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ShiningStar18 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Amazing chapter!!
Finally you updated :D
Loved reading it :)

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love.piyali IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Dear it was awesome...plz plz plz pm me weneva u was way too amazin...i'd love to readd so plz pm me ...

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memories_im IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged
read it all in one go and loved it :D
Please do pm for the future updates
Sent u a buddy request :)

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
amazing update, just loved it! updt. soon=)

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norisha Goldie

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
gr8 update

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mahi530 Newbie

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
Yay! You finally updated! :) I love Arnav and Khushi's interactions and conversations in this chapter(but I always love their conversations)! And Haha Arnav Juergen realized he's getting married to Lavanaya! And I love how you portray Arnav's thoughts! Please update the next chapter soon! Smile

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:54am | IP Logged
loved arnav-khushi convoWink

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 5:36pm | IP Logged

Hellooo lovelies !

shocked to see an update so soon?LOL 

well I wasn't planning to post this chapter today and it is shorter than it was intended to be, but I thought I'd post now as the next time I would get to post would be next month or soEmbarrassed

So something is better than nothing right?

This update is dedicated to butterfly06, KSG_luv, bhaktiii, kamalapushpa 

for being such a supportive audience and always reading<3

Buddy me for PMs and dont forget to commentWink


Chapter 7


I couldn't sleep all night due to some strange uneasiness. I was pacing back and forth in my room unable to decide why was I feeling so uncomfortable.


"choteyyy choteyyy" Di yelled.


Without knocking she entered my room.


"chotey im sooo excited today" she said clasping her hands under her chin and looking at me dreamily.


When is she not excited? Tell me something new


"what happened di" I said blankly.


"uff mere boring bhai! Aaj tumhara sangeet hai!"


ok that's why I was feeling restless …another nonsensical ritual. Oh God.

One more ritual means one step closer to the wedding.



"aur please time pe tayar hojana, it'll be great fun!" she winked and left the room.

Thank god.


Ok sangeet tonight, means Lavanya and family will be here.

Knowing my circus residents, they will surely drag me on the floor.


Knowing my uncontrollable emotions I might do something.

Knowing Ms Wedding Planner she might pull my leg

Knowing Ms Sundar and Susheel she might start crying

Oh God. What do I do?




I glanced at the clock and it read 6 pm. The sangeet was supposed to start 7 pm.


My heart beat started to accelerate as the hands on the clock moved.


I have never felt this unsure before. To be honest I don't even know what it is. Why am I so uncomfortable with the whole marriage thing now? When I clearly knew I was getting married to Lavanya and that I wouldn't be home all day to tolerate her so it would be fine.


That's it!

Arnav Singh Raizada never feels confused! This is definitely one of the side effects of living in this circus and being Anjali Singh Raizada's younger brother. Yeah that's all.


I inhaled and exhaled.

Breathe in. Breathe out.


I closed my eyes


"Choteeeyyy get ready you've got ten minutes!" Di yelled from outside.


Staring at the lifeless kurta on the bed I shook my head.


Beofre Di yelled again and interrupted my much needed thought process I decided to adore that by wearing it.


It is now 6: 45 pm and here staring at my reflection in the full length mirror.


Heartbeat was now on a race, breathing was coming in a rush.


*knock knock*


"come in" I said checking my phone.


I could feel my breath going away, with each step she took forward.

I forgot to even blink. My heartbeat grew louder at its own accord.


She was wearing a simple lehenga with vertical strips of teal, blue and purple. The heavily embroidered duppatta was tugged in at her waist and coming around her back fell over to her other shoulder, slightly covering her exposed skin.


I didn't realize when my phone dropped from my hands and hit the floor.

She kept coming forward with a straight face. Oh no.


Does she have a bad news?


She stopped right in front of me.

I could smell her peach flavored perfume.


It was heaven.


"someone's looking handsome" she hid a smile.


I could feel the heat rising in my cheeks.

Oh my god. Am I blushing? I hope not.



"you are looking nice too"


Damn it. Nice is not word. She's killing my breaths!


"I know" she said casually.


"so…ready for sangeet?"



where did that come from? Sangeet? Are you kidding me.  -.-


"what do you mean what?...its your sangeet remember" she said raising eyebrows to make a point.


"I know!" I said and turned around in frustration.

Seriously. Does she never have anything else to talk about.



whoa! Was that hot or what.


Arnav Singh Raizada was the definition of hot today.

Solid teal kurta with black shalwar. Hair were gelled and slicked back.




There he stood, wide shoulders, face held high. Looking at me directly in the eye.

I felt a little short circuit occurring in the corner of my heart.

What was that?

Oh no.




so the so called sangeet started and I was forced to sit on one of the huge chairs placed specially for the bride and groom.

Lavanya was sitting with me and enjoying the performances with full spirit.


Kitne aaram se baithi hai. Does she not know she is getting married to a man who doesn't even know her likes and dislikes. Yeh hi mana kar deti hum dono bach jaate.




And look at that woman, dancing like her life depends on it

looking at me every once in a while, and that while i feel my insides melting...she knows she has that effect on me!

….And Aman…I'll take care of you later.

How dare he dance with her!


These two will drive me insane. She is supposed to be sitting with me! And he is supposed to be taking care of AR! But no here they are doing exactly opposite to what they should be doing




I got up and left unable to take the torture anymore.




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