON...M SURE DHRUVEDIKA WILL CUM 2GEVA BT AFTA LOTS OF PROBLEMZ..AS USUAL...I DNO Y BUT M GTIN A FEELIN DIS FF GNA B A BIT LYK HUMKO DEEWANA KAR GAYE...VEDIKA WILL FALL IN LUV WIV DHRUV HAVIN BEING ALREADY ENGAGED 2 SUM1 ELSE...WELL ITS A WICKED START, WICKED STORY...CNT W8 2 READ UR NXT PARTZ SO PLZ DO CONTINUE SOON AND KEEP UP WIV DA BRILLIANT AND WICKED WORK ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by Yuvika_15


WICKED...HEY GUYZ JUS STARTED READIN UR FAN FIC 2DYA..ITS ROCKING!!! PLZ CONTINUE SOON...M SURE DHRUVEDIKA WILL CUM 2GEVA BT AFTA LOTS OF PROBLEMZ..AS USUAL...I DNO Y BUT M GTIN A FEELIN DIS FF GNA B A BIT LYK HUMKO DEEWANA KAR GAYE...VEDIKA WILL FALL IN LUV WIV DHRUV HAVIN BEING ALREADY ENGAGED 2 SUM1 ELSE...WELL ITS A WICKED START, WICKED STORY...CNT W8 2 READ UR NXT PARTZ SO PLZ DO CONTINUE SOON AND KEEP UP WIV DA BRILLIANT AND WICKED WORK ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

THX Yuvi!!๐Ÿ˜›

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Never saw humko deewana kar gaye๐Ÿ˜†

 

Posted: 17 years ago
๐Ÿ˜† al tel u da storyline sum ova tym yh..lol...but wicked ff keep up wiv da awesome work ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by moderngirl


THX Yuvi!!๐Ÿ˜›

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Never saw humko deewana kar gaye๐Ÿ˜†

 

thanks yuvi! i havent seen it either. lol. but glad u liked the fanfic.
Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks everyone for the comments!!

I still have to cont my other ff and I keep getting lazy..lol... ๐Ÿ˜†

I'll def have the next part up by wed!!! ๐Ÿ˜›

Posted: 17 years ago
k! ill have to keep up with all your FF's ๐Ÿ˜† hope i get the time ๐Ÿ˜›

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