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SS: Chotey Ki Ayegi Barat Ch:10 pg 29*COMPLETED* (Page 24)

rrd29 Goldie

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged
hey..just came across your SS... read the entire thing in one go... lovely...
Your writing is great as is your storyline and the characters are so cute..
Please PM me the next update

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fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Awesome, Superb update. Waiting for next part.

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ShiningStar18 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged

Lovely update!! :D

So he said yes! ;)
Can't wait for the next part Embarrassed

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dprover Goldie

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
awesome updates

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frenzyy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
awwsum!!! loved how u described arnav's sarcasm and feelings.. too good...

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-Grace- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged

Hellooo lovelies!

Shocked to see another update? well I couldn't help but write itLOL

And since you all have been very patient since the beginning and since I've been posting chapters really late from chapter 2-6 I thought I should give you all a treatEmbarrassed

This chapter is dedicated to Crazy_soul, Suchi.R, Sophia21 as they have been one of the major supports since the beginning of this story Embarrassed

Chapter 8

I paced back and forth in my room, punching the left fist in the right palm.

What the hell was that.

She was dancing with him on a ridiculous bollywood number and my circus residents expect me to enjoy?


I opened my laptop in the hope of getting some work done since Aman was too busy with his new job to pay any importance to the old AR.

Despite the continuous struggle I could not focus on the reports made for the clients.

But I tried again. It was at least better than sitting in the show downstairs.


The door flew open and stepped in Anjali Singh Raizada also known as crazy di.

"Chotey" she crossed her arms against her chest.

I closed the laptop and stood in front of her, mirroring her gesture


"hum aakhri baar keh rahe hain sudhar jao" she said sternly.

"main aakhri baar keh raha hoon mera sukoon mat cheeno"

"chalo neeche! Tumhari shaadi ka function hai..aur dhoola sahib ghayab!"

For god's sake cut this dhoola crap now.

"and you left Lavanya alone..chalo abhi!" she said with a raised eye brow and dragged me out of the room. Literally.

To hell with Lavanya.

And so I was forcefully seated on that same chair again.

And there she appeared from behind the curtains once again.

Ofcourse Aman appeared only seconds later.

Zara dholki bajao goriyo 
Mere sang sang gao goriyo 
Sharmayo na lagaakey mehndi 
Zara taaliyan bajao goriyo 

He teased her and she batted eyelashes.

Oh god!

Why are women obsessed with batting eye lashes there's nothing cute or adorable about it. Not even when she's doing it. No not when she's with him.

Yeh ghari hai milan ki 
Aik sajan se sajan ki 
Yeh ghari hai milan ki 
Aik sajan se sajan ki 

Milan? I can see that alright.

Geet aisa koi gao goriyo 
Aisi dholki bajao goriyo 
Zara innki bhi chaal dekhlo 
Aaj inko bhi nachao goriyo 

He can't even utter a word in office and here, look at the mad man!

Aisa hoga, naach gaana 
Jhoom uthay ga, yeh zamana 
Aaj tum bhi, aazmana 
Hur adhayay, dil banana 

Aisa hoga, naach gaana 
Jhoom uthay ga, yeh zamana 
Aaj tum bhi, aazmana 
Hur adhayay, dil banana 

Zara jaldi se jao goriyo 
Koi aaina tho lao goriyo 
Innhay naaz hai bohot khud per 
Inhey aaina dikhao goriyo 

The two continued to dance in sync. Aman I am so firing you.  

Kisi bedh ko bulao goriyo 
Nafs inki dikhao goriyo 
In ko husn per ghuroor hai bohot 
Inka bara neechay lao goriyo 

 Not even Di can save you now.

And no need to call her gorgeous in every sentence only I have that right! And we all know she is beautiful.

Hum ghalat they hum ney maana 
Tum bhi waapus, leylo thaana 
Larhnay ka yeh kub hai mauqa 
Kya kahay ga yeh zamana 

Kisi kazi ko bulao goriyo 
Abhi faisla karao goriyo 
Kahaan milay ko humsa dulha 
Inhey dulhan banao goriyo 

She looked at me and hinted at Lavanya. What the hell.

That sparkle in her eyes. Oh my.

Aap kartay hain kaisee baatein 
Aap kari hain kaisee baatein 
Aray inhay samjhao goriyo 
Ab sulha karao goriyo


Never even paid me half the amount of that much respect! What is he her grandfather?

Fine baitho Aman ke saath!


With that I left the hall once again determined not to let anyone disturb me.




I started watering my plants, at least these creatures are loyal!

When I heard the heavy fabric of her dress moving against the air.


"what was that?" she said with her hands on her hips.


Bring it on.


"what!" I said without looking.

"is that the way to behave?"

"what do you want! And I will behave the way I want"


Screw you.


"you gotta have some manners Arnav...Arnav Singh Raizada"


My name never sounded this good.

Focus ASR. You. Are. Mad. Do. Not. Get. Melted.


"shut up" I said rolling my eyes.



"whats wrong with you?" she said with a less strict tone.


I kept quiet.

"listen I know you are getting married for the first time. So is Lavanya."


Thanks for telling me, I would have never known.


"I know its all knew, people do get nervous but you are doing a bit too much'besides it's not like you will leave your family and live at Lavanya's house, so stop acting like a cry baby"


"you don't understand so don't even talk" I said in a low voice, with a serious face.

Hoping she would get the hint for once.


"awhh chotey emotional ho raha hai apni shaadi par"

There you go, she went in her hyper mode again.

 and all hopes came crashing down.

How can she never get mad no matter how I hard I try?


"yahi soch rahe ho na ke mujhe ab tak ghussa kyun nahi aya? Despite your countless attempts?...well main un logon ki baton ka bura nahi manati jinki upar ki story khali hoti hai" she winked and left like a wind.



How did she know what I was thinking?

Damn. There is definitely a connection now!


I know I know you all wanted romance but I at this point I cant just show it out of nowhere. I promise there will be romance in the upcoming updates, it will develop, slowly but surelyLOL

Don't forget to comment and buddy me for PMs

Thank You!

Edited by -Grace- - 22 November 2012 at 9:10am

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InvisibleSmile IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Okay i caught with the last few chapters that i missed, and i bow to thee, your sarcasm is WOW!Stern Smile I wish i could write like that, but you CAN write like that. So back to the updates, Arnav's realization of what he feels towards Khushi is dawning on him, and so what if Aman and Khushi happen to make him a little jealous! LOL But i understand his confusion also. And the part where he realizes, he is actually getting married to Lavanya ROFL Like seriously, your half way through your shaadi...rasam and then you realize. But sooner then later is always better. I just hope he confesses soon. And i like how you portrayed khushi here, she is a very strong and willful girl!

I am so sorry for the reserves and not commenting. Today i just felt like reading something funny...and wasting some time! SleepyLOL

PS: all these songs that you use, LOVE them!

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rrd29 Goldie

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Nice update... but really really waiting for Arshi romance...

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